Son of a Pitch Round One

ROUND ONE!
A chance to refine your query and first 250 words. Post your query and 250 words on your blog then leave a direct link in the comments below. Please leave feedback on the author's blog, and for a minimum of three other queries and first 250. 

All feedback left in the comments below will be deleted.


***You don't have to participate in this round to join Round 2. It is highly recommended to get that extra polish before the voting round.***
GOOD LUCK!