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July 29, 2014

The Lost One Cover Reveal

The Lost One By Liz LovelockRelease Date : 10th September 2014 Cover By: Cover to Cover DesignsHosted by : FMR Book Studio


SynopsisMy name is Melodi White, I had a dream once like every other girl does. Then one day, my dream was torn to shreds, by my sister’s evil boyfriend, Jacob. It’s been three years since she was ripped from my life. She wasn’t just any sister; no, she was my twin, my best friend.
Deciding to follow our childhood dream of moving to New York, I head for a life of adventure and fun. A night on the town and I find myself wrapped in the arms of one gorgeous, drop-dead-sexy man, Corban. He has literally swept me off my feet, taken my breath away with a single kiss and left me wanting more, a feeling completely alien to me.
Corban Andrews, CEO of Case Construction, rich, sexy and ravishing is set to make my world come undone. I allow myself to put my trust in him, but will his rules and my trust issues let us explore what we could have together? It’s either that or am I at risk of staying lost and alone.
When a blast from my past reappears, I know I may be pushed so far down the rabbit hole, Corban and I just may not survive. It all comes down to survival and choices. I have no idea which I will choose.
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Author Bio She's from bright sunny Queensland, Australia. She has always been a reader. When she was little she would be up late reading Garfield and Asterix comic books and also Footrot Flats. When she hit high school she read Tomorrow When the War Began by John Marsden and from there her love of books continued to grow. She always has a book to read beside her bed along with a note book for when inspiration hits at those crazy hours.

She is a stationary addict and a one click addict. She loves everything books and authors and of course loves chocolate and lollies to keep her going. Facebook link Giveaway 

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Published on July 29, 2014 23:03

July 24, 2014

Drumroll please...

In my post the other day, I hinted that I have a lot of exciting things floating around at the moment. As each one eventuates, I'll post up details. Today, it's a piece of exciting news about my first two books releasing with Bottom Drawer Publications (the first two books of each of the twin series I've penned).

First, let me explain what I mean by twin series: These two series are separate and distinct, but related. They both cover the same timeline from the point of view of each of the two major characters. *Covers ears while people shout about money-grabbing and not needing to see both POVs* I know, I know, the go-to assumption when people see two books of the same events from two different people's perspectives is that it is unnecessary and a little pointless, and in many cases I agree. HOWEVER, the majority of these two series do not cover the exact same events. The same timeline, yes, and there is naturally some cross-over, but each of these characters has a vastly different story to tell.

The Daughter of Fire series follows Evelyn "Evie" Meyers, a girl with a secret which puts her squarely in the firing line of a secret organization hell-bent on washing the world clean of non-humans.

The Son of Rain series follows Clay Jacobs, a solider thrust at an early age into a war against the supernatural creatures that roam the Earth. Because of this, he is tasked with washing the world clean of all monsters.

Each series has been written to stand alone and you will get a full story if you choose to only read one. If you primarily want romance, I would recommend you read Evie's story (Daughter of Fire). If you primarily want a paranormal world filled with different creatures, I would recommend Clay's (Son of Rain). However, if you read both the picture will be more vivid and you will see exactly what these two crazy cats are fighting both for and against. 

Now, the exciting news: 



I have official release dates locked in for the first two books:

~ Through the Fire (Daughter of Fire Book 1) ~
 ~ October 31st, 2014 ~

 ~ Besieged by Rain (Son of Rain Book 1) ~ 
~ February 27th, 2015 ~
The subsequent books will release in alternating succession approximately every four months. 
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Published on July 24, 2014 20:03

July 23, 2014

Radio Silence

Hi everyone, sorry for the radio silence lately, I just have some exciting things in the works and am spending a little time working on them at the moment. I will be back very soon with a new post and hopefully some updates.

Vague hints around some of the developments:

Fiery swag It's a dateNew beginningsLet's get it coveredNow that I've no doubt left you more confused than before you saw this post I'll love you and leave you. 
Again, sorry for the silence and I'll see you soon!

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Published on July 23, 2014 05:37

July 14, 2014

Your Aussie is showing!

