Having trouble with transitions

I'm trying to transition to the next phase of Raven's life in the novel.  Transitions have always been my weakest point in my writing.  How can I improve transitions in my writing?  I need my readers to be able to move through time and place without bogging down my readers with unnecessary detail.

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Published on May 24, 2011 20:10
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