Hello to goodreads members,

I have recently submitted a revised version of 'A Diamond In My Pocket' to kindle for grammar, typo's and sentence structure. The story plot remains the same, so no need to re-read. Overall, I'm getting great response to the story line, some calling it unique, original, and decent. A few reviewers cut apart the editing flaws but still gave it 3 stars because the story line was alright. Honestly, as an Indie author, I just want to share my stories with others who like to be entertained. Yes, I should have had a better edit from the get-go, and no, I was not surprised at the negativity by the grammar Nazi types. Oh well, I'll learn from my mistakes and move on. For those of you who liked my book despite the flaws; Thank You! It makes me happy to know I've shared a decent, fun story, and you enjoyed it. For Grammar/Typo readers, I'll make sure my future books are edited before publishing to better serve your tastes.

I'm working on the second in the Unaltered series called, 'A Diamond In My Heart'. No release date yet, but I'm typing vigorously because the story wants out of my head. (I've wondered if other authors experience the same thing with their stories, I hope they do, that way I won't feel so weird.) I will have it edited thoroughly though. ;)

Here's a bit of the storyline:

***Warning: spoiler alert. If you haven't read book #1, you might want to avoid whats below***

~Calli's world is about to get much larger. She'll learn where Maetha's powers actually come from and will wonder whether or not she can trust Maetha.
~A new cosmic power will surface in one of Calli's classmates; one not contained in the Sanguine Diamond.
~Someone is systematically kidnapping the amulet wearers from each clan trying to round up all the shards of the diamond; but they can't seem to find that last piece.

Thanks again to my readers. If you haven't already, consider writing an honest review on amazon. It would help other potential reader to know more about the book, and I'd greatly appreciate it!

Lorena Angell
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