A recent conversation in one of the writing groups I'm part of on Facebook made me consider colloquialisms and naming brand-names rather than items. Nikkos here in Australia are Sharpies in the UK. Band-Aids might be sticky plasters. A bag is a bag unless it's a port. 
As an Aussie writing books that are (for the most part) set in the US, I have to be very mindful of using US colloquialisms and not interject Aussie-isms. Even stories that I base in Australia need to be understandable for those overseas. I am lucky that I have a terrific beta-reader who is based in the US and she helps immensely. I still like to ensure that I give her as little to fix as I can though. 
There have been a number of times though when I have merrily gone on my way completely unaware of the differences in speech between the US and Australia: footpath versus sidewalk, boot versus trunk, crib versus cot, notes versus bills, bonnet versus hood, grey versus gray, just to name a few. There are still some words that I struggle that catch because they are so ingrained in my vocab that I don't even notice I'm using them until I get a comment or correction in my manuscript. And I can still remember her reaction to me saying that someone was telling porkies and the first time she encountered fairy floss in one of my stories rather than cotton candy. 
In my day job, my boss is British and we've had conversations about Brit versus Aussie sayings. Luckily as a lover of British TV, I can understand a number of his expressions. Although the first time he busted out an "Are you a Billy?" when I was alone in my office, I was lost. He meant it in reference to the saying "Billy No Mates" which I'd never heard before (in Australia a similar saying would be "Nigel No Friends" - I'm sure you can guess what it means). 
Although I'm no etymologist, the subtle difference in language from country to country, and even region to region fascinates me. I can still remember being a young girl moving schools from South Australia to Queensland and being told to put my port on the port racks and I had no clue what they were talking about. Then of course, there is the language of fandoms and the internet which is a whole other thing again.
I'm curious, what expressions (either from other countries or your native one) have you encountered that left you dumbfounded or that you had to explain to others? 

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Published on July 14, 2014 04:01

July 6, 2014

Chained Release Day

Chained (Chained Trilogy Book 1)Author: Elise MarionGenre: Medieval/Fantasy RomanceWord Count: 90,000Publisher: Marion PressCover Art by: Najla Qamber Designs (www.najlaqamberdesigns.com)
House Toustain … House Maignart … two royal houses once embroiled in a bloody feud … Thirty years of peace now broken in an instant …
Sir Caden Maignart has been captured, beaten, locked in a dungeon, and wrongfully accused of kidnapping and oath-breaking. Determined to free himself and his men, and clear his besmirched name, Caden does not count on the willful nature of his captor, Lady Gwendolyn Toustain, the daughter of the man who was once his father’s mortal enemy. After several attempts at escape, the lady orders him bound and chained to a wall in her chambers—where he will remain under her personal guard at all times and kept from conspiring with his men. While the lady's high-handedness infuriates him, Caden cannot deny that everything else about her drives him to distraction. Forced into close proximity with her, Caden soon finds it hard to remember his mission of escape.

