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August 11, 2012
Twitterific
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
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Using details for setting - insider details and audience details: http://bit.ly/M6j2A5 @juliettewade
Comparing pitches and queries: http://bit.ly/OLX44O
Help for Burnt Out Bloggers: http://bit.ly/OLX5FS @writeitsideways
Tips for producing podcasts/other interviews with multiple guests: http://bit.ly/RD1HAF @Porter_Anderson @philipdsjones @samatlounge
An agent on publishing uncertainties: http://bit.ly/M6EYLj @rachellegardner
Tips for Dealing With Rejection + Other Success Strategies: http://bit.ly/M6FdGh @janefriedman
What's your motif? http://bit.ly/M6Fd95 @livewritethrive
On writing diversity: http://bit.ly/M6Fj0q @sjaejones
Marketing and writing--the balance between strategy and creativity: http://bit.ly/M6FnNL @thecreativepenn @turndog_million
5 Everyday Life Ways to Spark Article Ideas: http://bit.ly/M6FusO @JulieBMack
Disable Comments for a Better Blog? http://bit.ly/M6Fw3W @problogger
15 word games: http://bit.ly/M6FzN1 @writing_tips
The mechanics behind some ebooks' success: http://bit.ly/M6G2yT @laurahazardowen @Porter_Anderson
Birdhouse-like Mini Libraries: http://bit.ly/PN70Mf @pubperspectives
Why Your Hero Needs a Yappy Sidekick: http://bit.ly/N2VEyz @KMWeiland
Afterward vs. Afterword: http://bit.ly/O9pwi4 @write_practice
Revising with Anticipation: http://bit.ly/Pq7DXA @4YALit @marissaburt
Is Your Character Stagnating? http://bit.ly/Pq7HGx @KMWeiland
3 Book Marketing FAILs and Lessons Learned: http://bit.ly/Pq7P9g @duolit
Should you stop writing? http://bit.ly/Pq83wU @ronvitale
The Courage To Launch: http://bit.ly/Pq8jfk @originalimpulse @ollinmorales
Writing Creative Non-Fiction: http://bit.ly/Pq8nMe @TimHillegonds @janice_hardy
Is Your Writing Any Good? 7 Ways to Tell: http://bit.ly/Pq8uYa
20 Tips for Writing Strong Heroines: http://bit.ly/QyCvfo @adriennedewolfe
Do Books Need A Beta Version? Analytics For Books Pave The Way: http://bit.ly/QyCzvT @fastcompany
Lightning Source Best for Self-Publishers? http://bit.ly/QyCZCt @bengalley
Ways to make money that go beyond ebook sales: http://bit.ly/QyDn3D @goblinwriter
Why Boredom Is Good for Your Creativity: http://bit.ly/QyDqfU @markmcguinness
How Batman Can Teach You To Be a Better Writer: http://bit.ly/QyDtbx @fuelyourwriting
How To Harness Your Creative Temperament and Stay Sane, Married and Sober: http://bit.ly/QyDyMr @kristinnador
A History of Sisters in Fiction: http://bit.ly/QyDxYS @theatlantic
How and Why to Guest Post: http://bit.ly/MkrJlE @karencv
Building an Online Platform: http://bit.ly/Q8E1zc @TheLitCoach
7 Free and Legal Places to Find Photos: http://bit.ly/QBM4dD @marcykennedy
The New World of Publishing: Fear: http://bit.ly/OoKxCl @deanwesleysmith
Pros and cons of POD: http://bit.ly/OkBbsW
Finding writing quotations on Goodreads: http://bit.ly/MFotCQ
Preparing the perfect pitch: http://bit.ly/LRrEWr @writerashley
An agent and author discuss the romance genre: http://bit.ly/NgC2YG @RoniLoren @SaraMegibow @janice_hardy
All about medical writing: http://bit.ly/ONoseS @womenonwriting
How a Traditional Publisher Could Harm a Writer's Career: http://bit.ly/MFp5bH @passivevoiceblg
5 lessons from a book tour newbie: http://bit.ly/RmiEPU @jamigold
Writers--be careful what you pay for: http://bit.ly/OcZdYu @nicolamorgan
5 Ways to Keep Your Writing Submissions Organized: http://bit.ly/NsWpB8 @krissybrady
How to Know When to Go to a Writing Conference: http://bit.ly/OSYMxq @jodyhedlund
How to create and maintain narrative interest: http://bit.ly/PXCaRc @jammer0501
Research Guides For Every Subject: http://bit.ly/OMLseb @litreactor
The 7-Step Write a Book Fast Program: http://zenhabits.net/write/ @zen_habits
Jack London's Advice on Honing Your Creative Craft: http://bit.ly/OzEV7Y @mcd_owell
25 Helpful Websites for Writers: http://bit.ly/OB4Mz5 @JulieBMack
30 Dr. Seuss quotations: http://bit.ly/LLzlNT
When authors apply a signature touch to a crime fiction novel: http://bit.ly/PSKMEA @mkinberg
Tips for perfecting your pitch: http://bit.ly/LU71sy @behlerpublish
Too old to debut? http://bit.ly/QWEl7m @nicolamorgan
The Discard Pile. Or, Learning by Doing: http://bit.ly/QWEAiL
How to Control a Media Interview: http://bit.ly/QWEWpJ @writersdigest
6 tips for increasing ebook sales: http://bit.ly/QWFgEI @woodwardkaren
Structure--why it might be the missing element to make your writing sing: http://bit.ly/QWGMGW
A series on POV: http://bit.ly/RAI3kG , http://bit.ly/RAI6g5 , http://bit.ly/RAI6g7 @noveleditor
The Development and Popularity of "Gritty Fantasy": http://bit.ly/MXkC8C @The_Idlewilder
Handy hyphenation chart: http://bit.ly/MXkFBx @livewritethrive
Take Your Author Website to the Next Level: http://bit.ly/MXkING @writersdigest
When you have too many 'looks' in your manuscript: http://bit.ly/MXkSEM @janice_hardy
How 1 writer (who says she has less talent than her peers) had a successful trad. publishing career: http://bit.ly/ODfbdG @threekingsbooks
The villain's journey: http://bit.ly/NXVK0y @diymfa
Snappy Answers To Awkward Questions About Characters: http://bit.ly/NXVQVW @EeleenLee
Printing up your book for submission purposes? http://bit.ly/NXVXkb @behlerpublish
Writers...Weathering the Transition – Keeping the Faith: http://bit.ly/NXW8Mj @passivevoiceblg
Writing the skeptic: http://bit.ly/NXWbHY @glencstrathy
Why Readers Pirate eBooks: http://bit.ly/NXWhzj @jasonboog
A Blog Series that Look at Great Characters: Marge Gunderson ("Fargo"): http://bit.ly/NXWB13
How Being Lazy Can Fuel Your Writing: http://bit.ly/NXWEtR @krissybrady
10 Recent Science Fiction Books That Are About Big Ideas: http://bit.ly/NXWJxL @io9
In Praise of Ripening: http://bit.ly/NXWPFr
Understanding Screenwriting: Snow White and the Huntsman, Brave, Bernie, and more: http://bit.ly/NXWUZS @House_Next_Door
Lightning Source Best for Self-Publishers? http://bit.ly/QyCZCt @bengalley
An agent on publishing uncertainties: http://bit.ly/M6EYLj @rachellegardner
Help for screenwriters--resources on drama: http://bit.ly/RncJZb
A Small-Budget Advertising Experiment: http://bit.ly/RncQE9 @DeeDeTarsio
7 Prompt Websites to Fill Your Creative Writing Well: http://bit.ly/PDQIAV @KrissyBrady
Tips for writing action scenes: http://bit.ly/Rnd8uD @thomasaknight
Creating Flawed but Enjoyable Characters: http://bit.ly/PDQSZ4 @yahighway
20 Synonyms for "Type": http://bit.ly/RndotQ
5 Reasons to Write Your Scenes in Order (and 3 Not to): http://bit.ly/NcFCGJ @KMWeiland
How Indie Authors Can Work With Trade Publishers: http://bit.ly/NcFIOt @ornaross
The Use of Drugs In Fantasy: http://bit.ly/NcFNSz @BenGalley
The Principle of Fair Use and Image Usage for Bloggers: http://bit.ly/NcFUNO @jane_l
Is "Show, Don't Tell" Overrated? http://bit.ly/NcGj2W @jamesscottbell
The 10 best closing lines of books: http://bit.ly/NcGHhG @guardianbooks
Weird O'Clock: On the Mainstream Success of "Fifty Shades of Grey" : http://bit.ly/NcGRFU @wordforteens
Self-Publishing Audiobooks: Is it Worth it? http://bit.ly/NcHHm7
Plan a Book Launch Party for an Ebook: http://bit.ly/TfNdVS @BookMarketer
Do former journalists make good novelists? http://bit.ly/NcHXBx
What Makes A Mystery Cozy? http://bit.ly/NcI8N9 @NancyMehl
