Rejection notes – no.32 in a series

Another interesting rejection – so much more fun than the standard, this-didn’t-quite-grab-me letter (I’m looking at you, John Joseph Adams!).

Edoardo,

I just finished with To Sail the Eden Sea. I’m sorry we won’t be offering it a place in our anthology.

The picture you paint with  your words is impressive. I could almost feel myself smelling the salt marsh. But what happened for me was that too many things were all going on so I wasn’t able to follow what was happening. House of wonder, dust, getting into a boat… god food.. too much all at once for a short story.