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My Sassy Character

I mentioned my new WIP, Prisoners of the Wailing Tower. The MC, Alemin, is part of a minstrel band who are all performers but also secretly mages. They work to help the oppressed people of Skaythe. In the first novella, Keilos is a singer, and in the second, Tisha is a dancer. Meven, in the third novella, is a puppeteer. In each case, their performance art is integral to their magic, and that continues here, as well. Alemin’s art is to juggle, along with his younger brother, Berisan. He draws energy from the rhythm and movement of his art.

This was all in my plan, but I’m learning a lot as I begin the actual writing. And Alemin is surprising me! Even though he’s going to be held in fairly miserable conditions, instead of being scared as I was expecting, Alemin wants to… laugh.

He laughs in order to release tension. To cheer up people around him.To lighten the burden of their mutual captivity. The Minstrels are all about easing the suffering of others, after all. Who is more miserable than a bunch of prisoners in a dungeon?

Unfortunately for Alemin, most of his fellow prisoners are not accustomed to being cheered up. They are going to take his humor as bizarre, even insane. The prison wardens and guards will feel mocked and insulted. They will think he’s being sassy, in other words.

I have to admit, I feel conflicted about taking this approach. Would it really make sense that someone laugh under such a circumstance? Maybe it’s too random and bizarre. At the same time, having Alemin be morose and scared is exactly what people would expect. I don’t like to be so predictable.

So I plan to write it out with Alemin laughing, at least for now. If it doesn’t work the way I want it to, then that’s what revision is for. It should be interesting, anyway.

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Woman at Work

This will be just a quick recap of what I’ve been working on so far in 2020. I had a goal to finish a short story, and I did it. “It’s a Dirty Job” is a chill science fiction that ended up around 2,500 words. It was intended for my children’s pen name, Lucy D. Ford. Unfortunately, the youth magazines don’t want work over 2,000 words. So it’s on submission under my own name. Poor Lucy will have to wait.

I also began work on my fourth Minstrels of Skaythe novella. The tentative title is Prisoners of the Wailing Tower. So far I’ve got around 1,000 words, which barely puts a toe into it. I’m loving the way the setting has come together, but the POV character is fairly blank. Come on, Alemin, work with me!

When I get home from my day job, I have a little time set aside for video games. My current game is Fallout 76, which was a Christmas gift. My character has emerged after 25 years in a fallout shelter into what was West Virginia. It’s a survival game, so I have to search for food, water and shelter while exploring what happened above ground during the 25 years.

In most of these games, you go around the villages and get quests from people. Here, there are no people left. The only humans are other players, but I prefer a solo game, so I leave them alone. I can follow the story by finding audio tapes and newspapers. I’m enjoying a game that’s less scripted and forces me to think rather than rush into situations. However, my character dies a lot and I can lose some resources I’ve collected. One more thing to plan for in Appalachia.

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Decision: Life or Death

It occurred to me that there is a genre where killing the characters off is an important part of the tale. That would be Horror, of course. I know there are a few horror writers in my following, so this is where I invite you to weigh in.

How do you choose which characters will be the victims in your stories? Is it strictly a division of “good guys live/bad guys die,” or is there more to your process? How much do you set up that one character will survive while others don’t?

I would love to know how you decide!

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Bad Guys Must Die, Part 3

Lately I’ve been exploring the topic, stated above, in a philosophical way related to written work. However, there are times when literary theory intersects with real life. One of these occurred just before I started this thread. It spurred me to open a topic I wasn’t sure deserved the space.

Recently, the United States arbitrarily assassinated a foreign official in a drone strike. Immediately, questions were raised about the rationale for this, and about the consequence for U. S. diplomacy. And a chorus came back defending the strike. Can you guess what that chorus was?

“He was a bad guy.”

It often may seem that our stories don’t matter. Especially for Indy authors like most of us, who seem to be perpetually immured in obscurity. Yet, all the stories we tell, by the famous authors and unknowns, whether it’s in a book, a movie, a comic, a play — when they have the same outcome and the same rationale, they build a narrative that can shape the world.

We might think that we’re only telling stories. That they are just for fun and won’t have a lasting impact.

I’m not so sure of that, now.

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Bad Guys Must Die, Part 2

Last time, I blogged about the tradition that the “bad guys” have to die by the end of our stories. One comment was by Alden Loveshade, who suggested that this is partly because every human has a reptilian brain that governs our responses in fight-or-flight situations. When stimulated by a character’s misbehavior, we flip to the “fight” part of the duo.

This is a really good point, but I wonder if, instead, the source lies with the primate parts of our brain. As primates, we are born to be social creatures. We constantly measure how others act toward us. Comforting or threatening, cruel or kind. We also measure each other’s relative status, which could explain why the fantasy genre has a fixation on royalty, even when most readers live in some form of democracy.

Part of the social calculation involved with our primate brains is that we demand parity. We want everyone to follow the same rules. And I say this as a teacher, who trains young people to follow such rules as sharing, taking turns, and waiting to be called on.

For many of you, I know, being taught to follow the rules is seen as sinister and oppressive. I would just point out that having these rules is what allows great numbers of humans to coexist in limited spaces.

Regardless, when one member of society misbehaves, our primate brains demand a consequence. And when the misdeed occurs in a story we are reading — within the privacy of our own minds — we feel impunity to demand the worst punishment: the perpetrator should die!

