Story Development – A Space Adventure

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I am posting this beginning of my new story to discuss aspects of story development, which I hope will take place in the comments section. I posted earlier versions of it almost two years ago, and this is updated with the inclusion of a second chapter. This is a rough draft and is subject to heavy editing, so feel free to make suggestions.

In the comments section, I hope we can talk about how I employed the Hero’s Journey elements that I discussed in earlier posts such as the following:

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