Basic Errors That Could Keep Your Writing From Being Published
by Vonda Skelton @VondaSkelton
A few years ago my 12-year-old granddaughter and I were behind a van with this slogan painted on the back window:
"Customer Service at It's Best."
Being the good grandmother that I am, I pointed out the mistake and proceeded to explain why the slogan was incorrect. She didn't want to hear my wise counsel...until I said that little apostrophe could be the difference between getting a job and not getting one, whether she wanted to be a writer, a teacher, or a CEO.
She didn't believe me, but it's true...especially in writing.
If you've been reading my blog any length of time, you've heard me say that editors are becoming more and more discriminating. When I first started writing, instructors told us we had a chapter to get the editors' attention. Then it became five pages. Then one page. Then one paragraph.
Now, many editors say we have one sentence. Ugh.[image error]
We have a short amount of time to hook an editor.Of course, it's different with every editor, but the bottom line is, we have a very short amount of time to hook an editor. I was teaching at a writing conference a few years ago where an editor said, "When I read your manuscript, I'm not looking for a reason to publish it. I'm looking for a reason to reject it."
Another editor said, "I'll read the first sentence. If there aren't any errors and if it's interesting, I'll go to the second sentence. If I don't see a problem, I'll go to the third. And on and on. The key is, don't make any mistakes."
No mistakes? None? Now THAT'S a big order!
No mistakes might be a big order, but that must be the goal. Correct word choice and spelling is a good place to start.
Here are some of the frequent word choice/spelling mistakes that can doom your submission to the rejection pile.
Stay out of the rejection pileYour/You'reI love your shirt. (Possessive pronoun)You're going to wear that shirt? (Contraction--must be able to substitute "you are")
Its/It'sThe cat jumped out of its skin. (Possessive pronoun)It's too bad the cat used his last life. (Contraction--must be able to substitute "it is")
Their/There/They're/There'reI wish their list had my name on it. (Possessive pronoun)Did you see that skunk over there? (Adverb)They're too young to be my children. (Contraction--must be able to substitute "they are")There're too many confusing words here. (I know you don't see this one often, but it's a contraction--must be able to substitute "there are"
Whose/Who'sDo you know whose house this is? (Possessive pronoun)Who's going to take this box of books to the post office? (Contraction--must be able to substitute "who is")
I admit I've made--and continue to make--my share of mistakes. But we must recognize that each time we let one slip through, we're decreasing our chances of seeing our efforts in print. So let's do everything we can to make our work as good as it can be. It doesn't mean we'll be perfect. After all, that won't happen until we see Glory, but it does mean we must not be slack. We must do everything we can to present the best work possible.
It could be the difference in getting an acceptance...or a rejection.
Now, it’s your turn. Can you find the 16 mistakes in this poorly-written paragraph? (Note: not all errors were addressed in this post.)
I wish I new who’s responsibility it is to name this flower. Is it your’s? Its petals are so lovely, but their not as lovely as a rose petal. And it’s scent is lovely, to. I use to argue that the red rose was the prettiest, but not anymore. After all, whose to say weather I’m write or wrong? There lots of reasons I think your wrong. But lets not make a big deal over it. As the saying go’s, you can give wrong answer’s if you won’t to be wrong!
Did you find them all? Post in the comments today (Friday) if you were successful and I’ll use Random.org to select a winner of one of my writing workshop downloads! (Please don’t give the answers in your comments!)
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Vonda Skelton is a speaker and the author of four books: Seeing Through the Lies: Unmasking the Myths Women Believe and the 3-book Bitsy Burroughs mysteries for children 8-12 yo. She’s the founder and co-director of Christian Communicators Conference, offering speakers’ training and community for Christian women called to ministry. Vonda is a frequent instructor at writer’s conferences and keynotes at business, women’s, and associational events. You can find out more about Vonda, as well as writing opportunities and instruction at her writer’s blog, The Christian Writer’s Den at VondaSkelton.com.