When Lady Gwendolyn of House Toustain first lays eyes on her prisoner, one thing about him is abundantly clear: Sir Caden of Daleraia is a dangerous man. Yet, she must show him no fear. The captured band of knights from Daleraia are her only clue in the mystery surrounding the disappearance of House Toustain’s sons, and it falls to Lady Gwen to seek justice. Is this kidnapping merely the ploy of mercenaries out for a ransom? Or has Sir Caden acted on the order of the High Lord of Daleraia and broken the peace? As she searches for the answers, she never expects the surge of passion that ignites between herself and her prisoner. The longer he remains in her clutches, the more Gwen realizes that though she has him chained, she is the one who has been captured.
Excerpt: Kneeling in front of him, she forced herself to meet his gaze. “You are quite a rabble-rouser, aren’t you?” she said gently, sympathy pricking her as she observed his beaten and bloody face up close. He smirked despite his split lip. “Aye, wench. Did you think you could keep me in your cells forever?”Gwen shook her head slowly. “No, I suppose not. What am I to do with you, Daleraian?”His lips split into a blinding smile, and for a moment, Gwen was taken aback. Despite his battered face, she had to grudgingly admit that the man had magnetism. His smile was disarming. “I could think of a few things, wench,” he murmured, his eyes lowering to the neckline of her kirtle.Gwen’s jaw clenched, but she reminded herself of her vow to remain calm. “My steward thinks I should kill you.”He scowled. “Your steward sounds like an idiot.”Espan huffed and stammered in outrage at that, and Gwen stifled a laugh. “He is my advisor, Sir,” she said. “My father’s as well. I heed his council in all things.”“Heed mine,” he offered. “You don’t want to kill me. To do so would be a grievous error.”Gwen’s eyebrows raised. “Why?”“Suffice it to say that if I were gone, Lord Theodric would miss me … enough to send thousands of warriors to Seahaven’s gates.”“Lord Theodric has already set his forces against Dinasdale. Do not think I have forgotten that.”The knight’s jaw ticked. “I have already told you, we played no part in the atrocities committed in Heywick.”Gwen shrugged. “Forgive me if I’m not inclined to release you with only your word as evidence. I need more than that.”“Then let me go,” he growled, his voice low, “and I will prove it. Keep my men as collateral, and I will return for them when I bring evidence of our innocence.”“I think not. You’ve been nothing but trouble since you arrived at Seahaven, Sir. I am within my rights to have you executed, but I am not inclined to just yet. You will remain my captive until I am ready to release or ransom you, but you will not return to the dungeons.”The gaoler snapped to attention at that. “And just where do you s’pose I’m t’ keep him if not in the dungeons?”Gwen stood and turned to face him. “This prisoner is no longer in your care. You have more than proven your ineptitude where he is concerned. He has nearly escaped you several times, and bested your guards at that.”Espan stepped forward, his brow furrowed in confusion. “Milady, what are you saying?”“I want him shackled to that wall, there.”Espan and the gaoler followed her extended arm and pointing finger. Both men glanced back at her in disbelief. “Milady,” Espan protested. “Surely you do not mean—”“But I do,” Gwen said brusquely. “My mother always said the best way for a woman to see something done, is to do it herself. The Daleraian is now in my guard. I want iron rings installed into that wall immediately. He shall remain under my personal guard, where he cannot conspire with his men to escape. There are no guards for him to assault here … no one here but me.”Espan stuttered and stammered for a full minute before gaining his composure. “Milady, begging your pardon, but it is hardly proper.”Gwen’s nostrils flared as she turned on the man. “Am I not castellan here? Do I not speak with the voice of the high lord?”“A-aye, milady,” Espan sputtered. “You do, but it is my duty to advise you in all things.”“And so you did,” Gwen said, turning her back on him. “I have made my decision and I will be obeyed. This Daleraian poses no threat to me in irons. In this way, I can be sure that he causes no further harm to our guards, and has no one around him with which to conspire.”Espan inclined his head humbly, but doubt was still present in his eyes. “I will do whatever you command, milady, you know this.”“Good,” Gwen said with a curt nod. “Then do as I’ve asked, immediately, and send for Lynet, I have need of her.”Espan bowed again and retreated quickly, his surcoat swishing around his ankles. Gwen turned on the gaoler next. “Go, and take all but two of your guard with you. I want a watch set up just outside my doors, two sentries on each watch, day and night.”The gaoler did her bidding as well, departing without protest. With only the two guards standing watch just outside her doors, Gwen was alone with the knight. She knelt before him again, reaching out toward his face. He flinched away, inhaling sharply as her fingers made contact with his jaw.“Hold still!” Gwen chastised, gripping his chin firmly and forcing him to endure her inspection. “I must know if your face needs to be stitched. You’ve taken quite a beating.”The Daleraian snorted dryly. “You should see the other men. Five against one, it was hardly a fair fight.”“No,” Gwen agreed as she gently prodded his injuries, wincing at the large gash torn just above one dark eyebrow. “It was not well done of them.”His eyes flashed mischievously as she met his gaze. “I meant, not fair to them.”

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====About the Author: Elise Marion is a lover books and has a special place in her heart for sweet and sensual romance. Writing
about love across all walks of life is her passion, as is reaching people through the written word. The Army wife and stay-at-home mother of three spends most of her time taking care of her children. Her second job includes writing stories about characters that people can fall in love with. When the Texas native isn't caring for her family or writing, you can usually find her with her nose in a book, singing loudly, or cooking up something new in the kitchen.