Why You Need to Harness Your Sorrow to Write Well: http://bit.ly/NcIdQS @write_practice
What TV Taught 1 Writer About Writing Epic Fiction: http://bit.ly/OO4qVS @yahighway
How to choose an excerpt to showcase your novel: http://bit.ly/OO4NzN @dirtywhitecandy
A Former Big 6 Editor Gives 5 Tips for Sure-Fire Rejection: http://bit.ly/OO4Uvl @RuthHarrisBooks @annerallen
Professional screenwriters analyze "The Social Network": http://bit.ly/OOzSmU
Which Type of Opening Works Best? http://bit.ly/OOG9iz @Janice_Hardy
Making the most of ideas--dealing with our fear: http://bit.ly/OOGrpE @davidbcoe
5 Tips For Making a Living as a Writer: http://bit.ly/OOGNMU @rachellegardner
How to speak publisher: E is for e-books: http://bit.ly/OOH16M @annerooney
Why Counting Words May Be Hazardous to Your Health: http://bit.ly/OOHfuQ @livewritethrive
Which is Right for You - Lightning Source, CreateSpace, or Both? http://bit.ly/OcfxYw @MorganMandel
5 Scenes Every Romance Novel Needs: http://bit.ly/NFkRiT @howtowriteshop
On the term 'aspiring writer': http://bit.ly/NFl6um @avajae
The importance of sabbaticals for writers: http://bit.ly/NFlCs4 @threekingsbooks
Publishers need to speak their readers' language. Recommendations: http://janefriedman.com/2012/08/09/writing-on-the-ether-50/#3 @Porter_Anderson @DigiBookWorld
3 Misplaced Modifiers: http://bit.ly/NFmahH
Writing to the Market: http://bit.ly/NFmsoX @JustineLavaworm
Writers should create a journey for their readers: http://bit.ly/NFmIEa @TurndogMillionaire
Why Are We Wired for Story? http://bit.ly/NFmU6p @lisacron
5 Simple Steps to Let Your Writing Back In: http://bit.ly/NGDnqV @krissybrady
1 writer's goal--25 words a day: http://bit.ly/NGDymi @Tsuchigari
Are You a Good Writer? http://bit.ly/MtlMIZ @Porter_Anderson @silvermanjacob @JaneFriedman
The perks and pitfalls of signing books: http://bit.ly/NGDG5d @guardianbooks
Reporting Sexual Harassment in SF/F: http://bit.ly/NGDYZZ @jimhines
Common manuscript problems: http://bit.ly/NGEcQx @novelrocket
Differences between rookies and pro writers: http://bit.ly/NGEtD6 @Peter_DeHaan
5 Emotional Stages of a Book Launch: http://bit.ly/NGEFST @roniloren
Publishers need to speak their readers' language. Recommendations: http://bit.ly/MBjYYM @Porter_Anderson @DigiBookWorld
The future of bookstores? http://bit.ly/MBkuGa @Porter_Anderson @peterturner
Dialogue Attribution Tips: http://bit.ly/OO4EMU
Add layers to your plot: http://bit.ly/MBVFK5 @DeeWhiteauthor
Hotels as Escape in Romance Novels: http://bit.ly/MBVU7V @meganf
After The First Draft--Approaching Revision: http://bit.ly/MBWpyX @mooderino
Offsite book events: http://bit.ly/MBWLFH @behlerpublish
Social media isn't the magic bullet for self-epublished authors? http://bit.ly/MBWXVq @passivevoiceblg
Upgrade Your Superlatives: http://bit.ly/MBYLOg @writersdigest
A Writer's Audience: Important or Not? http://bit.ly/MBZqza @susanjmorris
Genre prejudice: http://bit.ly/MBZEGD
Top 10 query mistakes: http://bit.ly/MBZMGc @rachellegardner
Time Management For Writers or How to Herd Cats: http://bit.ly/MC01B8 @SarahAHoyt
Character Mind-Reading: http://bit.ly/MC0HGA
The particular perils of historical fantasy: http://bit.ly/MC0R0D @Gollancz
After the pitch, cover your bases by sending in requested materials: http://bit.ly/RtIP5G
The future of bookstores? http://janefriedman.com/2012/08/09/writing-on-the-ether-50/#2 @Porter_Anderson @peterturner
Crime fiction research--knot analysis and use of luminol by police: http://bit.ly/OLBYkO , http://bit.ly/QeEAaa @clarissadraper
Tips for naming your characters: http://bit.ly/R7UW8o @JodieRennerEd
Why there is no epub bubble, & how to market ebooks responsibly: http://bit.ly/NxhP07 @DavidGaughran
List of 170+ authors who have sold 50,000+ self-published ebooks to date: http://ow.ly/cLGRC via @JaneFriedman
The path to survival for the illustrated book biz? http://bit.ly/OYYsTj @MikeShatzkin
How to put more emotion into your writing: http://bit.ly/QLhLkE @JoannaSlan
August 9, 2012
Writing for an Audience/ the Marketplace
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
I had an interesting email exchange with another writer after Friday’s post ran. She mentioned that she had been at an event recently to talk with new writers and had been surprised by the folks who said they wanted to write but didn’t know what to write about.
I emailed back that I had also been very surprised by hearing this from other new writers. For many writers, the problem is having too many ideas and not being sure which to work on.
But I’ve run into more and more writers who aren’t sure what direction to go in with their writing. They seem almost overwhelmed with the possibilities.
When I’ve run into writers like that, I’ve always tried to figure out what it is that they want. Sometimes they haven’t thought about what they actually want—and they start to.
Some writers will want to write completely for themselves and don’t want to share their work with others. Some will want to write a book that they pour their heart into and hope that it will find readers who love it as much as they do. Some will want to write blockbusters or books with high commercial appeal.
Knowing what you want helps define your direction in this business.
Deciding your publishing direction also ties in with a post from Porter Anderson in an extra edition of his popular Writing on the Ether column for Jane Friedman. The entire column makes for good reading, but the section, in particular, that I found interesting was “Jacob Silverman to Will Self” toward the end of the post.
Here’s a quotation from Porter Anderson’s column, quoting journalist Elizabeth Day’s Guardian article quoting author Will Self (did you follow all that quoting? :) )
“I don’t really write for readers,” Self says …”I think that’s the defining characteristic of being serious as a writer. I mean, I’ve said in the past I write for myself. That’s probably some kind of insane egotism but I actually think that’s the only way to proceed – to write what you think you have to write. I write desperately trying to keep myself amused or engaged in what I’m doing and in the world. And if people like it, great, and if they don’t like it, well, that’s that – what can you do? You can’t go round and hold a gun to their head.”
I think there is a lot of merit in that viewpoint. I wrote for myself for years and found a lot of satisfaction in it. And you’re a writer, even if you never publish a book. I recently read a thought-provoking post by writer Mark Charan Newton for Tor Books on “The Joys of Private Writing.”
But I also think that writing for readers is not only possibly more satisfying than writing for oneself (at least, I’ve found it more so), it can also be a way to develop skills and a readership while you’re waiting to release the book you’ve written for your own benefit (or for art’s sake.) Admittedly-- I’m sometimes pragmatic to a fault…and prone also to look at the dollars and cents side to projects.
I’ve found some reward, in other words, in being paid for writing.
So, from that viewpoint, I’m going to suggest points to mull over as you’re exploring your direction and book ideas. These are, obviously, intended for writers who are interested in pursuing publishing—not those who’d like to write completely for themselves.
