Life Lessons short story available
I've posted the short And to All a Good Night; Life Lessons # 1 1/2 in the writing section of Goodreads here. I hope the formatting worked out. It took me a while to realize I had to break it into two chapters to fit the length limitations. (Picture befuddled author uploading three times, going "why does the end of this always get chopped off?", before the aha moment.) So part 1 and part 2 are just the two halves of the story, with no particular reason other than length to be separated.
http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/5...
I'd love comments, criticism, etc, since the next book is in editing. (I can still fix things!) In the meantime I hope you enjoy another brief look at these two guys.
Incidentally, as of June 25th, I have added And to All a Good Night onto Smashwords as a free download.
http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/...
http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/5...
I'd love comments, criticism, etc, since the next book is in editing. (I can still fix things!) In the meantime I hope you enjoy another brief look at these two guys.
Incidentally, as of June 25th, I have added And to All a Good Night onto Smashwords as a free download.
http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/...
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(last edited Jun 19, 2011 06:49PM)
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Jun 19, 2011 06:48PM
I just finished reading and loved it! I don't have any criticisms. If anything the writing is better and the story really builds up the suspense waiting for your next book. I wanted to write a review but it's not listed as a book on Goodreads. Are you going to add it? Or I would be happy to add it for you if you like. Just as an example Jordan Castillo Price adds her shorts from the Psycop series like this: http://www.goodreads.com/book/show/69...
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MandyM wrote: "I just finished reading and loved it! I don't have any criticisms. If anything the writing is better and the story really builds up the suspense waiting for your next book. I wanted to write a revi..."OK, I'm totally inept with the tech stuff. I would love to add it as a book to make it easier to find and get more feedback. If you have suggestions how to do that, maybe message me?
I'm glad you liked it. There was one bit (about Tony's friend) that I really wanted to put in Life Lessons but it didn't flow right so I had fun fitting it in here.
Yes you're right. The only thin missing from life lessons was more grief from Tony about losing his friend. It's good closure here. I'll add the book and msg you with the details.
MandyM wrote: "Book link: http://www.goodreads.com/book/show/11..."I'm constantly amazed by the kindness of strangers-turned-friends on this site. Thank you Mandy. That was above and beyond the call.
No probs. I have an ulterior motive... I want you to concentrate on writing. And don't think I've forgotten about that werewolf series either! LOL
