Reviews from Vol. 1 and improvement

Hey, guys! I've finally graduate from high school and I'm finally in the world. Anyway, I've seen some of the reviews on my novel, and I will agree to them on the most part.

I thought that I thoroughly proofread and fixed all my errors, but I guessed they sort of just slipped out. Sorry about that. It's a learning process for me also, and I promised to do better, and to the best of my ability.

With that in my mind, Vol 2. should be better pacing, and less grammatical errors, if any at all. I hope this can be a series that can thrive, and encourage others to write as well.

Until next time!