How much is too much POV?

Last month I talked about my early investigations into a style of writing called “deep POV”. You can find the blog here. I concluded by saying that I would certainly give it a go, and so I will.

In response, I’ve been looking at a lot of detailed principles (as outlined in Marcy Kennedy’s excellent book: Deep POV in Fiction), and applying those to Mandestroy. It’s fair to say that the results have led to numerous edits already (at least 15% of the book has changed!), and though some of it is...