DOCTOR V THE COMMENTARY (part 1)The first story was done at...

DOCTOR V THE COMMENTARY (part 1)

The first story was done at around the same time I did Chapter 12 of Girly, when my art was about as cartoony and squashy and stretchy as its ever been.

Though I still draw like that, more or less, I toned it down quite a bit. Jennifer is still the most goofily-drawn patient in the comic. As I said before, the reformatted version of this story won't have altered linework, but I will be givin' Jennifer a nose. I consider noseless characters to be one of those things that ended with Girly.

While the new stories will still be pretty silly, I won't be having characters melodramatically shouting their lines while facing the camera anymore. That was a bit over the top, I think!

Stay tuned for more commentaries.