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October 24, 2021
Cozy Mysteries: How Small Towns Chip in to Find the Killer
by Elizabeth Spann Craig, @elizabethscraig
Cozy mysteries have a host of different settings, but one of the most popular, for writers as well as readers, is the small-town setting. It's fun to have this really insular environment where everyone knows everyone else…and then have one of those well-known residents be the local killer.
Another cool aspect of small town settings for cozies is the dynamic where the town itself sort of chips in to unmask the killer. Here are a few ways that happens:
How Small-Town Residents Collaborate with Cozy SleuthsA common goal. With small-town cozies, you start with this idyllic locale. Then something terrible happens (or two something terribles happen) and everything becomes cloudy. All the residents want is for their idyll to be restored. Everyone is gung-ho to get rid of the person who's created this problem.
Residents supply backstory and context. If the sleuth wasn't well-acquainted with the victim, the residents are more than delighted to fill her in. Whether it's at the salon, in the diner, or at the grocery store, residents of small towns are happy to offer context for the killing and help compile a list of likely suspects.
Gossip provides clues. Not only are residents filling in backstory on the victim, they're also giving information about all kinds of things: overheard arguments, observed assignations, and phone calls they've eavesdropped on while in the post office line.
Gossip provides red herrings. Small town residents can also supply your cozy mystery novel with more complexity and length by sending your sleuth out in the wrong direction and after the wrong people. Because gossip isn't always true…and even if it is true, someone who had an argument with the victim didn't necessarily murder .
Lots of eyes, ears, and general nosiness. With the common goal mentioned above, the small town in your cozy is on high alert. Everyone is offering their own ideas, poking their nose into everyone else's business, and delving into others' secrets. It's a recipe for drama, or at least some subplots.
Alibis can be tricky. If a suspect wasn't at home with his wife, where was he? With neighbors on the lookout and small business owners happy to dispute erroneous accounts, suspects are going to have a tough time offering a foolproof alibi.
Do you write small-town settings? Read them? What aspects about small-town life do you find appealing?
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October 23, 2021
Twitterific Writing Links
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
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October 17, 2021
Subverting Expectations in Satisfying Ways
By Jessica Thompson, @jessicathauthor
I stumbled across the concept of subverting expectations while studying the movie Knives Out. This movie felt so revolutionary and perfect, and digging deeper, I found the internet a-buzz with discussions of how this movie used this storytelling tool.
Since I have been studying this lately and was having a hard time grasping it, I decided to write down what I have learned and share it with you.
If you find a good example or think of something I haven’t said, please comment below so we can all learn from each other.
We will talk a lot about movies because they are the most available examples of how to subvert expectations, but this is a principle that you can, and probably should, incorporate into your writing. Before we begin, SPOILER ALERT! We will be ruining The Last Jedi and Knives Out, so go watch those before reading this.
First, definitions.
Subvert – verb gerund or present participle: subverting
undermine the power and authority of (an established system or institution).
(Dictionary.com)
Subvert ExpectationsTo behave contrary to an established belief or assumption for the purpose of being fresh and interesting. Usually used in the arts when analyzing the reaction of the audience to a performance or piece of writing.
Verisimilitude – noun (stay tuned, we’ll get to this)the appearance of being true or real.
having the appearance of truth : PROBABLE
a theoretical concept that determines the level of truth in an assertion or hypothesis. It is also one of the most essential literary devices of fiction writing. Verisimilitude helps to promote a reader's willing suspension of disbelief.
(Dictionary.com, Merriam-Webster.com, Masterclass.com)
I don’t know about you, but isolated definitions don’t help me much. I need concrete examples. Popular culture gives us many examples of creators subverting the audience’s expectations–both done well and done disastrously.
Knives Out is a widely accepted example of “subverting expectations” being done well.For one thing, it echoes a traditional mystery in many ways, but then changes from a ‘whodunnit’ to a “how will she get away with this” type story.
The Last Jedi is a widely accepted example of it being done wrong.The example that springs to mind is the fizzled mystery of who Rey’s parents are.
Why is the entire internet comparing these two movies? Because they were done by the same director in quick succession. What did Rian Johnson learn in between making these two films? How to subvert expectations in a satisfying way.
How do we do this as writers? How do you find a fresh way to surprise your readers, but not in a way that feels contrived and unnatural?
According to The Closer Look on YouTube, three things are needed to make the subversion satisfying.