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Bad Guys Must Die

Readers have firm opinions, as we all know. They tell us how much they love or hate our characters. They insist that two certain people should be in a relationship. Sometimes they even dress up as our characters. (That last one would be pretty cool, honestly.) But one of the most resolute opinions is the one stated above: the bad guy has to die in the end.

This has been in my mind since last month when I saw The Rise of Skywalker. I’ve been holding off on commenting because it isn’t fair to give spoilers, and even now I’ll try not to be too blatant. But one of my issues with the tale is that a certain character sacrificed their life to save another character’s life… but then later that second character died anyway.

I felt like this was terrible storytelling, because the first character’s death became meaningless. However, my husband said that the screenwriters really had to kill that second character off. “He was a bad guy. He had to die.”

Star Wars has a tradition of villains being redeemed by the Force. Han Solo would be an example of a sketchy character who rose to a higher ideal. And then there’s Darth Vader, who was restored by his son, Luke, in Return of the Jedi. But however, he had already been fatally wounded and died immediately afterward. As both a writer and a viewer, I feel like the creators of Star Wars want to have their cake and eat it, too. They want the optimistic lesson of a villain coming back to the light, but at the same time they still want the bad guys to be killed in the end.

I’ve been feeling like a rebel lately, some of you may have noticed, and this assumption really sticks in my craw. WHY does the bad guy “have to” die? It comes back to the weird, judgmental thing that many readers do. They insist that every villain must pay for their crimes with their lives.

To me, as a writer, that outcome is really predictable and boring. I would find it much more interesting if a “bad guy” admits their error and survives. Think of the memories they carry. The shame and guilt. How can a reformed bad guy ever make amends for their previous actions?

What do you think? Should the bad guy always die?

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Word Question

Today I have a question about the word dour. In your mind, how do you pronounce this? Do you rhyme it with tour, or with sour, or in a totally different way?

Of course I can look up the correct pronunciation, but that’s not what I’m asking. I’m curious what you “hear” when I drop the word dour into my story.

So tell me what you think!

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2020 Goals

After my last post on achieving my writing goals, I suppose I need to share what this year’s goals are. Hint: they’re going to look a lot like last year’s goals.

1) Increase sales over 2019. This is again a risky goal since it depends on the decisions of others. However, after writing professionally for 20 years (my first sale was in 2000) it’s important to not fall into a rut. My other goals will be in support of this one.

2) Continue with the Minstrels of Skaythe series by writing novellas 4 and 5, and self-publishing novellas 3 and 4. Minstrels of Skaythe is really challenging me, and I want to keep that energy going. In addition, writing more books is said to be a great sales tactic on its own.

3) Host a blog event called The Fairy Queen’s Court in June of 2020. Previously, I’ve been issuing a monthly newsletter as a sales tactic. It’s been frustrating to receive so little response. I’m giving myself permission to quit that one and try something else. I’m excited about The Fairy Queen’s Court. You can look forward to more about that in future months!

4) Make 6 public appearances in support of my career. Between SF conventions and writing groups, I have hopes to meet this goal. Appearances will raise awareness of my being present in the community, both locally and on the Internet, and I definitely need that.

On a related note, I’m always happy to help other authors who need to publicize their new books. Don’t hesitate to ask if you can do a guest spot here.

As for this blog, I will certainly go on posting twice a week, on Wednesdays and Saturdays. I don’t seem to have trouble thinking up topics, but it never hurts to take suggestions. So if you have any questions or want to learn more about my novellas, my working methods, or even what’s growing in my vegetable garden, I’d love to hear from you. Let me know what you think I should blog about!

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Onward! to 2020

Technically, it’s still 2019 as I post this, but really, at this point in the year, who cares? It’s just tradition to take a fond look back at what my goals were and what I achieved in 2019.

“A fond look.” Did I really write that? How trite.

Anyway! Looking at my Super Fancy Goal Tracking System (a.k.a. the collection of sticky notes along the hood of my desk) I see that I set three goals for myself in 2019.

1) Increase sales over 2018. This was the most risky, because it depends on other people’s purchasing decisions (editors and/or readers). That is something I don’t control. My other goals were intended to make this one happen.

2) Issue a monthly newsletter with a snippet from one of my books. Make it so fun and engaging that it drives the aforementioned sales.

3) “Finish 3rd novella and publish them somehow.” Somewhat vague, but aimed at Minstrels of Skaythe. This time last year, I was just finishing the second of those novellas and didn’t want to let the series drop.

4) Make 6 public appearances that relate to your writing. This one, I didn’t actually write down until later. It was aimed at driving sales and building newsletter readership.

Believe it or not, I achieved every goal. I brought out the monthly newsletter. (It hasn’t done much for me, that I can tell, but I did it.) I made 6 appearances during the year. I finished the third novella, The Ice Witch of Fang Marsh, so the series did continue.

And my risky goal? I even met that one. My income from writing, although pathetic, is still more than it was in 2018. That’s largely due to the judging fee I received from Idaho Writers, but I also sold books at SpoCon and RadCon in 2018.

With this encouragement, I will now take down those sticky notes from the hood of my desk… and start to make some new ones. Onward!

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Blog Visit: Kittywumpus

My guest post is up on Cat Rambo’s blog, Kittywumpus. The essay is “What Are We Fighting For?” It covers a lot of my thinking around Minstrels of Skaythe and what I’m trying to accomplish with the series. I’m excited to share it with you.

Cheers for the holidays, everyone! I hope you all had/are having fun with family and friends.

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