Bre Faucheux's Blog, page 63

Editing, editing, editing…

If there is one thing that will tire your brain out after seven straight hours, it’s editing. I am to the point of nit picking at absolutely every single minor detail, and it is starting to drive me crazy. I might be better off just letting it go as is, but I can’t really do that. I am on my third draft of my first book and I can’t really justify just going with it right now because I am finding teeny tiny errors.

Bottom line, my first manuscript and I have had a relationship for over a year now. It’s time to break up. Its been long, hard, and even though we had some great times, especially in the beginning, our relationship must come to an end soon.

I would love to hire a copy editor to help me out. I really would. But as of this moment, I am counting on my years and years of professional English tutelage for my edits. I want an editor, I would kill for one. I just can’t afford it. And all the ones worth having are booked weeks or months out. Bottom line, if I get too many reviews back saying that it is littered with grammatical errors, I will pull it and edit it again. No other option at this point. I have read a ton of blogs that say, “Well, if you don’t get it copy edited, then you really don’t care about your work.” Uh, BULLSHIT!! I just can’t shovel out $300-$1000 right now. I just plain don’t have the money. I am trying to get my own place, and I need ever single spare dime in the couch right now. I also have student loans riding my back. So whatever asshole came up with the idea that you are not a real writer, or you don’t care about the outcome of your story if you don’t get a copy editor or some nonsense like that, is on my shit list!! I was the one in school that all the foreign kids came to for help  on editing their papers into English, so don’t give me that crap! (Okay, rant done).

In good news, I did buy my cover (the only thing that I afford at this time as it was only $30).  The cover art is so gorgeous and it fits my story beautifully. It’s mystical, magical and ahhh-mazing! I almost started crying when I first saw it with my book title and my name on it. I can’t wait to see it up on the Kindle website.

I have been thinking a lot lately on how other writers/authors work. i have read about so many ebook authors who literally write a full length novel in a month or a couple of weeks. Some people can do that brilliantly, others, not so much. Given my home life right now, that is not really a feasible option. I managed to finish my previous book in two months and that was really pushing it for me. I hear about authors like Stephen King or some such famous person that writes 10,000 words a day no matter what. But my question is, is this kind of work conducive to great writing? Or is it just get as much material out there as soon as possible? I have never known anyone who can write that much and not have it read like word upchuck. It might get the story knocked out, but eventually reviews will pour in about the low quality of the writing.

I usually try for 4,000 words a day when I am writing a book. That has always seemed like a fair and perfectly obtainable goal. Does anyone else have a particular work count that they strive for?

The Concept of Planning

I have finished my second book. Which isn’t so much a “finally” as it is a “Really? You mean you’re actually done?”

This book was much faster than my first. My first (after three reviews and edits) comes in at around 92,000 words or so. It took me a year to finish the first draft. My second book is around 72,000. It took two and half months to finish.

In all fairness, the second was amid some very difficult jobs, school, and travelling all the time. The second was done faster because I have more time on my hands now that I am out of school. But for some reason, this was one harder to finish than my first. I could clearly visualize the first one from beginning to end. I didn’t always know exactly where things were going, but that’s half of the excitement for me.

I wish I could be like other writers and have a plan, write an outline, have the entire plot done, and know where things are going from the beginning to avoid any risk of writer’s block. But I can’t. My brain just doesn’t do it! It can be frustrating, but I need to just sit at the computer and write. Let things come to me and add words to paper, fix all those pesky continuity issues later, because worrying about them while I am writing drives me crazy.

I always hear writers talking about how they plan out a book. But here is my question. How important is planning? Because I can’t do it. Planning a trip, fine. Planning a meal, great. Planning a schedule, excellent.  A story line? No way! I figure that out as I go along. I don’t know much about characters until they actually start talking. I don’t know their intentions until they tell me. I don’t know what they are going to do any more than they do. I have to just plant my butt down and write. I might have ideas or pictures in my head of what is going to occur some day down the line for a character, but that’s it. Does anyone else work like this?

When I was in school, I would write most of my English or History papers in one sitting. I couldn’t do it any other way. And the first draft, was generally the one I turned in. I told I teacher once (big mistake) that this was how i worked because I generally got better grades when I just wrote it all out in one go. He told me that it was a completely reckless and irresponsible way to write. Which was probably true… but I always got A’s in the process. And he never knew the difference between a paper that was done in an afternoon versus one that had been hashed out for weeks.

I have never known any other way to write. And if i do get jammed or confused as to what comes next, I back away. Sometimes for a couple days. I will take a shower, go watch a movie, read… anything to get my mind away from it. My brain might revisit the plot a couple of times whilst I am daydreaming throughout those few hours and that is when I get the big ideas. I had no clue how my current book was going to end until my dad and I were sitting around watching TV (can’t even remember the show, although I think it was ‘Captain America,’ a very under-rated film), when a huge detail of the final plot hit me like a bolt of lightning. Followed by a “Ugh, dad, be right back. Gotta go write something down.”

Maybe it is a reckless and irresponsible way to write that way. Maybe it is a great way to end up with a huge case of writers block. But I would much rather do things my way and in the way that I know things work for me than stress myself out by knowing that most other writers might have a different formula for writing.

What i have is a writing notebook. I jot down ideas before they can leave my brain and that is the only thing I use to remember “plot” things. Which isn’t even true plotting. It’s more like idea generated throw up on a bunch of pages. And oddly enough, i hardly ever go back and look through it. It’s more of a reference so I don’t forget the small details I wanted to integrate into the story.

How do you sort out of a book or a short story? Do you plot it out? Write an outline? Please tell me that i am not alone in the world by simply sitting down and letting the story come to me as I go along…