Here's Where I Screwed Up: Salted (pt. 2)

Back for more! In my last post, we discussed how I screwed up my debut novel's cover, then doubled down on the sequel.
Here's the thing - cover design is just one part of the process.
You can have the most gorgeous covers in the world, but if the editing isn't there and the story doesn't hook your reader, then what're you left with?
Nada, Jack.
In this pt. 2 post about where Iscrewed up, I thought to share with you why I made some changes to Salted and (hopefully) made it a better, clearer read f...