plus ça change...

Found a post from 2004 when I was still on Critters. This is some of the contradictory feedback I got on one of my first stories, "Galatea."


Master Tan's broken English is great, very authentic/is stereotypical and inconsistent 
The conflict between Justin and Quinn is great, well done/there is no discernible conflict in the story 
The development of Quinn's character is moving and believable/