What if you know you have an interest in writing, but you’re not sure what to write? Here are some points it might be helpful to consider:
Your own interests, as a reader: What do you naturally lean toward when writing or reading? Which genre? What do you think you’d most enjoy writing? We have to spend a long time with a book—we need to enjoy the process and pour that love of writing into the book. Which story would you enjoy telling the most?
Analytics of the genre: In that genre, what are some of the factors that make it a good read? Humor, action, strong characters, magical powers, three murder victims, etc.? As a reader, what do you enjoy most about the genre?
Market saturation: Is there an area or subgenre that is currently saturated? Or does it seem like the readers are avidly buying the books as fast as they are written, even if it IS saturated? (Vampires and zombies come to mind.)
Book length: What is the length of most of these books? Have you got an idea that you can develop into that length? Is your idea too broad and can’t fit into one book? Book length, of course, is also going through a change with the digital trend—but you still want to shoot for the right ballpark. Editing a trilogy out of a single book can be a bear.
What are publishers of this genre looking for currently? If you’re going traditional, who represents and publishes this genre? Go online and see what kinds of things they might be asking for on their submissions page.
If you have many ideas, which should you work on?
Protagonist: Which protagonist can carry my story better? Which is better-developed? Does one have more opportunity for internal conflict? Does one have ample growth potential?
Characters: Which project has secondary characters that are more appealing? Which create depth for my protagonist by interacting with him/her? Which may be a villain that readers will love to hate?
Plot: Which storyline can I easily picture? Which one has more conflict and more depth?
Time: Is there a story that requires more research than another? How much time do I have for the project? How long would I, ideally, prefer to spend on a single project?
Market: Which story will appeal to a greater number of readers? Which has more of a hook to sell to a publisher? Or…which has the better hook for a direct-to-reader/self pubbed book?
Series potential: This may be genre-book specific---but is there a story that lends itself to more than one novel?
There’s a really fine balance here between being calculating and embracing an idea because we love it and because we want to write it to personally satisfy our own creative need. We can always choose to write the “book of our heart” as I’ve heard it called and have faith that others will love it as much as we do.
The business-oriented side of me thinks that it might be helpful to write something that we think has commercial appeal and that we’re excited about writing (don’t write something in a genre you don’t enjoy, just because you think it will sell—if you hate the book, or hate the genre, that disdain is going to show) and then release the book of our heart later, after we’ve developed readership. In traditional publishing, if the book of your heart tanks, it sure is hard to find another gig. Although having a traditionally published book tank might offer the perfect opportunity to move our next book into the self-pub realm.
Again, y’all, this is all in the for-what-it’s-worth category. And…another important thing to remember is that we shouldn’t have our whole writing career riding on one book. The fear of failure has got to be a huge factor in this writer hesitation when choosing an idea. The important thing about failure is dusting ourselves off, learning what it was that we did poorly, and writing another—better—book. Better because we failed or didn’t meet our own expectations. It’s killed me when a couple of great writers that I know have completely given up writing when their books didn’t do as well as they hoped. We’ve got to keep on going.
Now I’m interested in hearing your ideas. If you publish your work, how do you balance art and commercialism? How much do you focus on audience when you write? How do you decide what to write?
August 7, 2012
How to Put More Emotion into Your Writing—Guest Post By Joanna Campbell Slan
by Joanna Slan, @JoannaSlan
New York Times bestselling author Debbie Macomber has said, “If you don’t cry while you’re writing it, the reader won’t cry while she’s reading it.”
Easier said than done.
Putting emotion into your manuscript takes practice. The act of writing typically starts in the left hemisphere, that part of our brain given to sequencing. Otherwise, what we write would be a jumble of words. However, when arranged logically, words become sentences, sentences make up scenes, and scenes build action. At the peak of several scenes, we reach a climax. But that highpoint doesn’t mean much to the reader unless it evokes intense emotion. For that we need the right hemisphere, the section of the brain where emotions are perceived.
Let’s take a real life example, the mass shooting in a movie theatre in Aurora, Colorado. The facts by themselves have great impact. With them in hand, we understand logically what happened. But when we learn about the sights, sounds, smells, and feelings of the people involved, our emotions become fully engaged. Only then can we recognize the full impact of the tragedy.
Most of us have a side of the brain that we favor. We resist switching from one side of our brain to the other because switching takes energy. But as writers that’s exactly what we need to do! Because to offer our readers an engaging experience, we must appeal to both of their hemispheres—and we can only do that by using both of ours.
Writing with Both Sides of Your Brain
To overcome your natural resistance, break the process into two steps, a left brain pass and a right brain pass. First lay down the narrative track, the logical sequence of events, using the left side of the brain. This should cover the basics, the who, what, when, where, why, and how. Once your narrative is in place, commit to a second pass, using the right side of your brain.
When working with the right side of your brain, pay particular attention to these areas:
1. Sensory information—What are your characters smelling, seeing, hearing, tasting, and touching? With your mind’s eye, “look” for color, pattern, texture, flavors, scents, and distinct images, because that is how we process sensory input. When readers experience the world the way your character does, they will find your book more enjoyable.
To activate your senses, consider doing on-site research. To get the details right in my new mystery, DEATH OF A SCHOOLGIRL, I visited a carriage museum. There I spent time examining the sorts of conveyances used in 1820. After running my hand over the horsehair seats, touching the wood-rimmed wheels, and sniffing the old leather, I used what I learned to write a scene where my protagonist, Jane Eyre Rochester, travels by coach to London.
2. Specifics—Choose detail over generalities. It’s not a dog. It’s a pit bull. Or an Irish wolfhound. Or a Corgi. See how the image changed in your mind as the words went from general to specific? Whenever possible, exchange any vague reference for its exact counterpart.
3. Strong verbs—Vivid verbs add clarity. Try to eliminate any variation of “to be.” That includes was, is, be, been, and so on. (For a terrific refresher course on reducing your use of the “to be” verb construction, go to http://www.uoflife.com/wc/creative/be.htm)
During your second pass, imagine yourself in the role of your characters. Ask yourself, “What would I be feeling if this was happening to me?” Don’t be afraid to act out the scene, because that will help you get the physical reactions right. Once while writing a woodland scene in a Kiki Lowenstein book, I reached to my mouth to pluck out a stray twig that wasn’t there. Readers often tell me how realistic that scene is
I’m not surprised. If it’s real to me, I know that it’ll be real to my readers.
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Joanna Campbell Slan has taught writing to corporate executives and at Illinois State University. She’s the author of the Kiki Lowenstein Mystery Series, which includes PAPER, SCISSORS, DEATH, the Agatha-Award finalist for best first novel. Her newest mystery series debuts with DEATH OF A SCHOOLGIRL (Berkley Trade/August 7), the first book in The Jane Eyre Chronicles, featuring Jane Eyre as an amateur sleuth. Visit Joanna at www.JoannaSlan.com
August 5, 2012
What’s in a Name? Naming Your Characters—Guest Post by Jodie Renner
by Jodie Renner, freelance editor, @ JodieRennerEd
Have you ever read a book where the name of the main character was jarring to you, seemed inappropriate, or just wrong?
Or have you mixed up two characters because their names were similar? Or said “Who’s that?” because suddenly the author started using a character’s nickname or first name, when previously all you knew was their last name? What you choose to name your characters can be the difference between annoying/confusing your readers and having the story flow naturally, with all the little details falling into place to make a seamless, believable story world.
A few years ago, I did a critique of a novel in which the cruel, abusive father was named “Danny” and his eight-year-old abused son was named “John.” I definitely thought “Danny” sounded much more like a nice kid than a nasty adult, and why not give the young boy a more kid-like name, like “Johnny”? Switching the two names would have worked fine, too.
Here are some tips for naming your characters:
- Avoid too-common and too-forgettable names like “Jim,” “John,” “Bill Smith,” or “Bob Jones.”
- Avoid really weird, unusual names that draw attention to themselves — unless it’s for a really weird character!
- Choose a name that fits the character’s personality and role. Don’t name your he-man hero “Harold” or “Wilfred,” or your despicable villain “David” or “Josh” or “Jordan” or “Richard” or “Jason” or “Matt” or any other very popular name. People don’t want a nasty bad guy to have the same name as their brother, boyfriend, husband or son.
- Avoid old-fashioned names for contemporary characters, like “Ebenezer” or “Cuthbert” or “Gertrude” or “Henrietta” or “Josephine.”
