StoryADay, Day 3 - My First Drabble

Today's StoryADay challenge was to write a drabble. A drabble is a story of 100 words. This is what I ended up with for my first attempt. Your feedback would be appreciated:
When I Became
“First, there must always be magic,” she said. 
She glowed in concentration as she held my hand. Her power searched through me for whatever power of mine lay dormant. I hadn't believed when she told me I had something, but she'd since taught me trust. 
Then came the moment I became something else, something new. It was so distinct. It felt like both a tearing and an awakening. It was only then I realized I wasn't ready.
It terrified me.
She recoiled. So I was powerful, then.
Since I could, I rose into the air and decided to take everything.
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Published on May 03, 2016 19:47
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