It needs to serve and improve the story from that point forward
It must have strong verisimilitude to the story that came before it
It can’t break promises
Subverting expectations is a way to break the rules or expectations of storytelling, or the genre, and when done successfully it creates interest or humor. In her day, Agatha Christie did just that by having our main detective be a short, funny-looking Belgian man (Poirot) or a kindly, soft, pink, old spinster (Miss Marple.) Nowadays, subverting expectations is almost the norm. It seems that every movie, especially remakes, have something that recalls expectations and pokes fun.
But it needs to be done in a satisfying way, or the internet will destroy you forever… apparently. So, let's tackle these one at a time.
It needs to serve and improve the story from that point forward.A subversion should only be attempted if it will actually improve the story. If it leaves your reader saying, “what?” or the dreaded, “Yeah, so?” then it has been done wrong. I would say that Luke Skywalker tossing his lightsaber off the cliff was an example of a subversion NOT serving to improve the story. Sure, it showed that he had turned his back on the Force and the ways of the Jedi, but we already knew that. I would argue that it was put in to surprise the viewer, but did not actually improve the story. In a writing class I took from the genius Heather Harper Ellett, she said, “Things should not be put in just to be weird. They have to serve the story.” I would assert that things should also not be put in just for shock value.
Don’t add a subversion that sacrifices your long term story in exchange for an immediate thrill.A good example of this being done wrong is the mini storyline between Finn and Captain Phasma. She was his former commander and essentially should have been his arch rival. As I have learned in my efforts to learn how to write good villains, the good guy should not defeat the bad guy in their first meeting!
Wouldn’t it have been much more powerful if Finn had left Phasma’s unit (as he did,) then faced her and almost been killed, then met her again later after more character growth, as equals and warriors, then defeated her with his old weapon, or maybe hers, and a one-liner that stung? I think so! Even if looking to subvert expectations and mess with that formula, they could have toyed with details and still kept that element of growth and defeating one's own demons.
Instead, that character arc and growth was abruptly ended by killing her off way too early. I would argue that the director sacrificed the potentially fulfilling longer story of Finn’s growth, in exchange for immediate gratification.
Don’t do that. We’re writers. We play the long game.
I would sum up that it means the subversion has to take the story in a direction, from then on, that is interesting and makes sense, which brings us to our next point.
It must have strong verisimilitude to the story that came before it.As we covered in the definitions, verisimilitude refers to how real the subversion seems. Your world can have dragons and magic and zombies, but that is all established in the setup. The subversion that comes later needs to seem “real” within the world that you have set up. It needs to follow the magic rules, align with the timeline that your reader is following in their head, and be in character with the personalities you have already created.
When Luke Skywalker throws his beloved weapon and family heirloom off the cliff, it wasn’t believable because it wasn’t congruent with the story. In Pride and Prejudice, if the haughty and reserved Mr. Darcy had suddenly said, “I’m sorry I’ve been so prideful, I’ll change, will you marry me?,” it would have been totally out of character. If his love interest Elizabeth Bennett, strong and witty, had replied “It’s okay, I forgive you. I’ll marry you” then all readers would have thrown the book down in disgust. That exchange would have not been verisimilar to the characters that Jane Austen had set up. We all know they will eventually get there, but they have a lot more growth to do before that happens, and that’s the essence of the story
Sometimes, a book or movie intentionally and dramatically delivers something contrary to the audience’s expectations. Addressing it outright can help the audience follow along.When a movie about time travel messes up the movies that came before it, producers call it a “reboot”. We accept that this reboot-time-traveling business is going to logically interfere with the events that occurred in the past or might happen in the future; we’re okay with it because it’s been branded as a reboot. Think of the Terminator and Star Trek franchises. They address and lay to rest the fact that it is not going to line up nicely with your expectations.
When this is done on a small scale, it’s often humorous. This morning, my son’s episode of Hello Ninja had our protagonists in a Wild West situation. Then they said, “The only thing we haven’t done is have a showdown with a bad guy in a black hat.” (Or something to that effect.) Then a rabbit steps out to have a showdown with them. The kids look at his absence of hat, so the rabbit steps out of frame, then comes back with a black cowboy hat. They followed the rules so rigidly that it was funny because they addressed it. In the first X-men movie (the first one made, not talking about the chronology inside the franchise), Cyclops says to Wolverine, “You’d prefer yellow spandex?” It’s a throwback to the cartoon! They gave Wolverine a way better outfit, but then called attention to the tiny subversion of expectations in a funny way! I love it! It didn’t line up with the previously established wardrobe choices of the franchise, but it worked especially well because they poked fun at it.