- Also, to reflect the actual makeup of North American society, be sure to use some characters and names from other ethnic backgrounds besides Anglo-Saxon.
- If you’re writing historical fiction, research common names for that era and location. Don’t make the mistake of calling your 18th-century heroine, for example, “Taylor” (used only for males in that era).
- Even for contemporary fiction, don’t name your 50- or 60-something male Jordan or Brandon or Justin or Tyler or Kyle, as those names weren’t popular for babies 50 or 60 years ago. There are several websites where you can find the most popular baby names for any given year. Here’s a good one:
August 4, 2012
Twitterific
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
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5 Tips on Writing Actions Scenes: Lessons from Chopsocky: http://bit.ly/QJl3Cn @JCMartin_author @AlexJCavanaugh
For literary inspiration follow @AdviceToWriters. Jon Winokur dispenses writerly wisdom of the ages.
A useful resource for describing settings, emotions, shapes, textures, and more: http://bit.ly/eIGRMO @AngelaAckerman
Writing—It Doesn’t Have To Be Solo (Or Done In Quiet Places): http://bit.ly/R4rvRM @JoanRylen
A free directory of #ebook pros--for covers, editing, formatting, & more: http://tinyurl.com/3mxg5zt
Re-Versioning, not Retelling: http://bit.ly/N2Ztno @SophieMasson1
Agents and self-publishing: http://bit.ly/PBd5r1 @Porter_Anderson @thecreativepenn @ornaross
Family connections that impact plot in crime fiction: http://bit.ly/MkzacA @mkinberg
A flowchart which will help you decode dystopia: http://bit.ly/N2ZFCZ @ebookfriendly @erin_bowman
Top 10 homes in literature: http://bit.ly/PnIm3X @guardianbooks
Using Visualization to Write Killer Hooks: http://bit.ly/PnLnRI @electricblogger
3 Key Ways to Create Characters That Grip Readers' Hearts: http://bit.ly/PnOBoi @JodyHedlund
7 Tips for Crafting a Believable Fantasy: http://bit.ly/PnOMjA @4YALIT
Appeal to the Senses—and Emotions: http://bit.ly/PnOPMl @JodieRennerEd @janice_hardy
No Story Is Original, But That's Okay: http://bit.ly/PnP5L3 @fuelyourwriting
5 Writing Lessons 1 Writer Learned From Fighting: http://bit.ly/PnQb9S @ajackwriting
Micro Tension: http://bit.ly/PnY2Ea @V_Rossibooks
5 Ways to Go From Blogger to Published Book Author: http://bit.ly/PnYt1j @NinaAmir
Ugly Covers for Great Books: http://bit.ly/PnYPFp @publisherswkly
Two Sides To Every Story. At Least. http://bit.ly/PnZHtv @mooderino
An editor gives a critique of a story's opening pages: http://bit.ly/O0MAvD @theresastevens
Christopher Paolini Interview: http://bit.ly/O0MJ2o @fantasyfaction
5 Tips to Boost Your Writing Productivity: http://bit.ly/O0MWmd @jeanoram
How to Use a Screenwriting Trick to Fix Your Broken Story: http://bit.ly/O0NacS @write_practice
5 Ways Your Brain Sabotages Your Writing... And What To Do About It: http://bit.ly/O0Nicq @kimber_regator
The importance of book bloggers to a book's success: http://bit.ly/O0NFDG @JonathanGunson
Bust 4 Myths to Gain More Writing Time: http://bit.ly/O0QDbm @LyndaRYoung
5 tips to make your synopsis stronger: http://bit.ly/O0QPaJ @C_Herringshaw
Do self-publishers still need to explain why? http://bit.ly/O0QYLl @dirtywhitecandy
A self-pubbed writer on selling foreign rights: http://bit.ly/O0R6dH @indie_jane
Book Promotion: 4 Ways to Provide Value to Your Readers: http://bit.ly/O0Ro49 @beth_barany
How cozy romance sets itself apart: http://bit.ly/O0RBEw
How to Trust Yourself as a Writer: http://bit.ly/O0T8uu @lyndaryoung
International Writers And The U.S. 30% Withholding Tax: Getting It Back: http://bit.ly/O0TQYt @woodwardkaren
Seducing Readers, Publishers and A Spouse at the Same Time: http://bit.ly/O0U2ab @ninaamir @52Betty
How to Get Your Self-Published Books Noticed: http://bit.ly/Py57mt @howtowriteshop
10 Tips For Creating An Audio Book: http://bit.ly/Nop1kI @thecreativepenn
5 tasks for building a platform: http://bit.ly/O0UCoo @emergentpublish
Words that we should consider eliminating in our stories (if there are too many of them): http://bit.ly/O0UO7f @livewritethrive
A Beginner's Guide To Blogging: http://bit.ly/O0UVQb @ollinmorales
Enough Self-Published Rough Drafts! Why The Self-Publishing Industry Needs Standards: http://bit.ly/O0V71S @duolit @GrubStreetReads
Harlequin Lawsuit Offers Valuable Contract Lessons: http://bit.ly/O0Vc5F @authorems
How Self-Publishing has Helped All Writers: http://bit.ly/O0Whdz @kristenlambTX
Want to help books survive? Promote authors yourself: http://bit.ly/O0WjSS @guardianbooks
Police Procedure: Making It Believable: http://bit.ly/O0WtcY @junglereds
External Conflict vs. Internal Conflict: http://bit.ly/PN5864 @glencstrathy
10 Character Cliches: http://bit.ly/PN5olJ @xymarla
A Social Media Survival Guide: http://bit.ly/u6hyMd @rllafevers
Your greatest asset as a writer: http://bit.ly/PN63U4 @soniasimone @Porter_Anderson
How to Tap Into Your Experiences for Writing Inspiration: http://bit.ly/PN6VrY @adoptedreality
Birdhouse-like Mini Libraries: http://bit.ly/PN70Mf @pubperspectives
The importance of a 5-year plan in creating writing goals: http://bit.ly/PN7eTr @bob_brooke
Real Life Can Challenge the Writing Life: http://bit.ly/N2R3fM
No, Kickstarter is Not the #2 Graphic Novel Publisher: http://bit.ly/NtvgU8 @tordotcom
Tips for adapting your book for a screenplay: http://bit.ly/OLOdfN @GrubWriters @jenna_blum
J.R.R. Tolkien's Top 10 Tips for Writers: http://bit.ly/NWucnL @JonathanGunson
Show and tell: Character--http://bit.ly/NLwTKu
Helping Writers De-Stress: Meditation Apps: http://bit.ly/NLwXtG @woodwardkaren
Using a characterization worksheet: http://bit.ly/NLwYxA
Working with freelance editors: http://bit.ly/NLx5cu @SusanSpann
Rejection Letters - How to Keep them from Ending Your Career: http://bit.ly/NLx6gu
Is Your Internalization Working? A Crit of One MS: http://bit.ly/NLx9cf @janice_hardy
Tips on Writing a Superhero Team: http://bit.ly/NLxcoA
Don't Let Secondary Characters Knock Out Your Muses: http://bit.ly/NLxj3r
Creative Writing: 7 Ways to Get Out of Your Own Way: http://bit.ly/NLxhZb @beth_barany
How to Breathe New Life into Your Writing: the Magic of Metaphor: http://bit.ly/NLxmw0 @joebunting
The Bookless Library: http://bit.ly/NLxrzT @tnr
Your writing process doesn't have to look like anyone else's: http://bit.ly/NLxziV @chuckwendig {lang.}
Are dream sequences in novels always taboo? http://bit.ly/N3jJ9f @dirtywhitecandy
How to Get Your Spouse to Support Your Dream: http://bit.ly/N3jOd1 @jeffgoins
1 writer's experience as a virtual intern and tools for working remotely: http://bit.ly/McvLlU @womenwriters @Victoria_Writes
Surviving a writers' conference with your dreams, sanity, and energy in one piece: http://bit.ly/N3k4ZL
A critique of a manuscript's opening hook: http://bit.ly/N3kajW @janice_hardy
An Easy Alternative to Business Cards: Instant Email: http://tcrn.ch/N3kkYK @techcrunch
The online writing community and places there to connect: http://bit.ly/N3kjE8 @catewoods
Strong Sentences; Concrete Nouns and Verbs: http://bit.ly/Mcw3sW
How to use your 15 minutes with an agent: http://bit.ly/Mcw6oS @nicolamorgan
15 Steps to Create Great Blog Videos: http://bit.ly/Mcw7c8 @jfbookman
7 tips for publicizing and promoting your book: http://bit.ly/Mcw8Nq @ChuckSambuchino
Making the Most of Ideas: http://bit.ly/McwCDh @davidbcoe
Different publishing paths to consider: http://bit.ly/McwEe9 @SouthrnWritrMag
How Much Internalization is Too Much? http://bit.ly/McwIdS @Janice_Hardy
