Show and Tell Exercises

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In a recent post, I said writers should both show and tell in fiction.

I gave an example of re-writing narrative summary (telling) into an action scene (showing).

Now, it's your turn. Select one or more of the narrative summaries below and re-write as an action scene. If you'd like feedback from me (and anyone who'd like to join in), post your scene in a comment.

1.  Thelma was very angry.  She told John she never wanted to see him again.  He had betrayed her once and she wouldn't give him the cha