Find Elise online at www.elisemarion.comFollow her on Facebook at www.facebook.com/elisemarion86Follow her on Twitter at www.twitter.com/elise_marionFind her on Instagram at www.instagram.com/elise_marion_writes
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Published on July 06, 2014 04:30

June 29, 2014

Friends, Support Network and the Writing Cave

This weekend, I had a girls' night with some good friends including one I've only met online until now. It was a great night and a timely reminder that although it's easy to get caught up in writing the next word, the next line, the next paragraph, and the next book, it's also a great idea to step away from the computer and socialize with people outside of my direct family. Ask almost any writer and they will most likely tell you that they enjoy people watching. The reasons for this are multiple, but primarily going out and getting among people is a great opportunity to learn and to experience. 
For example a writer might head to a cafe. Sitting at the table observing the people nearby, the writer might see the following people: a young mother, her long brown hair pulled up into a messy, high pony tail, the bags under her tired eyes seeming to grow larger by the second as she tries to coerce her child into eating the food she offers him; a cashier, tired after an early start and a long shift, forcing a polite tone into his voice as he takes a custom coffee order from a immaculately put together businesswoman, her black and white pinstripe power suit spotless and pressed even after day in the office. If her order of a tall, soy, caramel macchiato with no foam wasn't enough of an indicator, the hint of her unwrinkled, vivid blue satin blouse peeking out from beneath the jacket suggests that she demands the finer things in life and expects things to be exactly as she desires; the couple in one corner of the cafe who were sitting so close it was hard to tell where one ended and the other began, whispering sweet-nothings in one another's ears. All of these conversations take place at once, creating a din of noise that only just drowns out the clink of the cups and the hiss of the espresso machine. The freshly ground beans and constantly flowing brew fills the air with the rich and slightly bitter aroma of coffee, causing the newly pregnant woman walking by the outside to clutch her nose and move faster to get beyond the area where the scent was most concentrated.  
This is the advantage to getting out and about. A writer can observe dialogue from a variety of different cultures and walks of life; see different body types and face shapes; and experience the tastes, smells, and sounds of real life. The trick to decent writing is to try to infuse these little details into a story because it gives the words an anchor in reality and allow to reader to apply their life experiences to build a better image of the world of the characters.  
What was the last book you read which made you feel like you were part of it?
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Published on June 29, 2014 00:40

June 22, 2014

Blog Tour & Author Interview

Today, I have something a little different (but hopefully exciting) for you all. I have agreed to take part in a blog tour for J A Kenney's latest release. As part of that, I completed a first - my first interview of another author. Below is details on the book (which I am definitely looking forward to reading) as well as a giveaway link (hint, hint!). So here it goes, my first ever author interview:

How long have you been writing? Did you always know you wanted to be a writer? As a very young child, I would create stories in my head to entertain myself. I first started writing them down as a teenager, short stories, screenplays, pieces of novels, even the first few rough chapters of the story that later became Silver Strife. However, at that time I never thought I would write professionally. I went to college for business, worked my way up to Senior Accountant. A couple of years ago, I decided to write down that old story that had been brewing in my head for a decade, and so I wrote the first draft of Silver Strife. I was hooked, and have been writing ever since!
What inspires you in your writing? Everything and anything. I write down story ideas based on dreams, random thoughts, daydreams, nightmares, music, or a stroll in the park!
Do you have a favourite place to write?I usually write in my favorite recliner, with my laptop on the arm, and my faithful shadow Kitty curled up next to me.
Music while you write, yes or no? Depends, some days I need the music to set a mood I'm not feeling, or to motivate me when I'm tired. Most of the time I forget little things like music, or chores, or lunch when I'm writing. I tend to get really absorbed in the world and characters I am creating.
What is your current favourite book? Or if you can’t name just one, what was your last five-star read?I can never come up with one book!Pleasure Unbound by Larissa Ione (Paranormal Romance)Altered Carbon by Richard K Morgan (Science Fiction)The Rowan by Anne McCaffrey (Sci-Fantasy)
Tell me a little about Silver Strife. Silver Strife is based on a future Earth devastated by centuries of war, and ruled by a caste of genetically engineered people called Elites. Quicksilver, who is an immortal, is reborn as one of these Elites, and defects to the rebel forces to try and bring down that government. At its core, Silver Strife is a story about tough decisions, love, and loss. Quicksilver is sworn to protect all mortal life and she is caught in the middle of a war.
What’s one thing you want people to know about the Quicksilver series? Immortal Quicksilver began with the idea of Immortal alien beings that were not only somewhere out there, but right here, right now. Born here, living here, dying here, fighting by our side, or against us, influencing history and shaping our world. The root of all the stories in the series is the war between two groups of Immortals, one determined to enslave or destroy all mortal life, and the other to save it.
Describe the character of Quicksilver in three words. Ancient Immortal WarriorI could also say Hell on Wheels, because she never seems to be able to stay out of trouble!


