A National Anthem to Reflect a Sadder Time

Oh say, can you see by the dawn's early light
What so proudly we once hailed,
But somehow, we've lost sight.

The marriage vow used to say
"Till death do we part!"
Today the marriage lasts until the first fight starts.

News of a child to come was once considered a thrill.
Today an unborn life is ended with a knife or pill.

Protesters once carried signs, waved flags and sang inspiring songs.
Today they damage property and shout foul language.
That's just wrong!

Too many love their neighbors as long as they are white.
They prefer people of color be kept away, far out of sight.

Oh say, can you see by the dawn's early light
What so proudly we once hailed?
But somehow, we've lost sight.
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Published on November 12, 2016 08:04
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message 1: by Alicia (new)

Alicia Ehrhardt Very moving, Jim, and I'm happy to see your sentiments. And to echo most of them.

The only one I'd disagree with, oddly enough, is that marriage used to be a panacea. People stuck together who now just separate, children or no, but I've seen too many friends and a couple of family members try to keep an abusive one going because they made a promise - and their spouse didn't keep it.

I think we need to support people far more during the time they are making their choices - before they put themselves in a situation that has red flags all over it. (And maybe the kids could learn to listen.)

The nation is becoming more diverse by the day; I for one welcome that. My kids' 8 greatgrandparents all came from somewhere else. I tell them they're lucky to be alive - all those people could have stayed home. In case you're curious, I'm a tall blue-eyed blonde - the epitome of 'white.' And happy to have grown up in Mexico with that side of my huge extended family.

I used to be very proud to be an American; I hope I will be again. This election has brought out the worst in too many people - and not from scratch.

I plan to do what I can.


message 2: by Jim (last edited Nov 12, 2016 11:05AM) (new)

Jim Vuksic Alicia wrote: "Very moving, Jim, and I'm happy to see your sentiments. And to echo most of them.

The only one I'd disagree with, oddly enough, is that marriage used to be a panacea. People stuck together who now..."


Alicia,

I do agree that no one should ever remain in an abusive or loveless relationship. The intent of the specific reference in the blog post was aimed at those who rush into marriage for superficial reasons and seek to end it merely because of equally superficial reasons.

Thank you for remaining a loyal follower of the blog and, once again, expending the time and effort to contribute your personal opinion. It is always welcome and appreciated.

Jim Vuksic


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