This was a horror novella. It starts with Peter (who has ...

This was a horror novella. It starts with Peter (who has problem with money and family). Peter was lured by a old time partner in crime for a new job. Work promised money. But, Peter agreed to do it because his friend’s son was lost during the surveillance (he liked the boy[young man] too). And from there on it’s all about plans gone wrong and existence falling into horror.

I think the story wasn’t bad, but I have a few complains about the storytelling. Lots of metaphors and long sentences we...