Nav Logan's Blog - Posts Tagged "attitude"
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A double drabble for you.
Positive
Frances peered out of the window, noticing the rainbow that crested the grey skies above.
Putting on her coat, she headed off to the bus stop, skipping through the puddles.
She turned the corner to see the bus pulling away. Shrugging, she sat down to wait, knowing another would arrive eventually.
A car pulled up against the kerb and the window rolled down. It was Anthony from the office, offering her a lift. He was a little older than her, but a real gentleman, so she smiled her thanks and hopped in.
And that was how their budding romance blossomed.
Negative
Francis peered out of the window, cursing at the rain that fell from the miserable grey skies.
Putting on his coat, he hurried off to the bus stop, carefully avoiding the many puddles.
Francis turned the corner as the bus pulled away. He raced after it, but was ignored. Fuming, he decided to walk.
A car pulled up alongside and the window rolled down. It was Antoinette, from work, offering him a lift.
She was such a loser. He’d rather walk than have his mates see him in her car.
And that was how their budding romance failed to blossom.
Positive
Frances peered out of the window, noticing the rainbow that crested the grey skies above.
Putting on her coat, she headed off to the bus stop, skipping through the puddles.
She turned the corner to see the bus pulling away. Shrugging, she sat down to wait, knowing another would arrive eventually.
A car pulled up against the kerb and the window rolled down. It was Anthony from the office, offering her a lift. He was a little older than her, but a real gentleman, so she smiled her thanks and hopped in.
And that was how their budding romance blossomed.
Negative
Francis peered out of the window, cursing at the rain that fell from the miserable grey skies.
Putting on his coat, he hurried off to the bus stop, carefully avoiding the many puddles.
Francis turned the corner as the bus pulled away. He raced after it, but was ignored. Fuming, he decided to walk.
A car pulled up alongside and the window rolled down. It was Antoinette, from work, offering him a lift.
She was such a loser. He’d rather walk than have his mates see him in her car.
And that was how their budding romance failed to blossom.