Summary
Silver Strife: An Immortal Quicksilver NovelI was alive, in a new mortal shell, a different place, and time. If I had believed in some benevolent supernatural creature that controlled every aspect of reality, I would have thanked it. Instead, I just felt a sort of ambivalent relief.Time was a true fourth dimension. Ages and epochs made long sweeping circles across the void, and immortals traveled between those rings like icebreakers smashing through a frozen sea. So we died just like everyone else, a truth that I thought a glaring irony. However, we came back, born again into new flesh, and in this new vessel, I could forge ahead in the eons long war against the Purists—a war that raged across the whole of space and time.For years, I caught only brief glimpses of this life: a stern woman’s face looking down at me as I lay in a clear plastic bassinet, the pain of a broken wrist, and the unpleasant jab of tanbark against my spine. Born into this body, my spirit slept in a small corner of its mind. United and yet separate until the physical form was ready, for a child’s mind simply could not process eternity.My thoughts snapped into place, and I inherited, in excruciating detail, the memories of a lifetime lived. No immortal knew what happened when our minds achieved synergy, but it felt like my soul suddenly clicked into alignment with this body’s neurons. The process was abrupt and shocking even after untold permutations, like a memory dump from a massive supercomputer. Twenty years of daily events, knowledge, and struggles were mine in a split second. I knew who I was, where I was, and what I was. A place, time, and identity that could not have been less to my liking.My vision cleared. I stood in a well-lit hall lined with thick metal plates and reinforced doors. A calm yet commanding voice played in the background—a subtle reminder to cultivate unity and serve the greater purpose. “Preserve strength. Embody perfection. Maintain obedience.” My eyes discreetly explored the lines and curves of my body. It was petite and feminine, with sufficient curves to avoid being boyish but a distinct lack of height. The skin on my delicate long-fingered hands was a dark caramel, the nails neatly manicured, and I ran one of them through straight waist-length black hair to feel its smooth silky thickness.Surrounding me were a plethora of other young people, all of them disturbingly alike. They all had dark hair, dark eyes, and honey-toned skin, complemented by bodies that were young, attractive, and fit. These were the Union Elite. All dressed in uniforms of white button-down shirts, black slacks or skirts, and shiny polished black shoes. They looked like bronzes cast from the same mold, and the effect was eerie, like being surrounded by dozens of identical twins all filing in an unnatural orderly fashion to their next classes. This compound was built to house and educate society’s so-called best and brightest, but the hall and building surrounding it were armored for a reason.I knew, from this and previous lives, that there was danger here, and not just to the students’ minds from blatant indoctrination. Their Civil War was a constant threat, often bleeding over into these remaining pockets of civilization. The year was three hundred and fifty-six in the Plebeian calendar, and this was the planet Earth.The Elites’ university was situated on the semi-arid high plains that I remembered as the United States of America. Now this area of windblown and sun-scorched earth was called the North Western Sector. When the new era was founded centuries ago, the people of the world had experienced a brief period of renewed hope. The world had been united, all people were equal, and they would work together to build a better future for humankind. The newly christened Elites would be benevolent and altruistic leaders.The naïveté of those people and their dream of endless peace had not lasted a decade. Instead, the world had been plunged into a centuries-long Civil War, and was ruled over by a cruel and selfish caste of super humans who viewed the rest of humanity as base, dangerous, animals. All at the whim and design of a single Purist, another immortal, who had twisted those noble dreams to his purpose. Yet, those events were now distant history, and I had to live in the here and now.A bell chimed, and the students disappeared into their bunker-like classrooms. I stood frozen in place as they passed me by, still caught in the shock of a new and different existence. A number of confused glances were thrown my way.“Lini. Is something wrong?” A soft touch to my arm preceded the serious expression that drifted into view. The voice and face were familiar. One of the many Elites who was genetically this body’s first cousin. She motioned me toward one of the open doors.“No, nothing is wrong, Saran. I apologize for my inattention.” I forced myself into motion and trailed after the line of students filing into their next lecture.The room was stark, white cinderblock walls with a half-dozen small wooden desks facing a larger desk and chalkboard. The lack of windows managed to give it an even more depressing penal feel. I plopped into an open seat, dropped my light backpack on the floor, and turned to face the instructor.“Today, we will be discussing the foundation of the Union,” said Charles, the history professor. He leaned against his large wooden desk in a casual pose that portrayed both confidence and arrogance in spades. Dark hair and eyes, sharp cheekbones, and a toned body, a model specimen of the Union’s breeding program. In a vain attempt to delay a long afternoon of monotony and conveniently edited events, I sighed, and put my hand up.Charles ignored me.“Before the founding of the Union, the world was littered with separate countries. These small powers drove a nearly constant state of warfare, resulting in widespread poverty, and humanitarian abuses. Today, I want us to discuss how these governmental, cultural, social, and economic entities were motivated by greed, racism, and false prophets to enforce their individual wills on all peoples. Saran, if you could read the excerpt on page 325, the third paragraph concerning Manifest Destiny.”History, or the self-serving fiction of a victorious reactionary authoritarian regime.The Union had started out as a tempting illusion dangled before the people of Earth by a Purist, but it quickly turned into the malignant nightmare he intended. Millions died in the ethnic cleansing Petrov instituted, and even more in the unsuccessful wars to overthrow him. Hundreds of years later, a small group ruled from on high by virtue of the “superiority” of their birth and technological advancement had ground to a screeching halt. Meanwhile, the rest of humanity was withering under the weight of its own impotence.The distinct crack of submachine gun fire yanked me back into the present. My senses instantly alert to the slightest movement. Another shot rang out, and men’s shouts laced with pain came from the direction of the building’s entrance. The unexpected sounds faded into a misleading tranquility.“Raid,” I whispered to shatter the pregnant silence.
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About the Author
J.A. KENNEY   J.A. Kenney lives in Aurora, Colorado, with a breathtaking view of the Rocky Mountains—in the winter, when the sky is clear, and if she stands on her tiptoes in exactly the right spot.
Three cats, a Chihuahua mix who thinks she is a Mastiff, and her beloved husband share her humble abode.
She has been writing since she found out that playing alien witches was more fun than tag. Her stories are a blend of science fiction, fantasy, and romance with strong female protagonists and drool worthy heroes.
When she is not writing she reads voraciously, sings, skis, rides her Harley, and grudgingly assists with home improvement projects.
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Published on June 22, 2014 05:00

