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June 29, 2017

A Foil in Fiction: Emphasizes the Protagonist’s Qualities

Foil In fiction, a foil is usually a secondary character whose traits contrast or oppose qualities of the protagonist. The foil is created to highlight certain characteristics of the protagonist. Foils and protagonists aren’t necessarily opposites. The foil could be like the protagonist with one important difference. A foil character may be a good person […]


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Published on June 29, 2017 07:35

June 22, 2017

Hyperbatons – A Word Reversal Device That Gets Attention

Hyperbaton Hyperbaton is a literary device in which words, phrases, and clauses are transposed from their usual order in a sentence. However, the unfamiliar order retains the gist of the message. These word reversals can be used in dialogue or internal dialogue when a character wants to emphasize his message or add a little drama. […]


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Published on June 22, 2017 07:00

June 15, 2017

Aphorism: True, Short, and Witty

Aphorism A truth that is said in a quick and witty manner is an aphorism. Aphorisms don’t have to be humorous, but that’s half the reason we like so many of them. And aphorism’s brevity makes their truths easy to remember. An example of this literary device is Benjamin Franklin’s familiar statement, “In this world […]


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Published on June 15, 2017 07:00

June 8, 2017

Metonymy & Synecdoche: Something Called by Another Name

Metonymy & Synecdoche Metonymy is a word(s) that stands in for an object or concept originally called by a different name. The Metonymy has some relationship to the meaning of the originally named entity. A woman might call a good-looking man eye candy. The man isn’t only easy on the eyes, but sweet to behold. […]


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Published on June 08, 2017 07:15

June 1, 2017

Malapropism: A Sneaky Soundalike in Writing—Humor or Error

Malapropism Malapropism is using a word that sounds similar to the right word the writer intended to use. The word comes from the French expression mal a propos, which means inappropriate. Malapropism can be unintentional or intentional. To add humor to a story, writers sometimes create characters who repeatedly use malapropisms. The best way to […]


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Published on June 01, 2017 06:58

May 25, 2017

Faulty Parallelism: Parallelism With a Rebel

Faulty Parallelism Parallelism is the literary device. Faulty parallelism occurs when the device takes a wayward turn from the parallel structure or format in listing or pairing items. The writer begins his sentence with two or more similarly related words or phrases. The rhythm soothes the reader. Then the writer deviates from the pattern, and the […]


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Published on May 25, 2017 06:22

May 18, 2017

Authorial Intrusion – Readers Get a Dose from the Writer

Authorial Intrusion as a Literary Device In authorial intrusion, the author directly addresses the reader, intending to build a relationship with the reader on some level. This literary device was popular until the 20th century. The movie, Ferris Bueller’s Day Off (1986), represents well-planned authorial intrusion as Ferris tells about his day off. How to […]


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Published on May 18, 2017 06:59

May 11, 2017

Circumlocution – Bore Readers with Overkill, or Not?

Circumlocution Writing that expresses something in a roundabout or indirect way, using many unnecessary words. Circumlocution can be understandable or unintelligible. Example A large portion of the class grabbed a goodly number of the assignments, far and beyond what they should have, in view of the fact that some of the students hadn’t been afforded […]


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Published on May 11, 2017 07:26

May 4, 2017

Asyndeton & Polysyndeton in Story: Conjunctions, More & Less

First, let’s look at syndeton and the examples we’re most familiar with. Syndeton Syndeton is the coordination of elements in a sentence, generally with a conjunction, such as and, or, but, for, nor, so, yet. The conjunctions can be used between words, phrases, and clauses. Examples Anna could marry Lee or Doug. She could marry Lee, […]


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Published on May 04, 2017 06:59

April 27, 2017

Amplification: Embellish What You Just Wrote With More Information

What Amplification Is Amplification is a literary device. Suppose you write a statement, but it doesn’t give the reader enough information to fully understand it or see the full impact of the object, idea, or event. So, you add information to further explain it or to emphasize it. You are using amplification. Example     […]


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Published on April 27, 2017 07:08