Not much more than a headache

Well I thought about my book a lot today but I haven't written anything yet!  I think I have the opening chapter scratched out….I will post the first sentence here if anyone wants to read it and see if it has a little bit off a hook in it.  The first sentence seems very important.

This is what I have:

He knew no one would call, no one would come over and worse still no one would remember but Lukas LASTNAME secretly loved his birthday anyway.

The first sentence for my first novel "Fall Leaves...

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Published on March 08, 2011 17:38
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