Background Settings continued

Reader connection is one of the secrets to good fiction. Again, background setting will help create realistic characters that readers can care about and root for as they attempt to solve their story problems. One of the best ways to make sure the background "stage" is set is through the use of sensory details. For example, did you notice in my May 4 blog entry how I used the five senses so you could join me and become a Beach Bum, too--if only for a short while? I described the warmth of the sun radiating off the sand, the sound of a train’s whistle, the sharp marine breeze against my face, and the soft plopping sounds of small shells dropping into my plastic pail. Further, I painted word pictures describing the green-and-white ferries crossing Puget Sound and marshmallows on green sticks and smoky beach fires that smelled of burning driftwood. I portrayed the gentle sound of the waves against the shore, and the gritty feeling of the sand beneath my toes.

Okay, now it’s time to sit down and think back to a time and place that was special in your life. What were the sights, sounds, touches, tastes, and smells that make that scene stick in your memory? Can you describe those sensory details now? Can you create a background setting that will draw the reader in and make him feel connected to your character? Give it a try and see what you can come up with. I bet you’ll be surprised!