First Day of Sorrow

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First day of school,

First day of sorrow.

190 more days at that old dump

And he’ll be back tomorrow.


After a wonderful summer holiday, we sent son no.1, with his satchel and shining morning face, creeping like a snail unwillingly to school. Son no.2 to follow tomorrow.


(And, yes, I know the original quote doesn’t have the indefinite article before ‘snail’, but an eleven syllable line works much better here as the subject is supposed to be sorrowful. And it reads better too!)

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Published on September 06, 2016 01:30
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