Potential Pitfalls of Deep POV

I’m a reader who finds authors who use deep point of view create characters I can connect with on a much deeper level than with a more distant point of view. Therefore, as an author, I prefer to write in a deeper more intimate point of view.

There are some challenges, as with any approach to writing. One of my critique partners hit on a good one when she sent feedback on my most recent chapter.

In it, my characters were in a café, and it was one where customers place their orders at the count...