All revisioned out

Finished the first pass of revisions on THE DATING DILEMMA yesterday.

Remember I was struggling with these at first?
Weirdly, there wasn't much to actually change. Inserting an inciting incident for Eve and Bryce's behaviour explained everything and there wasn't a lot to tweak in the book itself.

In another odd snippet, another facet of Bryce's motivation revealed itself to me...towards the end! I suddenly thought 'ah! So THAT's why he did that.'

I fear the whole thing is a bit rough still, so pl
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Published on July 24, 2009 16:05
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