Hook, Line, and Sinker

No, I don't fish! I do however, write queries on each and every book I write.


I read over and over agents telling authors to keep their query brief. One paragraph, maybe two, but that's it. Why is this so hard for an author? Well, they've written a whole book and condensing it to two paragraphs is like choosing a favorite between your kids.

So, fellow authors... this is how I see a query.

Hook: If the agent or publisher doesn't see a hook, or conflict, or reason for the story to be told, they are going to pass.

Line: A great line is a terrible thing to waste. One good line can hook your reader and make them want to read more.

Sinker: You can sink a prospective agent or publisher with bad writing, so sink all the extra words in your query and stick to ones that count. Use active verbs and allow your voice to sing on the page.

Best of luck!