Beneath the surface

My heroine Gemma in WHO WANTS TO MARRY A MILLIONAIRE? is strong-willed, gutsy and independent.

She doesn't depend on anyone.
She doesn't get involved with anyone emotionally.

And now I have to add a little vulnerability to this tough girl while revising.

Something my editor suggested sparked a range of ideas: perhaps have her specialise in marine environments?

Bingo!

I've googled and printed out a load of research material. While it won't change the framework of the story, I'm going to enjoy layering through the marine stuff to show Gemma's soft spots beneath the tough exterior.

The working title for this book was Beneath the Surface and during the revision process, I can see how apt it is.
Both Rory and Gemma are about to discover there is loads more going on beneath the surface than they anticipated in the first draft!