June 18, 2014

Ode to Beta Readers

Call them pre-readers, beta-readers, sounding-boards, part-time muses, angels, life-savers, whatever you like, today I am doing an ode to beta readers:   When the first draft is done,
The work's just begun. A read-through or two,
Won't find errors for you. A fresh set of eyes will see;
"This doesn't make any sense to me." "Witty comeback," or "Cringe-worthy phrases,"
Someone to read over two hundred pages. "This story is great," or "Ooh, try again,"
Someone who has a snazzy red pen.
A supportive ear for when fears strike,
Someone to push when you just want to pike.A sounding board for new ideas, Someone to wipe your virtual tears.
An angel committed even when, The time has come for read-through ten.
A person on whom you can depend,A reader first, but later . . . a friend.

On a more serious note: I love my pre-reader, Jen. She is there when I am having my moments of insecurity and often knows my characters better than I do (or at least she isn't as willing to try to bend their wills to her own needs -- although there have been conversations about one of my characters, Ethan . . . ) Even though we have continents and many thousands of miles between us, I often find talking with her helps to clarify things in my own mind. She also let's me know when my Aussie is showing (seriously, fortnight is such a handy word, I think the US should catch up ;) ) 

So to the giver of commas and grammar advise, the unpaid therapist, and the wonderful person who I consider a dear friend, I say: THANK YOU
 
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Published on June 18, 2014 00:24

June 14, 2014

Mixing my Mythology

Some people are very particular about their mythology and lore. What I mean by that is that there are people who get persnickety when the lore that they are familiar with is messed with or mixed up with something from a different culture. For example:

People who get upset that Stephenie Meyer made vampires sparklePeople who dislike that the vampires in "Being Humans" can abstain from human blood (in some scenes are even seen eating normal food) and go out in sunlight.  People who rage that Supernatural can have demons and angels, but also Norse and Greek gods, and all manner of creature in between. There will always be those who love a particular brand of mythology, a particular type of creature, or a particular culture so much that they don't want it to be shifted or change. They don't want to see a different interpretation of their creature du jour, and I can understand that. I can understand why someone fascinated with the specifics of Greek mythology might be upset with seeing Zeus taking tea with Loki.

