"When asked to describe something, most people will tell you what it looks like. If a scene is..."

“When asked to describe something, most people will tell you what it looks like. If a scene is feeling bland, look for opportunities to incorporate the other senses.

 

What does his hair smell of? What’s that taste in her mouth? How does their hand feel? And no, dialogue doesn’t cover hearing. Tell us what it sounds like for your character to be nervous, joyful, determined, or lonely. Scents are associated with memory and can be an especially powerful tool for bringing your reader into the scene.”

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Alex Gino loves glitter, ice cream, gardening, awe-ful puns, and stories that reflect the diversity and complexity of being alive. George is Alex’s debut.

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