A few years ago my 12-year-old granddaughter and I were behind a van with this slogan painted on the back window: "Customer Service at It's Best."
Being the good grandmother that I am, I pointed out the mistake and proceeded to explain why the slogan was incorrect. She didn't want to hear my wise counsel...until I said that little apostrophe could be the difference between getting a job and not getting one, whether she wanted to be a writer, a teacher, or a CEO.
She didn't believe me, but it's true...especially in writing.
If you've been reading my blog any length of time, you've heard me say that editors are becoming more and more discriminating. When I first started writing, instructors told us we had a chapter to get the editors' attention. Then it became five pages. Then one page. Then one paragraph.
Now, many editors say we have one sentence. Ugh.[image error]
We have a short amount of time to hook an editor.Of course, it's different with every editor, but the bottom line is, we have a very short amount of time to hook an editor. I was teaching at a writing conference a few years ago where an editor said, "When I read your manuscript, I'm not looking for a reason to publish it. I'm looking for a reason to reject it."Another editor said, "I'll read the first sentence. If there aren't any errors and if it's interesting, I'll go to the second sentence. If I don't see a problem, I'll go to the third. And on and on. The key is, don't make any mistakes."
No mistakes? None? Now THAT'S a big order!
No mistakes might be a big order, but that must be the goal. Correct word choice and spelling is a good place to start.
Here are some of the frequent word choice/spelling mistakes that can doom your submission to the rejection pile.
Stay out of the rejection pileYour/You'reI love your shirt. (Possessive pronoun)You're going to wear that shirt? (Contraction--must be able to substitute "you are")Its/It'sThe cat jumped out of its skin. (Possessive pronoun)It's too bad the cat used his last life. (Contraction--must be able to substitute "it is")
Their/There/They're/There'reI wish their list had my name on it. (Possessive pronoun)Did you see that skunk over there? (Adverb)They're too young to be my children. (Contraction--must be able to substitute "they are")There're too many confusing words here. (I know you don't see this one often, but it's a contraction--must be able to substitute "there are"
Whose/Who'sDo you know whose house this is? (Possessive pronoun)Who's going to take this box of books to the post office? (Contraction--must be able to substitute "who is")
I admit I've made--and continue to make--my share of mistakes. But we must recognize that each time we let one slip through, we're decreasing our chances of seeing our efforts in print. So let's do everything we can to make our work as good as it can be. It doesn't mean we'll be perfect. After all, that won't happen until we see Glory, but it does mean we must not be slack. We must do everything we can to present the best work possible.
It could be the difference in getting an acceptance...or a rejection.
Now, it’s your turn. Can you find the 16 mistakes in this poorly-written paragraph? (Note: not all errors were addressed in this post.)
I wish I new who’s responsibility it is to name this flower. Is it your’s? Its petals are so lovely, but their not as lovely as a rose petal. And it’s scent is lovely, to. I use to argue that the red rose was the prettiest, but not anymore. After all, whose to say weather I’m write or wrong? There lots of reasons I think your wrong. But lets not make a big deal over it. As the saying go’s, you can give wrong answer’s if you won’t to be wrong!
Did you find them all? Post in the comments today (Friday) if you were successful and I’ll use Random.org to select a winner of one of my writing workshop downloads! (Please don’t give the answers in your comments!)
TWEETABLES
Basic Errors That Could Keep Your #Writing From Being Published - @VondaSkelton (Click to Tweet)
Don't let #Grammar & Spelling stand between you & #publication - @VondaSkelton (Click to Tweet)
Vonda Skelton is a speaker and the author of four books: Seeing Through the Lies: Unmasking the Myths Women Believe and the 3-book Bitsy Burroughs mysteries for children 8-12 yo. She’s the founder and co-director of Christian Communicators Conference, offering speakers’ training and community for Christian women called to ministry. Vonda is a frequent instructor at writer’s conferences and keynotes at business, women’s, and associational events. You can find out more about Vonda, as well as writing opportunities and instruction at her writer’s blog, The Christian Writer’s Den at VondaSkelton.com.
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