First Draft of the Ending

As I was emptying all my closets and drawers I came across this piece of paper that has the very first draft of the very end of Lost Edens. It was a really nice reminder to me as I'm struggling with writing Dunloe Avenue (the follow-up to Lost Edens) that first drafts have their purpose but thank God there are final drafts (and all the drafts in between).

I promise you, the end of Lost Edens is much, much improved over this first draft, but you can clearly see where the idea first came from: