“It’s Complicated”: A Brief Review of IRON FIST

Originally, I was going to call this review “I don’t even know what I’m doing or saying until it’s taken the wrong way” but that’s too long for an auto-share on Twitter, and it’s only said once, while the characters in IRON FIST say “It’s complicated” a bajillion times.


So this is going to be a brief review, as promised, although I usually have more to say about stories that don’t work than stories that do.


The first thing I’ll say is that, while the show is not great, it’s better than its Rotten Tomatoes score would suggest. (It’s 18% from the critics, although the audience gives it an 83, which is a solid B-.) It’s not even the worst season of Marvel/Netflix made so far, which would be S2 of DAREDEVIL. Like that season, it has some terrific performances, compelling characters, and real tension. It also has genuine problems.


First, as I mentioned before, put me down as someone who thinks the show would have been better (and better-received) if they’d cast an Asian-American actor as Danny. This isn’t a criticism of Jones; I think he does good work with what he’s given here, but the show would have been deeper and more complex with that change.


Second, like every Marvel/Netflix show, they don’t quite have enough story for 13 episodes, and it feels a bit padded. With JESSICA JONES (the best of the shows, imo) that padding is near the end where the pace should be building. It’s smart of IF to do what LUKE CAGE did, and slow things down at the start.


Because apparently every one of these shows needs padding somewhere. I’m hoping an 8 episode season of DEFENDERS will do away with this entirely.


So the early episodes are repetitive, and while it makes sense for the Meachums to have Danny committed, did we need an entire episode for that?


Third, it seems a strange choice to put a hero like Iron Fist into yet another neo-noir storyline, but once we get past the obligatory acknowledgement of his identity, momentum begins to build and the plots surrounding the supporting cast take shape.


Fourth, the general consensus is that Colleen Wing is a great character. That’s not wrong.


Fifth, a lot of folks are hitting Jones because the fights aren’t what we’d hope for in a show about a mystically-powered martial artist, and Jones isn’t a martial artist. But then, neither was Charlie Cox before he was cast as Daredevil, and neither was Keanu Reeves when he was cast in THE MATRIX.


What those actors did have was time to practice the choreography. As Jones has said in interviews, sometimes he only had 15 minutes before the shoot to learn the fight scenes, and you are not going to get good action scenes. They needed to give the action the attention it needed, because with a hero like Iron Fist, it’s not something you can half-ass.


Even worse are the action scenes that are badly framed and shot. I can understand dimming the lights to disguise the stunt doubles, since Danny Rand doesn’t have a mask or giant Jessica Jones hair, but we still want to see what’s happening, and see it clearly.


The fight in the hospital records room is perhaps the worse of the lot (and it comes so early in the show). It’s choppy, fake, and routinely violates the 180 rule, making it hard to follow. Later fights work better.


When the second season comes (and I’ll bet one no-prize that it’ll happen) they’ll need a show-runner willing to give the action scenes the time and energy they deserve.


Sixth, Marvel/Netflix continue to create really interesting antagonists. Loved every moment that David Wenham was onscreen.


Finally, I was interested in Danny Rand. Yeah, he’s a privileged fool in a lot of places, and he’s severely damaged, not just by the plane crash where his parents were killed, but by his time in K’un Lun. His time in the monastery turned him into a superhero, but at a terrible cost. He’s a fucked up dude, and he’s constantly stepping on his own dick.


At the same time, it’s clear he’s trying to navigate his different identities and do the right thing. Once the story turns away from “Can Danny prove his identity?” to “Can Danny stop The Hand?/find allies he can trust?/reconcile his dual identies?” the story works.


So yes, there are problems with the show, but as the reviewer at Forbes said, it’s a stumble, not a face-plant. It’s not the best of the Marvel shows, but it never sinks to the ludicrous plot points of DAREDEVIL S2 or the unconvincing character beats of something like ANT-MAN. Instead, it’s somewhat slow, unconvincing in places, and too repetitive.


I expect history to treat this season more kindly than the present, and I expect an AA Iron Fist when the MCU gets rebooted.

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Published on March 23, 2017 13:21
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message 1: by Chris (new)

Chris My honest opinion is that there just isn't any excuse for the poor writing. The first episode was, "Talk to me. No. Talk to me. No. Talk to me. No." Ad nauseam. The character wasn't written with enough intelligence to try another approach. Second episode: "I need to get out of here. No. I need to get out of here. No." Rinse and repeat. Was Iron Fist really that dumb in the comics? Also, the failure to cast a martial artist in that role is beyond lazy. It's egregious. I'm terrified of what they're doing with the Defenders. The Defenders in the Marvel universe were always Dr. Strange leading whoever else to save the day. It seems that Netflix is assembling a team of second rates and branding it as the Defenders.


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Harry Connolly Chris wrote: "My honest opinion is that there just isn't any excuse for the poor writing. The first episode was, "Talk to me. No. Talk to me. No. Talk to me. No." Ad nauseam. The character wasn't written with en..."

Except the first episode didn't repeat, it escalated. The first time Danny goes to see the Meachums, he's bright and cheerful and expects to be acknowledged immediately. The second time he tells Joy about some of their history together; Joy is slightly more convinced but brushes him off because he admits to being in her home. Plus, she's upset at the way he approached her on the street.

The third time is Danny's angriest and most invasive approach yet, and he tells Ward things that only Danny would know. Ward is convinced he's the real deal, which is why he tries to have Danny killed and does have him committed.

Also, when they cast Charlie Cox as Daredevil, himself a ninja and martial arts master, Cox had no training. Neither had Keanu Reeves before The Matrix. It's a common thing and it works fine, as long as they have time for the fight choreography.

They didn't. DD had a year from the time the showrunner was announced to shooting day. Iron Fist had half that, and it shows. They needed to do another couple of drafts on the scripts to iron out the dialog, clarify the through lines, and find better ways to make Harold a villain. Then, during the shoot, they needed to spend more time on the fighting.

I'm not trying to tell you that you should like the show. God forbid. I'm saying I thought it was flawed but interesting, and in the future people will think modern reviews were too harsh.


message 3: by Chris (new)

Chris Having grown up on Marvel comics in the 1970's, I really wanted to like it. I did. I gave it my best effort, but in the end, the writing was the real disappointment. I could have forgiven their casting choice if they'd just written better scripts, and polished the final product a bit more. I know they have the talent to do it, and worst case they could have just refreshed the stories that were already written for them in the 1970's. I do feel like Ward was a great cast, as he really does a great job portraying a sociopath. His acting kept me on the hook longer than any other aspect of the show.

For the record, your review was the only one I'd read, and that's what prompted me to give the show a chance.


message 4: by Harry (new)

Harry Connolly Chris wrote: "Having grown up on Marvel comics in the 1970's, I really wanted to like it. I did. I gave it my best effort, but in the end, the writing was the real disappointment. I could have forgiven their cas..."

My take is definitely in the minority. Sorry for leading you astray. :)


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