It can’t break the promisesIn Brandon Sanderson’s video lectures on YouTube, he talks about an author’s “promises” in the setup of the story, and then delivering on those promises. He shares that one of his manuscripts failed at this in the first draft. He says that all of his characters are prepared and determined to go to one place, let’s call it “A,” but he, as the writer, knew that the main action was really going to go down in another place, we’ll call it “B.” When the characters got diverted during their travels, essentially as a subversion, and ended up at “B,” the readers thought it was a side story or side quest. They were all waiting for the characters to get back on track and go to “A.” He explains that it was because the promises that he had set up were not kept. The reader did not feel satisfied by this change because it did not keep the promises.
Many critics say the same about the reveal in The Last Jedi about who Rey’s parents are/were.The script that came before had promised a mystery. It had set up that Rey’s parents were somehow important or that it was going to be a significant plot point. Instead, our expectations were subverted in a way that was not satisfying when it is casually revealed that her parents were nobodies and not important to the story. (That changes again later, but that's another discussion.) That promise was never delivered, so it felt wrong and unsatisfying.
Knives Out, however, circled back and delivered on its promises even though it looked like it might not.When the genre changed from a “whodunnit” to a “how will she get away with this” I was not convinced that we had abandoned the original mystery. I couldn’t anticipate where the story could go after we saw the suicide, but I waited with baited breath to see how it would turn out. The story then came back together and satisfyingly delivered on BOTH storylines or genres and fulfilled all its “whodunnit” AND “How will she get away with this” promises. The ending resolved all my questions and wrapped up everything perfectly.
If you are trying a subversion, make sure you follow all of these guidelines to make it satisfying. Do it right, even if you're trying to do something new and different. Serve the story that comes before, make it congruent with the story that comes after, and keep your promises to the reader. If you follow these three guidelines, there will still be room for creativity. Done correctly, a subversion improves your story and helps you build a solid relationship with your readers.
Good luck!
When Jessica discovered mystery novels with recipes, she knew she had found her niche.
Now Jessica is the author of the Amazon best-selling culinary cozy mystery, “A Caterer's Guide to Love and Murder,” and will be publishing her second book of the series, “A Caterer’s Guide to Holidays and Homicide,” on October 19, 2021. She is active in her local writing community and is a member of the Writers’ League of Texas and the Storymakers Guild. She received a bachelor's degree in Horticulture from Brigham Young University but has always enjoyed writing and reading mysteries.
As an avid home chef and food science geek, Jessica has won cooking competitions and been featured in the online Taste of Home recipe collection. She also tends to be the go-to source for recipes, taste-testing, and food advice among her peers.
Jessica is originally from California, but now has adopted the Austin, Texas lifestyle. She enjoys living in the suburbs with her husband and young children, but also enjoys helping her parents with their nearby longhorn cattle ranch.
Deck the halls…with a personal chef, a snowed-in lodge, and a sprinkling of murder!
“Watch the knives!”
While acting as personal chef for a friend’s mountain retreat, Violet and her husband, Jake, must set aside their stress over infertility and create a magical and delicious holiday – until tragedy crashes the party.
Being snowed in and unreachable from town, Violet and Jake end up hired for a different kind of job – finding out which of the guests committed murder and why they’re trying to frame their hostess.
Violet must find a balance between following her gut and keeping it all under control until the police can reach them, while still managing the kitchen. But can she sniff out the killer before anyone else bites the big one?
A Caterer’s Guide to Holidays and Homicide will give you a culinary holiday you won’t forget!
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October 16, 2021
Twitterific Writing Links
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
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October 10, 2021
Writing the Cozy Mystery: Quiet Beginnings
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
I spend a lot of time reading blog posts and sharing them. I've noticed there are tons of posts on crafting better story openers. The posts usually talk about hooking readers quickly, drawing them into the action or the character. Agents and experienced writers share critiques of story beginnings and offer suggestions for making them shine.
This is also something that can be important in a cozy mystery, of course. No one wants a beginning that's stifled by exposition or backstory dumps or introducing an excessive number of characters at once.
And the opener of the first book in a cozy series needs special attention. Readers need to be introduced to the sleuth and hopefully drawn in by the sleuth's personality. The story world needs to be set up, as well as the series hook (crafts, cuisine, animals). Then there's a crime to be introduced. There's a lot to juggle in the first book of a cozy series.
But if you're writing a cozy mystery series, I think it's often preferable to start the story out a little differently. That' s because you can start out with your idyllic, happy, safe…and, yes…cozy environment. You can start out with what's routine: what a normal day in your story world looks like. This doesn't have to go on for chapters–just a glimpse of happy normality and what's lost when someone dies in the close-knit community. You wreck the idyll by introducing a murder and a subsequent investigation. Then, at the end of the story, you tidy it all up again and deliver that same sense of safety and reassurance. You can deliberately mirror the beginning and the ending to give an especially satisfying air to the story…that it's all been wrapped up and order and justice have prevailed. Janice Hardy has a nice post on mirroring.
