The Power of Words
Son #1 loves to babble yet. His vocabulary is growing with each day but he still says a lot of made up words. Two nights ago, when we're were telling him that we love him before putting him down in his bed for the night, he finally said those three little words back.
"I love you."
It came out more like "I luv u" but it completely melted my heart.
Now how does this relate to writing?
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We should strive to make each line of dialogue to have impact. It doesn't always have to be life-altering, but it should have meaning. It should also be unique onto that character - i.e. each line should only have been said by that character, no one else should have/could have said it. This goes to voice. If each character has been written to be unique and has a unique enough voice, their dialogue would be their own, dependent upon their character. If they have an accent, it would give their words flavor. If they have little education, they wouldn't use proper English all the time. Etc...
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Now if only he would say "I love you, Mommy" I would be a puddle on the floor.
"I love you."
It came out more like "I luv u" but it completely melted my heart.
Now how does this relate to writing?
Credit for picture
We should strive to make each line of dialogue to have impact. It doesn't always have to be life-altering, but it should have meaning. It should also be unique onto that character - i.e. each line should only have been said by that character, no one else should have/could have said it. This goes to voice. If each character has been written to be unique and has a unique enough voice, their dialogue would be their own, dependent upon their character. If they have an accent, it would give their words flavor. If they have little education, they wouldn't use proper English all the time. Etc...
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Now if only he would say "I love you, Mommy" I would be a puddle on the floor.
Published on March 18, 2011 06:46
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