5 Ways to Make Google Your "Assistant Publicist": http://bit.ly/McwHqo @livewritethrive
Put Your Reader in Your POV Character's Skin: http://bit.ly/McwJys @margielawson
Evaluating Ideas for Books: http://bit.ly/QSaWg1 @jillkemerer
How To Market Your Book At Cons: http://bit.ly/QSbanr @BryanThomasS @lkblackburne
Can you afford to be fashionably late to the digital party? http://bit.ly/QSbdQg @jentalty
What to Do When Your Writing's Worst Enemy Is You: http://bit.ly/QSbsuE @krissybrady
Great writers are great rewriters: http://bit.ly/QSbyCn @josephputnam
Get Your Story Across The Finish Line: http://bit.ly/QSbCC7 @fuelyourwriting
Why it's important for every aspiring creator to turn pro: http://bit.ly/QSbSB6 @markmcguinness
3 Reasons to Write About Ghosts: http://bit.ly/QSdw5F @joebunting
5 Mistakes Killing Self-Published Authors: http://bit.ly/QSdAT3 @kristenlambTX
Synthesizing Feedback: http://bit.ly/QSdHy4 @kid_lit
An agent answers questions from writers: http://bit.ly/QSdPNT @breeogden
Make your writing time matter: http://bit.ly/QyyW3k @jessicastrawser
After The First Draft: http://bit.ly/Qyz96t @mooderino
Why 1 writer writes airport books: http://bit.ly/QyzAOf @nickthacker
Promo--Test Your Cross Markets for Effectiveness: http://bit.ly/PXtyd2 @rileymagnus
Pressure your characters with the law — criminal charges aren't the only option: http://bit.ly/PXuOgs
3 Blog Post Headline Fails: http://bit.ly/PXveU0 @JudyLeeDunn
Can Critiques Be Useful Before a Draft Is Complete? http://bit.ly/QyCWkr @BrianKlems
3 steps for writers interested in self-pubbing: http://bit.ly/PXyb6Z @woodwardkaren
Does Facebook Advertising Work? (One Author's Experience): http://bit.ly/PXyjU1 @goblinwriter
The Moment That Makes or Breaks Your Story: http://bit.ly/PXyrmA @storyfix
4 Ways to Improve Plot/Climax in Your Writing: http://bit.ly/PXBFGK
How to create and maintain narrative interest: http://bit.ly/PXCaRc @jammer0501
Writing your novel with baby steps: http://bit.ly/PXCm2R
4 tips for discovering your writing voice: http://bit.ly/T0HgMg @ThreeKingsBooks
Why Your Hero Needs a Yappy Sidekick: http://bit.ly/N2VEyz @KMWeiland
Afterward vs. Afterword: http://bit.ly/O9pwi4 @write_practice
20 Evocative French Words: http://bit.ly/NLxvQb @writing_tips
Salvador Dali's Creative Thinking Technique: http://bit.ly/O9poPI @MichaelMichalko
Ebook sales aren't a zero sum game: http://bit.ly/NtqypC @JAKonrath
4 Ways to Improve Plot/Climax in Your Writing: http://bit.ly/PXBFGK
Writing About Death And Crime Scenes: http://bit.ly/N3k3F8 @thecreativepenn
Writing YA--themes: http://bit.ly/McqJQt @AlexSokoloff
Tips for dealing with writer's block: http://bit.ly/McqSU9 @SouthrnWritrMag
Does Social Media Really Help With Book Success? http://bit.ly/McqXXK @jodyhedlund
Is Your Post Publish Ready? Give it a 24 Hour Test: http://bit.ly/Mcr2uu @WritingH
5 Helpful Writing Prompt & Exercise Books: http://bit.ly/Mcr8m6 @janefriedman
Qualities of a Great Critique Group: http://bit.ly/McrhpD
3 Sentences with Dangling Modifiers: http://bit.ly/McrmcW
How does your publisher make money? http://bit.ly/McrtVI @rachellegardner
Dialogue Tag Misconceptions: http://bit.ly/McrxET @lynettelabelle
From Newbie to Published: 12 Tips: http://bit.ly/McrDMK @jamigold @TiffanyAllee
A Book Launch is an Investment in a Long-Term Career: http://bit.ly/Mcs5dT @danblank @originalimpulse
Religion, Like Sex, Sells E-Books: http://bit.ly/Mcs4H7 @passivevoiceblg
The Unbearable Stiffness of Formal Poetry and Writing for the Page: http://bit.ly/Mcsddw @glecharles
Trimming the fat from your manuscript: http://bit.ly/McszRv @yahighway
Lessons on Character from ThrillerFest: http://bit.ly/McsH3m @diymfa
The physical space of words: http://bit.ly/McsIo0
Writing lessons learned from "Sea": http://bit.ly/McsNI7 @juliemusil
The Lazy Way to Make a Story Sell: http://bit.ly/PAB4GI
Agents recommending paid-for services? http://bit.ly/PAGm4X @nicolamorgan
Agatha Christie's lasting appeal and her secret notebooks: http://bit.ly/PAGXUd @junglereds
Common Pitfalls and Cliches for Superhero Teams: http://bit.ly/PAH4PK
9 Keys to Blogging Success from A-List Bloggers: http://bit.ly/PAHk18 @JFBookman
Tips for writing suspenseful scenes: http://bit.ly/PAHQw1 @writersherry
Is self-pub an e-bubble? Does social media promo really sell books? http://bit.ly/M6bI7B @samatlounge @eoinpurcell @Porter_Anderson
Finding the Unfamiliar Phrase: http://bit.ly/O0N05c
In a market crowded with ebooks, discoverability is a problem: http://bit.ly/PBEE3r @hughmcguire @Porter_Anderson @ljndawson
August 2, 2012
New Writers—Patience
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
My son is a rising sophomore in high school. I’ve heard from several friends with older kids that it might be smart for my son and I to get an early start researching colleges.
I started looking up information on college admissions. I realized that there’s an overwhelming amount of information out there. In fact, there’s so much information that it’s hard to know where to start looking. Not only is there information on various schools, but there are tips for activities to get involved in that look good on admissions forms, college interview tips. essay tips, and a tremendous amount of info on grants and scholarships.
My head started spinning.
I reminded myself that we have plenty of time to figure this stuff out and that’s the whole reason we’re starting early. There’s no magic pill to take to immediately know all there is to know about the college admission process. We’re just gradually going to need to absorb it.
This is remarkably like the process of finding out about publishing. Yes, there’s a lot of information. There might be too much information.
I’ve recently had two different new writers contact me about publishing. They were both local writers and just starting out. They asked me to bring them into the loop when it came to information about pursuing publishing.
I’m always happy to help out new writers. I had helpful writers point me in the right direction when I was the one asking a lot of questions. (And boy, has the publishing landscape changed since I started investigating it in the early 00s.)
It’s very hard to know how to advise new writers. I think it’s necessary to know a lot about where they are right now. Do they have a finished manuscript? Have they been working with a critique group? Have they been reading writing or publishing blogs? What do they know? How long have they been serious about writing? Is it a lifelong dream for them to be on a bookstore shelf or will they consider other options?
When I’ve mentioned self-publishing as an option in the recent past, new writers have almost seemed rebuffed by my suggestion. As if I somehow thought their work wasn’t of good enough quality to submit to New York publishers.
That wasn’t the case at all—it was more that I wanted to encourage them to find out more about a viable option for their books that might even enable them to reach the audience they’re looking for.
What I think is one of the most important traits for writers interested in publishing (either traditional or self-publishing), is patience. We need to have patience with ourselves to fully learn and explore our options and patience with our story—the patience necessary to rework or revise it to make sure it’s ready for readers. And we need patience to learn our options and the current state of the industry. We need patience in order to develop our craft.
