Book descriptions

I get lots of views to my book and short stories but people only seem to pull the trigger on the free ones. I thought I would put the descriptions that I currently have on Smashwords and see what you think about them…looking for advice on how to improve them and fill them with juicy hooks!

So here they are:

1. Book description

Is it post traumatic stress or paranormal terror?

It started one evening in a quiet neighborhood in Iowa with five year old Liam Randolf playing with his best friend in...