Good and Evil in Stories

I’ve shied away from writing about writing, since I’m still learning myself, but I had a thought recently that I figured could use some fleshing out.  So here goes.


There have long been voices decrying “simplistic” models of good and evil in books and movies (and, I suppose, video games).  Tolkien is often mentioned (though anyone who calls the morality of Tolkien’s tales “simplistic” either hasn’t really read them, or wasn’t paying much attention when they were), particularly in regard to the orcs.  Interestingly, this was a problem that Tolkien himself wrestled with.  His own Catholic epistemology denied that any thinking being could be created as “evil.”  Evil is a defect, not a positive characteristic.  He tried to work out the nature of the orcs until he died, and never quite figured it out (see The Later Silmarillion Part 1: Morgoth’s Ring.)


One sees much more simplistic approaches in later works, that seem to regard “good” and “evil” as faction labels more than anything else.  “This group/band/nation/race are the Good Guys, and that group/band/nation/race are the Bad Guys.”  Some of this has doubtless been helped along by the atrocities of the Second World War, the Gulag, and the Islamists, who commit unapologetically evil actions.  But “Good” and “Evil” are concepts, rather than badges.


Perhaps we have become accustomed to equating “enemy” with “evil.”  Such is not always the case.  Two groups can be enemies without either one being inherently evil.


Many of those who decried the earlier moral simplicity of struggles between Good and Evil have endeavored to subvert the tropes.  In fact, “subverting genre tropes” is presently all the rage in publishing.  Sometimes this can be done well, where there is a sympathetic character on both sides.  All too often lately, however, it seems to have devolved into making everyone involved an irredeemable bastard, effectively denying the existence of Good altogether.


It’s something I’ve tried to explore a little with Kill YuanShang Wei Feng Kung is a ruthless individual, in service to a totalitarian regime that is the heir of the horrific slaughter of the Cultural Revolution, but I daresay most would be hard-pressed to describe him as evil.  He’s doing what he sees as his duty.  That doesn’t mean he’ll hesitate to kill Dan Tackett if he sees it necessary, nor will Dan hesitate to put a bullet in his head.


It may be a touch pretentious for a hack action writer to talk about “literature,” but I think as a whole stories would be better served, and would speak better to the human condition, if we learned to put a divider between “enemy” and “evil” again.  They can be separate concepts, and provide a lot of fodder for interesting storytelling that can’t be found if every character is on one side of the fence or another.


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Published on May 25, 2016 01:36
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message 1: by Samuel (last edited May 29, 2016 12:41AM) (new)

Samuel A very succinct blog post, and one which raises some very good questions about the morality scale in fiction.

There's a spy novel on my bookshelf which beautifully exemplified your point about enemy and evil being ultimately mutually exclusive.

The title is funnily enough, "The Enemy", something which turns out to be slightly ironic. It's about the number two man at the CIA NCS implementing a black op.

The purpose of the op is to destroy the world's two most powerful arms dealers. The tool which the spymaster selects to carry out the operation is an asset he's cultivated, a freelance contract killer. Shenanigans ensure, especially when the asset is forced by circumstances beyond his control to ventilate a team of Mossad officers conducting surveillance on one of his targets.

What's great about the book is that ultimately there is 'no true villain' except the one that the reader picks.

The arms dealers, while reacting like hellfire missiles to any perceived betrayals or assaults on their firms, also have loved ones and deal with the harm that their jobs have caused to their personal lives.

The Agency spymaster, while a ruthless individual aims to see the flow of weapons to terrorists and America's geopolitical enemies stopped. He's also very fair in his treatment of his assets and officers, being willing to give the contract killer the benefit of the doubt when a complication ensures rather than throw him immediately under the bus.

The contract killer, while an amoral ruthless fellow who is only looking out for himself, is willing to save two people who are unconnected to him from certain death in two critical points of the book, even when he could have left them to die. Furthermore, he never meant to kill the Israeli surveillance team and only did so when one of their number got the drop on him, causing a simple misunderstanding to escalate into a full-on gun battle.

The Mossad officers (Kidon unit sent to kill the contract killer) despite being willing to murder and horrifically torture anyone connected with the contract killer (one of the hit -squads members roasts the contract killer's go-to forger with a blowtorch) but are only doing so because they wish to avenge the seemingly senseless deaths of their fellow intelligence officers.

Essentially, while they're all enemies with each other, they're not evil.

The arms dealers, while criminals, did not provoke the events of the book and are only reacting to events that come to them.

The spymaster, while conducting an illegal operation that would see him in jail if exposed, believes it's in his homeland's interest for the black op to turn out successfully.

The contract killer, is a dispassionate chess piece. He's being paid and coerced to carry out a job and does not feel any hatred or loathing for the arms dealers that he's been sent to destroy.

As for the Mossad officers, they see themselves as an injured party that's been attacked in an unprovoked manner (rather than being victims of their operation accidentally colliding with the CIA operation) and seek to get justice for their fallen numbers.

Anyhow forgive me for my rambling, I think you're right. Being an enemy/hostile/threat doesn't mean a fictional character can be considered "evil".

I suppose it depends on the intent and actions of a character. Do they see the protagonist dispassionately, as an obstacle who is in the way of a goal, with nothing personal between them? Or is it something more personal, with a genuine malicious intent?

This Mr Feng Kung (from the small detail you've previewed) seems to fall into the former category. A professional solider, trying to do his job, and happens to find a unexpected, mysterious American mercenary hunting the same man that he's targeting, an event that Mr Kung has no way of foreseeing.


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