When Does a Book Title Catch Your Eye?

They are only a few choice words, but they're also the often hardest part of a book to write. I sweat over picking titles. Early on, during the novel's first draft, I draw up a list of titles, then shape it as I go along. The new book's working title is just a placeholder, subject to change at any time. And it does.

Anything is fair game since titles can't be copyrighted. But then would you call your book Gone With the Wind? Not me. Some titles get overused. For instance, Deadfall is a popular title for thrillers. I want my titles to stand out from the pack. On the other hand, if I get too exotic, readers tend to forget or mix up my titles. That's no good.

Colors appeal to me: The Blue Cheer, The Dirt-Brown Derby, and The Zinc Zoo. Often a title will pop into my head after I've gone to bed. But I'm too lazy to drag up and go jot down the title. If it's a keeper, I figure it will stick in my head until the morning comes.

Sometimes a key phrase or a heavy piece of dialogue will nail down the book's title. For instance, one of my characters likens his new life in the suburbs to "the zinc zoo." I liked it for a title, so I used it. Maybe there's too much alliteration (the z-z) there, but I still like it now.

What in a title rings your bell enough to try out reading the book?
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Published on April 08, 2011 02:24 Tags: books, readers, titles
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message 1: by Patti (new)

Patti Abbott It's more about titles that turn me off. And basically it would suggest the book is too light or too violent. A title that suggests it's a character-based plot would get my interest.


message 2: by Ed (new)

Ed Patti wrote: "It's more about titles that turn me off. And basically it would suggest the book is too light or too violent. A title that suggests it's a character-based plot would get my interest."

Now that's an interesting idea I've never considered. A title suggesting a character-based plot is definitely intriguing. Like Sophia's Choice. Thanks for the post.


message 3: by Kathleen (last edited Apr 08, 2011 07:10PM) (new)

Kathleen Titles that play on words/phrases often catch my eye. I'm thinking of Tamara Myers and my favorite title "Play It Again Spam." Julie Hyzy is another example with her White House chef series.

I like series that clearly indicate they are a series (Betty Webb's Desert series) and also titles that make me wonder (Jaffarian "The Curse of the Holy Pail").

I am mildly irritated by titles that include words I don't know how to say, e.g., "Nights in Rodanthe." However, I'm such a dedicated reader that even a perhaps-offensive title doesn't deter me (Jakes "The Bastard"). Thanks for asking!


message 4: by Stephen (new)

Stephen Gallup I just read and posted a GR review on a novel titled Die a Dry Death, and I grumbled about the title. I believe it was intended ironically: People involved in a shipwreck don't want to drown, but the fate awaiting them on the island was worse. Fair enough, but "dry death" sounds awfully grim, and the phrasing sounds like a message to me. I recoiled from that and, as a result, a year passed before I got around to reading it (which I wanted to do, because I knew it would be well written).

I think that's an object lesson in the importance of considering the effect a title may have on readers.


Carolyn Schmidt The cover art is the first thing that catches my eye.


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