It can be nice, however, to at least have a starting point for our research (I’m finding one for the college search.) As a starting point for learning about publishing, I recommend industry expert Jane Friedman’s post—it’s sort of a beginner’s guide to publishing: Wanting to have your book published? A beginner's guide.
How are you approaching gathering information on the industry and the writing craft? Any other traits that could be helpful for new writers?
Image: By English106
My Little List—Guest Post By Joanne Sydney Lessner
“As someday it may happen that a victim must be found, I’ve got a little list.”
--W.S. Gilbert
I’m planning to kill my neighbor.
Lest you fear that I’ve just made you an accessory before the fact, rest assured that no actual blood will be spilled, although I do have a particularly gory end in mind for this guy. He’s one of those of selfish, antagonistic neighbors—apartment-dwellers will recognize the type—who has no consideration for anyone else, yet complains constantly about the rest of us. And so, he must die. Most likely, in book three.
In the first installment of my Isobel Spice mystery series, The Temporary Detective, Isobel arrives in New York City eager to pursue her acting career. On the first day of her first temp job, she stumbles across an obnoxious, overbearing secretary dead in a bathroom stall, a pair of scissors buried in her ample bosom.
Okay, so who was this secretary really? Why, the woman who got me fired from my first temp job, of course! She thought I spent too much time yakking on the phone to my friends, which, admittedly, I did. I had the idea for my series shortly after that, although I didn’t write the book for almost twenty years. I guess you could say I hold a grudge, because even after all that time, she was still my first victim. I put her on the page—and then I killed her. [Insert maniacal laugh.]
Writers have always populated their fiction with thinly disguised acquaintances. D.H. Lawrence wrote an amusing poem on the subject, called “I am in a novel,” in which the protagonist is shocked to learn, via his fictional alter ego, what his author friend really thinks of him. After years living in New York, temping and working in the theater, I’ve filed away a handful of standout jerks whose demises I have been plotting for a while.
In the second Isobel Spice novel, Bad Publicity (due out early next year), Isobel temps in a public relations firm, where a troublesome consultant drinks poisoned coffee before a meeting. Wanna guess? That’s right: a demanding client who made my colleagues and me miserable, and then fired us. Off he goes into the beyond, dispatched with a not-so-accidental overdose of prescription drugs.
Which brings me back to my belligerent neighbor. Since Isobel’s third adventure is still in the planning stages, I hadn’t quite settled on my victim until the other day, when this guy did something particularly galling. In the unlikely event that he reads my book, chances are slim that he’ll recognize himself, despite being a class-A narcissist. Like most of us, he has little awareness of how others perceive him.
One of the great things about being a writer is having the power to create your own world and populate it with whomever you want. It’s a particular perk of the mystery novelist that you get to regularly de-populate it as well. From now on, every time I find myself trapped in the elevator with my neighbor, I can relish the secret knowledge that—at least on paper—he’s going to get what he deserves.
Joanne Sydney Lessner is the author of Pandora’s Bottle, a novel inspired by the true story of the world’s most expensive bottle of wine (Flint Mine Press, 2010) and The Temporary Detective (Dulcet Press, 2012). Joanne also enjoys an active performing career, and with her husband, composer/conductor Joshua Rosenblum, she has co-authored several musicals, including the cult hit Fermat’s Last Tango and Einstein’s Dreams, based on the celebrated novel by Alan Lightman.
July 31, 2012
Writing—It Doesn’t Have To Be Solo (Or Done In Quiet Places)--Guest Post by Johnell Kelley and Robbyn Hill
@JoanRylen
Thanks Elizabeth, for having us today so we could share our crazy, co-author story with your readers.
Hey y’all! We are Johnell Kelley and Robbyn Hill, co-authors of Getaway Girlz, our debut novel, written under pen name Joan Rylen. We grew up together in Pasa “Get Down” dena, Texas, famous for the John Travolta movie, Urban Cowboy and the mechanical bull at Gilley’s. We lived five short streets from each other, and were side-by-side in all the same stuff: Brownies, dance, band, house-wrapping, boy-chasing. We stayed in touch after attending different colleges, both eventually landing in Fort Worth, which we still call home.
All of this togetherness has culminated into a series based (loosely) on the annual girls’ trips we take with two other longtime friends. The first trip was intended to rally around Johnell during her double-whammy life-changing events: her four-kids-under-four divorce in conjunction with the big 3-0. The trip was so fun we’ve kept up the tradition and have had as many of 11 girlz on the trips, but always the ‘core four.’
The novels are roughly-based on our trips because thankfully, we’ve never had a murder or other mysterious situation happen while on vaca. Good grief, no one would travel with us if we did! But we do go on location for “research” and always write some of our experiences into the books. Bucket dancing on a beautiful Playa del Carmen beach, white water rafting through the Royal Gorge in Colorado, slamming giant syringe shots on Bourbon Street and entering a pumpkin-dropping contest the Adirondacks are just a few of the tidbits that find their way into our novels. We’re excited about our fall trip that will help us with the details of book five…Lone Star SOMETHING (we haven’t decided yet!). Check out our website and you’ll no doubt find pictures of us yee-hawing around a dude ranch in Bandera, Texas.
The initial idea for a book popped into Robbyn’s head and wouldn’t leave her alone. The first time we sat down to work, we worked our way through a 12-pack of Dos Equis and the idea for the series was born. We laughed and laughed, recounting our crazy adventures and were hooked, never looking back.
We knew we could do this, and do it right. Granted, there were a lot of things we didn’t know, like what a literary agent was (or that we might need one). We had no idea about writing conferences, critique groups, e-pub files, Publisher’s Marketplace and a whole slew of other things that writers need to know about, but we jumped in laptop first, nonetheless.
We’ve learned a lot during the past three and a half years which improved our writing and lead us to the ginormous decision to self-publish. After attending a conference in NYC and pitching to four editors with the Big Six (three out of four requested partials), we received an offer from an agent for representation of our first three books, but decided that wasn’t for us. We’re pretty strong-willed girlz and the thought of losing control over so much through a major publisher didn’t sit well. Because of the industry standard with newcomers, we’d have to market the heck out of ourselves anyway, so we went for it.
We launched our first book this past June and to date have sold close to 600. We’ve had numerous signings at Barnes and Noble and are working to get the word out!
We’re on a tight deadline for book two, Rocky Mountain Mayhem, being released in December. Then, it’s nose to the grindstone for book three, Big Easy X-capade, to be released in June 2013.
We write in restaurants and bars in downtown Fort Worth. We tried working in quieter spots, like at home, but Johnell falls asleep (mother of four!). We drink buckets of beer, margaritas, wine on occasion, and we’re productive (okay, up to a point), but it’s turned out to be great marketing for us. We get all set up with two laptops and “Old Bessie,” our external keyboard. People inquire as to what we’re working on or who our employer is since they let us work in bars. Often, after chatting and showing them what we’re working on they’ll buy a book. One of our favorite writing spots, Chuy’s, is framing a copy of the book and hanging it right by the front door. Woo hoo, love Chuy’s!
Our approach to writing and publishing may not work for everyone but it was the best decision for us. Y’all watch out, we may be
vacationing researching at a destination near you soon, and you never know what we’ll use for inspiration in the next book!
Adios!
Johnell & Robbyn
July 29, 2012
Tips for Finding your Writing Voice—Guest Post by Josephine Carr
by Josephine Carr, @ThreeKingsBooks
Tips for Finding your Writing Voice
When my writing career began thirty years ago, I got lucky. The young adult genre was just beginning, and the market was hungry for novels with teenage protagonists. This was a boon for any unpublished writer, of course, but the real luck was something else entirely.
By writing a young adult novel, I immediately found my voice.
In reading and mentoring other new writers, I recognize that their voice is often murky, or missing entirely. I’m not the first to say this, and I know you’ve read it all over the place, but here it comes again: voice is vital.
This is no joke. You can make any number of mistakes in plotting, character development, point of view, and theme, but if you haven’t found your voice, you will not be published. (Even if you self-publish, your success will always be limited.)
Voice is intangible, difficult to define, and impossible to teach, but if you have it, everything else you might do wrong will be fixable. So what’s a writer to do?
I have some practical suggestions.
