Sequel: Approaching the Well of Still Time

So I’ve been working quite a bit on the sequel to Falling Down the Aether Sky. It was sort of a mud hut day. The weather was gloriously overcast and cool for May 1, International Worker’s Day. So after laundry and a few other things, I began writing again. Although the book is basically written, I have been thoroughly rereading and working on inconsistencies and plot defects. I found a major problem with Refat encountering DeLote. Refute is far to young to have met DeLote in this manner. So I have begun to expand upon just how Refat originally found the Bookmobile. Inside it he finds a diary of the previous owner, DjinnDjinn McVey. He is reading it and this is the main part of chapter 3. DjinnDjinn and J’Qwan capture DeLote just after his tweeted partner is killed. DeLote relates how he is broken from his tween on a raid to the Morman Templeland Trust.