Now for chap 7

Yay! My editor sent me Chapter 7 and I just finished correcting the edits for it. The chapter could still use some more work-too much fuller evidently-but some of that is to set up situations for the next book. And I wanted a chapter where not much happened to give NA and the reader a breather. One critic thought my first book about NA had too much action so I thought I could cut down a little.

One fight with a unicorn but it turned out good in the end.

More missing commas, some words that needed changing but some of those were not bad or the wrong words. My editor showed me how to make it sound better. A couple of words with letters missing-yikes for that. Some words and sentences were not really needed after all too so they got deleted.