That's not to say I haven't started books out with a body practically on page one, because I definitely have. But I often like to start out with my octogenarian sleuth and her senior sidekick quietly working on puzzles together and sipping coffee–before the knock on the door that jumpstarts everything.
That's my quick cozy writing tip of the day. :) If you read or write cozies, is the quiet beginning something you've noticed, too? Are there other genres that use this approach?
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October 9, 2021
Twitterific Writing Links
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
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October 3, 2021
Want Powerful Conflict? Don’t Forget the Stakes
by Angela Ackerman, @AngelaAckerman
A common writing misconception is that conflict automatically means reader engagement. After all, story experts are always ringing the conflict bell (me included), telling writers to include lots of it to make sure things aren’t easy for your characters. And it’s true; we should have lots of meaningful conflict in the story to ensure they are challenged, stressed, and forced outside their comfort zone.
But conflict alone won’t pull your readers in.
Don’t mishear me–as a reader, I like fictional car chases, wedding sabotage, and homicidal maniacs at the bedroom window as much as the next person. But for the conflict craziness to really hit home, I need to know why it’s happening, and why it matters. In other words, something meaningful must be at stake to make me care.
Think about it this way. When bad things happen to bad people, how do you feel? Let’s say a pipe bursts at a neighbor’s house, the same guy who constantly complains to the homeowner association because he doesn’t like the rainbow flag flying over your deck. Or a restaurant that once gave you food poisoning is shut down by the health department. Other than a bit of schadenfreude, do you feel anything substantial? Is your day (or life) impacted in a relevant way?
But, when bad things happen to good people, that’s a different story. If your sister-in-law goes into labor far too early or your best friend is jailed because her wayward stepson is dealing drugs out of her basement, you don’t just shrug and move on. You’re making calls, trying to figure out what you can do, how to help. You’re invested because you care about the people involved and what’s happening to them.
Stakes Reveal What’s Most Important to the CharacterFor conflict to matter, something meaningful needs to be at stake: a painful cost incurred if your character fails to navigate the situation successfully. If the retired munitions expert doesn’t defuse the bomb in time, it goes off and kills a building full of people. Or if our henpecked heroine can’t stop her toxic family from running her life, she’ll forever lose the man she loves. When each new problem has a serious or else attached to it, the character must act, even when there’s danger or they are out of their depth. Their desire to avoid these negative consequences becomes a big part of their motivation for achieving their goal.
Stakes, like conflict, should show up in your story like a bumper crop of rotten apples, increasing tension and raising the cost of failure by the bushel. And while the goal is to create stakes so high the character can’t turn back—not even when she's staring down her deepest fears—the consequences of failure are up to you and how evil you’re feeling. To get you started, consider the categories below.
Far-Reaching Stakes, sometimes called public stakes, are those that include loss for others if the protagonist fails. If a bomb goes off, the protagonist may die, but so will everyone else in the building. And it goes beyond them too; loved ones standing anxiously behind the police tape will also be impacted. Maybe the city loses the distinction of being the safest in America. Maybe a cure for a disease is housed in a laboratory within the building, and it will be lost if the bomb goes off. Lots at stake.
Moral Stakes are in play when someone’s beliefs are at risk. Imagine a police officer being offered a bribe to overlook a crime. If he refuses, he holds true to his moral code and identity as an officer, but the powerful person offering the payoff will be sure to end his career. If he takes the bribe, he reaps a temporary reward but sacrifices his values and his identity. Moral stakes can cut both ways and have the added benefit of revealing some of your character’s deepest layers to readers.
Primal Stakes, also called death stakes, involve the death of something significant: innocence, a relationship, a career, dream, idea, belief, reputation, or a physical life. Death takes something important from the character, something that matters. And if it matters to your character—provided readers care about them—it will matter to them too.
Connect Stakes to your CharacterStakes should touch your character on some level, even in the case of far-reaching stakes. If there’s no reason the outcome really matters to the protagonist, he’s going to look at the task and think, Well, this isn’t my problem. We need him to believe it is his problem, otherwise why should he risk hardship, danger, and perhaps even death? So, we give him skin in the game by making things personal and endangering something or someone important to him.
Mixing together different types of stakes will not only make the problem at hand more interesting for readers, it makes the struggle over what to do more realistic. In the real world when a challenge or situation comes along that’s dire or threatening, we act. But far more often the problem we’re faced with requires more than instinct, and there are layers to the situation. We weigh and measure, making calculations over how to respond. For example, something might feel morally wrong to do, like tell a lie, but if it is for the greater good, we might do it. Or if lying might light a fuse to a relationship we care about, we might tell the truth even though it’s humiliating, dangerous, or costs us an opportunity we worked hard to secure. The point is, we look at all the angles to puzzle out what we should do next, and so our characters should, too.
