Lynn Hobbs's Blog, page 5
March 12, 2017
Passive Voice
Thank you ACFW for publishing my post Passive Voice on your blog, 3/12/2017. #WritingTips #Christian #Author #ACFW #EyesOfANeighbor http://www.acfw.com/blog/passive-voice/ Enjoy!
Passive VoicePosted on March 12, 2017 by ACFWby Lynn HobbsYears ago I began attending writing workshops. My first encounter with passive voice left me undecided.Did I care about passive voice? Was this merely someone’s preference in writing? What did it matter, anyway?
Was this something I’d eventually learn through trial and error?It certainly didn’t interfere with the show don’t tell method of writing. Or did it?I was not a learned writer at the time. I was an avid reader. Once I was knee deep into a story, I didn’t care about adverbs, passive voice, or justified margins. I knew a good book when I read one, and I read it as fast as I could. I recommended the book to others, gave a review on Amazon, and waited for more books from the author. I was a happy reader. No knowledge of don’t end a sentence in a preposition, or don’t use an exclamation mark but, at the most, three times in one book.Don’t, don’t, don’t was jotted in my notes more than any other word.Naturally, I decided it must be a personal preference of the workshop speakers not to use passive voice. I still couldn’t understand what difference it made in the story.As an author, I continued to grow, learning more at writing workshops, and kept an open mind.The following year, I attended an online workshop…from a well-known author. His first topic was not to use passive voice.I was shocked. Hmm, must be something to it, after all.I suddenly had my ah-ha moment!Mind-boggling. It had nothing to do with narrative. I realized it was more important to dialogue.If you write, “I was hurrying into the store;” you are telling not showing. “I was” is passive voice. If you write, “I parked my car in the closest parking spot. Locking it, I ran to the store minutes before they closed.” Showing is not in passive voice.Readers relate to more vivid descriptions. They want to see it in their mind through imagination. A short sketch is all that is required. Yes, you need something to propel your story forward, but not drag it into an unnecessary paragraph with flowering words. Brief, and to the point.I finally got it.Here are examples:1. Bob was exhausted. (Telling: Bob was exhausted, and written in passive voice.)2. Bob yawned, and closed his eyes as he leaned back in the recliner. (Showing: how Bob is exhausted, and not written in passive voice.)The reader will enjoy the second version as it will allow them to picture the scene for themselves.
Another example:1. I had to drive to Houston, Texas for a job interview. (Telling, and written in passive voice.)2. Waking earlier than normal, I splashed cold water on my face, drank hot coffee, and drove alert to Houston, Texas for my job interview. (Showing, and not written in passive voice.)Learning the craft of writing is a daily process.Enjoy, and happy writing!
Lynn Hobbs is the author of the Running Forward Series: Sin, Secrets, and Salvation, River Town, and Hidden Creek, and won 1st place Religious Fiction in 2013, 2014 and 2015 by Texas Association of Authors. She is also the author of Lillie, A Motherless Child won 1st place Biography 2016, TAA, and the American Neighborhood Series: Eyes of a Neighbor. Visit Lynn on Facebook, Twitter, and her website.
This entry was posted in Friends of ACFW. Bookmark the permalink.
← Teacher Tools for the Writer: How to Use Google Forms to Make the Writing Life a Bit Easier
Passive VoicePosted on March 12, 2017 by ACFWby Lynn HobbsYears ago I began attending writing workshops. My first encounter with passive voice left me undecided.Did I care about passive voice? Was this merely someone’s preference in writing? What did it matter, anyway?
