DOCTOR V THE COMMENTARY, PART 2!This page is the reformatted...

DOCTOR V THE COMMENTARY, PART 2!

This page is the reformatted version of this page, and gosh it took a while to figure out how to do it OK. Once again I'm questioning if I really should keep all the art the same. This page was a really wordy and it needed an extra panel in there somewhere.

It came out okay in the end, but since the panel arrangement ended up on the funky side, I made sure to arrange the word balloons in a path the that can guide the readers eyes around properly, something that took me a long time to figure out how to do.

I wonder how high up on the porn scale people generally consider disembodied erect penises. I mean, he's not attached to a man or there for any sexual purposes. Just a friendly penis, saying "hello!"

edit: I just noticed I edited and reduced the size of the doctor's lips in panel 3 sometime in the past. The file I used to make this new arrangement used older lineart, apparently. The lips do look a bit big there, but not THAT bad, should I fix it again? Eh, I dunno.