That being said, in my twin series Daughter of Fire and Son of Rain, I have a number of different myths and creatures that are a little mixed up. Not only that, but some creatures who belong in one region of the world have migrated to another. I apologize in advance if anyone takes offence to this, but there was a conscious choice behind this decision. 
Basically, the world of the series is one where mythological creatures exist (NB: I don't regard this as a spoiler, after all it's a paranormal romance, so at least some of these things must logically exist in the world or it would just be a contemporary romance). In the course of setting the scene I decided that if one type of creature exists then logically any of these creatures might. Just because something is in Greek mythology and another in British folklore, doesn't make one more likely to occur than another. I took the view that, in this world, all myths stem from some version of a real entity. 
In regards to the regional aspect, I figured that with the world getting smaller every day with the advent of plane travel, motor vehicles, etc within the last hundred or so years, that these mythological beings, gods, and creatures would be able to traverse continents much easier than they would have a millennium or more ago.
What is your take on mixing up mythologies? Are you a stickler for the classic rules or a little more liberal in your views? I think this is one of those cases were there is no right or wrong, just opinions based on personal history and preference.  

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June 7, 2014

I should be ashamed!

I had a blog post planned for this weekend which is now queued up in the "future possibilities" pile because I wanted to take a moment to reflect on a recent opinion piece written for Slate magazine. I saw it on Facebook this morning and honestly don't want to drive more publicity to the page so won't link it here, but in short the opinion was that you should be ashamed and embarrassed if you are an adult who reads young adult (YA) books. My opinion on this opinion piece is that is it the biggest wank I've read in a long time.

Now, I should preface this by saying I'm a big believer in everyone being entitled to their opinion. It's part of the reason I refused to weigh in heavily on the debate of pull to publish that I talked about in last week's blog post. However, in this instance, I don't believe that the person in question is entitled to share her opinion. Why? Not because she isn't entitled to feel that way, if that's her belief than who are we to argue with her. However, her opinion is harmful to others and I think that's what is wrong. I know people who never enjoyed reading at school, and never found the love of books that I myself was lucky to find at an early age. Some of these people have, as adults, discovered series like Twilight, Hunger Games and Divergent which have put them on the course to being book lovers.

Shaming adults for not reading hi-brow "literary" fiction makes people like this, people who are willing to read things purely for the escapism that books, in particular YA and NA (New Adult) books can give. Worlds where good triumphs over evil, where characters can be dragged to hell and back but things can be okay in the end (or at least, mostly okay). If we follow her advice and begin shaming adults for what they choose to enjoy, what happens to these people? The ones who don't want a book to be a slog to get through, the ones who enjoy a bit of fluff to read the way we enjoy romcom movies when we are over watching the terribleness of the world.

Think of it another way:- I watched Frozen with my seven-year-old daughter when it hit the cinemas last December. I enjoyed it. We went back and saw it again at the cinema when there where cheap seats. I bought the DVD when it was released. We love Frozen. I'd probably even watch it without my daughter at my side, just like I watched Aladdin, The Little Mermaid, and all the other Disney classics for years before she was born. Should I be ashamed for enjoying a movie made for children? Should I be embarrassed that the story wasn't "highbrow"?

Personally, I love a good YA book. There is nothing like getting lost in a read that you can knock over in a day or two. Especially where the world is rich in color and detail. There's something nostalgic about being able to relive first loves, first kisses, first times.

My Daughter of Fire/Son of Rain twin series is a New Adult series, which according to the article is something to be ashamed about reading if you an adult. I love the concept of New Adult, of being able to relive the wonder of taking those first steps into true adulthood--negotiating relationships which can sometimes be tenuous, that period of adjustment where everyone starts to accumulate the baggage which they will carry through life with them, the woes of higher education and living alone--or with a partner--for the first time. It's a crazy time in our lives and while we're in the middle of it, we don't get a chance to enjoy it. Looking back, it's a time of so much personal growth and development that it's great to get a chance to relive it through the actions of the character of a novel.

My take on the article? Forget it. The writers seems like someone who only wants to read things that challenge her and that's great. For HER. I say read what you enjoy. Read what you love. If that's an 800-page tome which requires a dictionary on hand to decipher every second word than great. If it's a 200-page YA paranormal romance that's also great. Neither is better, just as long as you enjoy it. I'll leave you today with the following graphic which has never been more relevant than after reading the terrible article this morning.


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Published on June 07, 2014 02:59

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