(1) Write in the first person.
This can be instantly helpful to a writer searching for their voice. When I received an offer to publish my young adult novel, No Regrets, so many years ago, it was for one reason only. I sounded distinct and unassuming. This happened despite the fact that my prose style has never been lyrical or beautiful in any way. I am a prosaic writer, with a crisp style, but by writing a story that happened to be mildly autobiographical, and in the first person, I immediately tapped into my natural writing voice.
(2) Read your own writing aloud.
This is such an easy, yet profound, method for hearing what you sound like. As you read your prose aloud, you’ll be able to tell if it sounds like you. When the voice is off, it jars, often because there’s a pretentious quality, or there are simply too many words jostling for attention.
(3) Write from your stomach, not your mind.
By writing from your gut, as opposed to your conscious mind, you will find a voice that is compelling and real. When I begin writing a novel, I can literally feel my stomach speaking. I’m not being figurative or wishy-washy by this description. I mean it. My stomach seems to expand and send out messages. Indeed, it’s possible for me to feel ever so slightly nauseous, or a little squirrelly down there when I’ve begun and then realize it’s rolling along in a way I’d never have predicted. The words tumble out in a flow like water from a faucet. If/when that happens, I know I’ve got it. Let go of your doggone head and write from the stomach.
(4) Write for yourself.
I am a huge fan of story structure and planning out a novel because it will unquestionably enhance the reader’s experience -- I studied screenwriting, and I know it’s been an important factor in my success as a writer. But the architecture of a novel comes after you’ve found your voice. In the beginning of a novel’s composition, just write a sentence or two without thinking about anyone reading what you’ve written. Be loosey-goosey and relaxed.
Your voice doesn’t merely sound like you. Your voice smells, looks, and feels like you. Without it, your writing is like a cake that fails to rise in the oven. Flat, thin, compressed. And what makes a cake rise? Baking soda and beaten eggs, both of which form bubbles in the batter.
Your words are bubbles, and they lift us to create a buoyant world, uniquely you. When you write, be yourself, even if that self is somehow scary, a failure, or imperfect. Aren’t we all?
Josephine Carr is a thirty year veteran of traditional publishing (HarperCollins, NAL/Penguin, Dial Books for Young Readers) who’s thrilled to be relaunching herself under the banner Three Kings Books . She’d welcome your visit to her blog where she posts about how to write well, publish, and survive the trials of a writer’s life. The first mystery in her new series, The Rabbi’s Mother, will be published in September, 2012. Follow her on twitter @threekingsbooks.
July 28, 2012
Twitterific
by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig
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Make Problems Actionable in Your Story: http://bit.ly/Mk0w6o @kid_lit
Different types/sizes of publishers with examples of each: bit.ly/MZU2q0 @annerallen
How to make a book trailer (video creation websites): http://bit.ly/O9PFKc @beth_barany
Narrative and the Moving Image: What Film Can Teach Us About Fiction Writing: http://bit.ly/O9PGy1
An agent on the new contractural language she's seeing from publishers: http://bit.ly/NDOXVg @rachellegardner @Porter_Anderson
The anatomy of a good website: http://bit.ly/Q44Ny7 @danyelleleafty
There is No Elevator to Success. You Have to Take the Stairs: http://bit.ly/OEFRpL @jodyhedlund
The cons of series writing: http://bit.ly/Ll92m5 @JeffSalyards
How not to be a successful self-pub author: http://bit.ly/N28t1z @ava_jae
Writing Series: The Cliffhanger Dilemma: http://bit.ly/Ml4N53 @erin_bowman
Tips for Dealing with Bad Book Reviews: http://bit.ly/PMKtjw @goblinwriter
A BookStats report of trade sales for 2011 (strong ebook showings): http://bit.ly/NDRq1Q @Porter_Anderson @pkafka
International Thriller Writers--can self-published writers apply? http://bit.ly/NDRuyw @Porter_Anderson @jamesscottbell @RobertBidinotto
What You Can Learn About Writing By Writing Thrillers: http://bit.ly/MgF0RY @nickthacker
The Social Life of a Writing Residency: http://bit.ly/Mf99M0 @PatrickRwrites
9 Simple Ways To Be a Better Writer: http://bit.ly/NDShQc
Great Reasons to Consider Skipping Over a Superhero Origin Story: http://bit.ly/NDSmU1
Worldbuilding--social roles of children: http://bit.ly/NDSMtB @juliettewade
5 helpful writing tips: http://bit.ly/NDT3N8 @mooderino
What's the Future of Publishing? http://onforb.es/NDT9Eu @forbes
Your Publisher Has Folded...Now What? http://bit.ly/NDTpDp @brandontietz
The need to reinvent ourselves as writers (particularly after a book's failure): http://bit.ly/MuOAwU
Laying Easter eggs in our stories: http://bit.ly/MuOBkj @writing_tips
Learning Writing Skills from X-Men: First Class {spoilers}: http://bit.ly/MuOEMV
Different types/sizes of publishers with examples of each: http://bit.ly/MuOEMV @annerallen
8 marketing essentials for writers: http://bit.ly/MuOPYH @writersdigest
What to Do When You Need to Cut a Major Part of Your Novel: http://bit.ly/MuPhpX @janice_hardy
Bringing your settings to life: http://bit.ly/MuPmtL
George Orwell's Four Motives for Creation: http://bit.ly/MuPtFJ @brainpicker
4 Steps to Starting a Thriller: http://bit.ly/MuPwkJ @writersdigest
The Amazing Spider-Man Beat Sheet {spoilers}: http://bit.ly/MyA4Yy
A Brief History of American Bookmobiles…in Pictures: http://bit.ly/MuQ1eK @readingape
Publishers should work on relationships with writers: http://bit.ly/MyAeiK @passivevoiceblg
5 traits of Pulitzer winning books: http://bit.ly/MNn7F5 @joebunting
A critique of a scene that's intended to show desperation: http://bit.ly/MNndwF @janice_hardy
4 Personalitiy Types For Characterization: http://bit.ly/MNni3g
Why writers need editors: http://bit.ly/NDYNrC @woodwardkaren
How to write your first cookbook: http://bit.ly/NonY4c @guardianbooks @alicecooks
5 tips to avoid distractions while writing: http://bit.ly/Noo6k7 @annelyle
Beyond the Most Common Fiction Mistakes: http://bit.ly/Noo8IV @thecreativepenn @victoriamixon
Writers and business: http://bit.ly/NoodMF @kristinerusch
Beta reading and collaborations: http://bit.ly/NDZ0Ls @bookviewcafe
Character building tips: http://bit.ly/NDZcdA @donnanewtonuk
Tips for Writing a Synopsis: http://bit.ly/NooEqc @noveleditor
Social Media vs. a New York Times Book Review Cover: Which Sells More Books? http://bit.ly/NooMpF @annerallen
10 Questions Your Readers Shouldn't Have to Ask: http://bit.ly/NooNKg @KMWeiland
Nail Your Novel – the DH Lawrence way: http://bit.ly/NooWxh @dirtywhitecandy
10 Tips For Creating An Audio Book: http://bit.ly/Nop1kI @thecreativepenn
What 1 writer has learned about marketing: http://bit.ly/NDZwZZ
The madness of marketing: http://bit.ly/Nop53T @AlexSokoloff
Languages In Fantasy: http://bit.ly/Oi3lTK @fantasyfaction
Scandinavia's Crime Lords: Stockholm's Salomonsson Agency: http://bit.ly/Oi3mXO @pubperspectives
