The first cut is the deepest


I've made the 1st draft of the 5th draft (got that?), and my cut file is getting close to the manuscript in size: 


cut file: 62,000 words


manuscript: 86,000 words


My theory is that when the cut file equals the manuscript in size, the novel will be finished


I instructed my last editor that I wanted the novel to be shorter. (Shorter is better, if it can be done.) I asked her to suggest things that could be cut: and she did, with excellent judgement. 


Of course each cut hurts! I'm attached to these scenes, these characters. They've survived countless revisions.


It's never easy, but it's often essential. 


I remember vividly making my first significant cut to my first novel (The Many Lives & Secret Sorrows of Josephine B.) I walked into the living room and announced to my husband, "I just cut my favourite scene." I felt both stunned and proud. I felt it was a rite of passage—that in doing this, I'd somehow become a real writer. 


The wonderful writer Penelope Fitzgerald routinely cut her manuscripts by half. She is a excellent model to follow. 


So: be brave, get out the bandages and rye, and cut. Be ruthless. Your novel will be stronger for it. 


[Just be sure to put all your cuts in a file; they make excellent compost.]



It looks like plans are going ahead for me to go to France next month to be interviewed for a documentary that's being made about Josephine. Exciting!


How perfect that Ed, my wonderful Romanian typist, will have finished keyboarding the Trilogy for Sandra Gulland Ink (my e-publishing venture), so I will have reread them. It has been a Very Long Time since I've been in Josephine's world.


It will be impossible for me to read the Trilogy without making some changes—but I promise not to cut

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Published on July 28, 2011 10:00
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message 1: by Mary (new)

Mary I enjoyed this article, Sandra. I totally agree with you about cuts improving a novel. They are so hard to do, but so very necessary. I like the idea of having a file to keep the cuts in, so you can take some satisfaction from seeing how much has been taken out!


message 2: by Genni (new)

Genni Gunn Sometimes, too, those fragments and scenes can morph into something else, or appear transformed in another work.


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