Vlog: First to Final Draft: BEYOND THE RED

You asked, I answered: today I compare the first draft of BEYOND THE RED's first page versus the final published draft.




RELATED LINKS:

All About BEYOND THE RED (Part 1)On Editing (YouTube Playlist)
What kinds of revisions do you tend to have to focus on with your drafts?
Twitter-sized bite: 

What changes between 1st & final drafts of published books? @Ava_Jae vlogs BEYOND THE RED's 1st vs. final opening. (Click to tweet)