Agent touting on Twitter? http://bit.ly/Oi3sP8 @nicolamorgan
Secrets of Blog Posts that Get Tons of Comments: http://bit.ly/Oi3wOM @JFBookman
When Your Passion Kills Your Plot: http://bit.ly/Oi3w1m @storyfix
Tips for rekindling your creative spirit: http://bit.ly/Oi3BCd
10 Reasons to Self-Publish–No More Excuses: http://bit.ly/Oi3A0Y @livewritethrive
How to make a book trailer (video creation websites): http://bit.ly/O9PFKc @beth_barany
Is Ignoring The Importance Of Setting Killing Your Novel? http://bit.ly/NGsaqf @bubblecow
How to Impress the People You Interview (and Be Professional): http://bit.ly/NWmeyQ @thewritermama
Failure Is Good for You: http://bit.ly/Oi3SoB @SF_Novelists
A quick method for creating your own images: http://bit.ly/Oi3Tcf @KarenCV
3 tips for editing your own work: http://bit.ly/Oi3XbN @AnselmAudley
Removing Elements to Fix a Problem Scene: http://bit.ly/Oi3XZr @Janice_Hardy
How to Get Your Self-Published Books Noticed: http://bit.ly/Py57mt @howtowriteshop
Establishing Ramifications: http://bit.ly/OicE5S @kid_lit
A list of 10 helpful books for writers: http://bit.ly/OicJqg
Character Names: How Do You Choose? http://bit.ly/Py5BJk @ava_jae
The gift of feedback: http://bit.ly/OicSu0
How a crisis helped a writer learn about the role of stories: http://bit.ly/Py5ZYa @Jan_Ohara
From Caricature to Character: http://bit.ly/Py66mv @KatieGanshert
12 Essential Social Media Cheat Sheets: http://on.mash.to/NtpC4v @mashable
The author's (minor) role in cover creation at trad. pubs.: http://bit.ly/NtpRMR @PaulTobin
5 Ways to Balance Writing and Life: http://bit.ly/NtpWA8 @writersdigest
How to Turn Rejection into a Positive Experience: http://bit.ly/Ntq2rx
Different types/sizes of publishers with examples of each: http://bit.ly/MuOEMV @annerallen
How to make a book trailer (video creation websites): http://bit.ly/O9PFKc @beth_barany
19 Ways To Grow Your Twitter Following: http://bit.ly/NtqfLj @woodwardkaren
The differences between commercial and literary fiction: http://bit.ly/NtqjuE @AnnieNeugebauer
How Facebook Advertising Works for Authors: http://bit.ly/NtqoOS @goblinwriter
Writing A Bottle Scene: http://bit.ly/Ntqt5m @mooderino
Ebook sales aren't a zero sum game: http://bit.ly/NtqypC @JAKonrath
10 dialogue tips: http://bit.ly/Ntu4QR
Marketing a Screenplay: http://bit.ly/Ntu6bt @writersdigest
Tips to prepare for a TV appearance: http://bit.ly/Ntv5Z6
Learning Writing Skills from Green Lantern {spoilers}: http://bit.ly/NtvcE6
Owning your goals as a writer: http://bit.ly/Ntvefe @4YALit @MeaganSpooner
6 tips for regaining your writer's voice: http://bit.ly/Ntvn2c @deewhiteauthor
8 Types of Parenthetical Phrases: http://bit.ly/Ntvlr1 @writing_tips
Planning for 1099-Misc: http://bit.ly/NWtaYQ @authorems
6 Ways to Drive More Pinterest Engagement: http://bit.ly/NWteaZ @smexaminer
How to talk about your work with acquaintances: http://bit.ly/NWtoiA
Why write fantasy? http://bit.ly/NWtV48 @dan_hanks
J.R.R. Tolkien's Top 10 Tips for Writers: http://bit.ly/NWucnL @JonathanGunson
Author Etiquette 101: How To Support Readers: http://bit.ly/NWuHy4 @jodyhedlund
3 Ways Book Publicity is Like a Zip Line: http://bit.ly/NWuTxw @WriterCrys
23 Ways to Defeat the Sagging Middle: http://bit.ly/NWv7V9 @fictionnotes
Harlequin Fail Part 2: http://bit.ly/NWvy1I @JAKonrath
My self-pub observations so far: http://bit.ly/Q3zHkL
A family vibe shouldn't be your litmus for signing with a publisher: http://bit.ly/O9mMBp @behlerpublish
The importance of good cover copy: http://bit.ly/O9nC15 @deanwesleysmith
Branding for Writers: http://bit.ly/O9nKOd @diymfa
Do you have a fear of success? 3 tips for conquering it: http://bit.ly/O9ocvK @threekingsbooks
8 tips for making time to write: http://bit.ly/O9oF0U @juliettewade
Publishing vs. Authors? http://bit.ly/NGS28t @Porter_Anderson @EmilySuess @PeterTurner @MirabilisDave
A writer on being authentic online: http://bit.ly/O9oMcS @indieauthor
Tips for stronger ebook sales: http://bit.ly/O9p4jX @woodwardkaren @JAKonrath
Salvador Dali's Creative Thinking Technique: http://bit.ly/O9poPI @MichaelMichalko
Afterward vs. Afterword: http://bit.ly/O9pwi4 @write_practice
What should writers do when faced with contradictory reasons for rejection? http://bit.ly/O9reQK @nicolamorgan
A BookStats report of trade sales for 2011 (strong ebook showings): http://janefriedman.com/2012/07/19/writing-on-the-ether-47/#2 @Porter_Anderson @pkafka
Thoughts on chapter length: http://bit.ly/O9uZpj
A look at theme, using "City Slickers" as an example: http://bit.ly/O9v78g @livewritethrive
Some self-publishing sales stats and tips for higher sales: http://bit.ly/O9wvaW
Beginner's Guide To Hiring A Freelance Editor: http://bit.ly/N2QAu2 @CA_Marshall
What Every Writer Can Learn From Regency Romance: http://bit.ly/N2QMJD @novelrocket
21 Top Links to Book Fonts for Self-Publishing: http://bit.ly/N2QOBr @JFBookman
50 Things 1 Writer Learned At Thrillerfest 2012: http://bit.ly/N2QTVJ @thecreativepenn
12 reasons to self-publish: http://bit.ly/N2SRoQ @RachelintheOC
10 steps to fill plot holes: http://bit.ly/N2T63j @howtowriteshop
Tips for starting out with a platform: http://bit.ly/N2TWNG @janefriedman
The Romantic Tension Recipe: http://bit.ly/N2U2F1 @TaliaVance
Try not to overthink your stories: http://bit.ly/N2UoeF @jamietr @janice_hardy
Sen. Schumer's WSJ op-ed piece? 'Maddening': http://bit.ly/PN99r6 @brianoleary @ChuckSchumer @Porter_Anderson
20 Words with More Than One Spelling: http://bit.ly/N2Ut23
International Thriller Writers--can self-published writers apply? http://janefriedman.com/2012/07/19/writing-on-the-ether-47/#1 @Porter_Anderson @jamesscottbell @RobertBidinotto
Book trailers--tips for finding viewers: http://bit.ly/N2UOSf @beth_barany
Why Your Hero Needs a Yappy Sidekick: http://bit.ly/N2VEyz @KMWeiland
The One Thing That Will Make Your Query Letter Stand Out: http://bit.ly/N2VKWX @krissybrady
7 Deadly Sins of Querying: http://bit.ly/N2WoDQ
Removing the YA Label: http://bit.ly/N2YG5U @pubperspectives
Using the realities of the past to unearth the fiction of tomorrow: seeking Lemuria: http://bit.ly/N2YQKp @genelempp
7 Key Things You Need for Your Blog: http://bit.ly/PnGCHK @NickThacker
Hard work is the key to success in both trad. pub and self-pub: http://bit.ly/PnHwUW @behlerpublish
Help for pacing problems: http://bit.ly/PnHNqN @roniloren
Top 10 homes in literature: http://bit.ly/PnIm3X @guardianbooks
Sen. Schumer's WSJ op-ed piece? 'Maddening': http://bit.ly/PN99r6 @brianoleary @ChuckSchumer @Porter_Anderson
The Top 10 Reasons to Avoid Writing Fiction: http://bit.ly/OLMy9P @BTMargins @lgreffenius
Forget the self-pub stigma and go for it: http://bit.ly/PRkwuM @JanetBoyer
Even editors need a book designer: http://bit.ly/OjkJHA @P2P_editor
Prologues--A Cautionary Tale? http://bit.ly/NGWhRo @Kathy_Crowley
Voice: the elusive but critical ingredient of powerful fiction: http://bit.ly/NthTDG @JodieRennerEd
Rounding out characters by adding subplot problems for them to iron out: http://bit.ly/Ntmzt7 @mkinberg
The Top 10 Reasons to Avoid Writing Fiction: http://bit.ly/OLMy9P @BTMargins @lgreffenius
Tips for adapting your book for a screenplay: http://bit.ly/OLOdfN @GrubWriters @jenna_blum