The Final Piece: Making Readers Care about the CharacterStakes are a necessary part of effective conflict, but another crucial piece is the reader’s attachment to the character. If readers don’t care, they may be mildly curious as to whether the protagonist will succeed, but they won’t be invested in the outcome.
So how do we make readers care? Well, it goes beyond making a character likeable or talented; it really comes down to their inner landscape: their morals and values, vulnerabilities and wounds, their fears and needs. By chipping through our character’s tough exterior and revealing their inner thoughts, emotions, and desires, readers come to know them and identify with their struggles. They may share an insecurity. They may experience some of the same doubts. Maybe the character is torn between following a dream and pleasing others, something readers can relate to because they’ve sat in that chair before. These moments become emotional touchstones because readers can connect with what the character is facing and feeling. (Here’s a tool to help with deep-level brainstorming.)
Ultimately, what’s at risk for your character is the goal. But for writers, there’s risk, too. Readers will close the book if stakes are mismanaged, they don’t care about a character, or the conflict is too low. So, focus on drawing readers in. Work at getting your character's situation firmly into the heads of your readers. Embed an invisible hook so every time they put the book down, they’re thinking about what will happen next, how the character’s going to solve the problem, and what other forces might step in to complicate matters. Make your readers so emotionally involved that they fear for the character and don’t want anything to happen to them.
Need More Help with Conflict and Story Stakes?
The Conflict Thesaurus: A Writer’s Guide to Obstacles, Adversaries, and Inner Struggles (Volume 1). It’s packed with ideas on how to apply meaningful conflict to reveal your character, challenge them, and keep the story tense and on track. It also digs into a plethora of conflict scenarios to help you plot fresh scenes.
Angela Ackerman is a writing coach, international speaker, and co-author of The Emotion Thesaurus: A Writer’s Guide to Character Expression and its many sequels. Her bestselling writing guides are available in eight languages, and are sourced by universities, recommended by agents and editors, and used by writers around the world. She’s also one half of the popular site, Writers Helping Writers, and co-founder of One Stop for Writers, a creativity portal loaded with one-of-a-kind tools, resources, and a Storyteller’s Roadmap that makes planning, writing, and revising a novel almost criminally easy.
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October 2, 2021
Twitterific Writing Links
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
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September 26, 2021
Pros and Cons of Outlining
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
I still think of myself as a very reluctant outliner. It's definitely my least-favorite part of the creative process. Brainstorming is fun, drafting is fun. Even editing can be very satisfying. But outlining? Not so much for me.
I started out as a pantser, making up my mysteries as I went along. I was, actually, pretty good at this. Then, one day, I ran right into a huge plot hole just a week or two before my deadline for Penguin. That was the last un-outlined book I've ever written.
I don't think outlining is an either/or proposition. I think there's room for a little middle ground. Even if you don't have a plan for your entire book, you could create a mini-outline for your next writing session…just a sentence or two giving you some direction when you pick up your project again.
Here are my thoughts on the pros and cons of the outlining process, as I see them.
Pros of OutliningI write faster. Soo much faster. That's because I don't even have to mull things over when I open my laptop: I just write whatever my outline tells me to write that day.
I don't have plot holes. My plot works because I've already tested it through a full outline.
I'm able to jump from series to series without having a hard time working on a series I haven't written in for months because everything is laid out for me.
Because I have a roadmap, I don't worry about the book very much as I'm writing it. I know the book will be finished and that everything in the story will work.
I get my covers done for the next book several months before I even begin drafting the story. After penning an outline, I write the back cover copy and the book designer goes off that.
After any sort of a break (like the one I took last December), it makes it much easier to dive back into the story.
Cons of OutliningTime. It takes me about a week to fill out an outline for a project. My outline includes all the parts of a mystery, but also the subplots and what's happening to the secondary characters in the story.
For several books after I started outlining, I felt that my writing was a little flat or a little stilted, which had to be fixed in subsequent drafts. After getting better at following an outline, these problems disappeared.
Writing short. When I started following an outline, my writing got tighter and my books became shorter. Sometimes I do have to add more words in second drafts.
Less fun? I still really enjoy writing, but I do miss the days when I'd just make things up as I went along.
I've decided that outlining works better for me, despite the drawbacks. But I'm wondering what your writing process is like. Do you write the story organically, or do you outline?
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September 25, 2021
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by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
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