Making the heart pound

Zenyatta


In
an action or dramatic scene, one in which the emotions are high and the reader is on the
edge of the seat, the mood is tense, the writing tight. Define the emotional goal of the scene. Use all the senses, the
coppery taste of blood, the cold sting of the rain, the smell of old fish.
Limit the number of adjectives (descriptive words). Cut any that aren’t
absolutely necessary. Find