Was this something I’d eventually learn through trial and error?It certainly didn’t interfere with the show don’t tell method of writing. Or did it?I was not a learned writer at the time. I was an avid reader. Once I was knee deep into a story, I didn’t care about adverbs, passive voice, or justified margins. I knew a good book when I read one, and I read it as fast as I could. I recommended the book to others, gave a review on Amazon, and waited for more books from the author. I was a happy reader. No knowledge of don’t end a sentence in a preposition, or don’t use an exclamation mark but, at the most, three times in one book.Don’t, don’t, don’t was jotted in my notes more than any other word.Naturally, I decided it must be a personal preference of the workshop speakers not to use passive voice. I still couldn’t understand what difference it made in the story.As an author, I continued to grow, learning more at writing workshops, and kept an open mind.The following year, I attended an online workshop…from a well-known author. His first topic was not to use passive voice.I was shocked. Hmm, must be something to it, after all.I suddenly had my ah-ha moment!Mind-boggling. It had nothing to do with narrative. I realized it was more important to dialogue.If you write, “I was hurrying into the store;” you are telling not showing. “I was” is passive voice. If you write, “I parked my car in the closest parking spot. Locking it, I ran to the store minutes before they closed.” Showing is not in passive voice.Readers relate to more vivid descriptions. They want to see it in their mind through imagination. A short sketch is all that is required. Yes, you need something to propel your story forward, but not drag it into an unnecessary paragraph with flowering words. Brief, and to the point.I finally got it.Here are examples:1. Bob was exhausted. (Telling: Bob was exhausted, and written in passive voice.)2. Bob yawned, and closed his eyes as he leaned back in the recliner. (Showing: how Bob is exhausted, and not written in passive voice.)The reader will enjoy the second version as it will allow them to picture the scene for themselves.
Another example:1. I had to drive to Houston, Texas for a job interview. (Telling, and written in passive voice.)2. Waking earlier than normal, I splashed cold water on my face, drank hot coffee, and drove alert to Houston, Texas for my job interview. (Showing, and not written in passive voice.)Learning the craft of writing is a daily process.Enjoy, and happy writing!
Lynn Hobbs is the author of the Running Forward Series: Sin, Secrets, and Salvation, River Town, and Hidden Creek, and won 1st place Religious Fiction in 2013, 2014 and 2015 by Texas Association of Authors. She is also the author of Lillie, A Motherless Child won 1st place Biography 2016, TAA, and the American Neighborhood Series: Eyes of a Neighbor. Visit Lynn on Facebook, Twitter, and her website.
This entry was posted in Friends of ACFW. Bookmark the permalink.← Teacher Tools for the Writer: How to Use Google Forms to Make the Writing Life a Bit Easier
December 8, 2016
Inserting Spontaneous Humor
Thank you, American Christian Fiction Writers for publishing my post, Inserting Spontaneous Humor on your website December 7, 2016.
Inserting Spontaneous HumorPosted on December 7, 2016 by ACFWBy Lynn Hobbs
Have you ever read a Christian fiction book; either romance, suspense, or historical, and were amused by an unexpected sense of humor from one of the characters? I find it outstanding.If you were to ask me what the hardest part of writing is that I have encountered, I’d have to reply inserting spontaneous humor. I have practiced, re-wrote, edited, and am still learning this style of humor.
As a Christian writer it can be a challenge to insert humor using a non-humorous character. Dry humor is a treasure, but if you are aiming for believable humor it should appear spontaneous.It creates a genuine character others can relate to.It shows character growth between characters.It can endear a character to readers who in turn expect the unexpected from that character, and experience a more enjoyable story.In “Hidden Creek”, the third book in my Running Forward Series, I inserted humor in the most unexpected moment for one character, and it helped readers relate to that certain character. Ben and Izabella are one of the couples in the book. Ben is a rascal, and Izabella doesn’t believe they are legally married, but by adding humor to a tense situation; he became a lovable rascal.Example:“…but I want to talk to them.”“…and I want to go back to Texas. We will not wait hours for the couple to return. Adious, sayonara, auf wiedersehen, shalom, au revoir, goodbye…”Izabella put the car in reverse, and frowned.You’re not funny…and you can’t play down the issue…As a reader, having read the previous pages, Ben does display a side to his character not shown before. His attempt at humor makes the reader see him as not a silly character, but one who can slip out of a tense situation.As a Christian writer, we all continue to learn our craft daily. I do admire a writer who can insert spontaneous humor with …in all appearance…complete ease. At times, it can be a challenge, but I personally love it!In the book I am writing now, “Eyes of a Neighbor”, book one of the American Neighborhood Series, I played with the idea of a harmless UPS truck in a scary situation for one of the characters. Writing the scene was a total joy for me, and it did have an unexpected moment of humor.I can remember, as a teenager, reading the stories by Alfred Hitchcock that began as typical daily events unfold for some average character. Hitchcock had little humor, if any at all. A reader became involved in his suspense, and toward the end of the story, he added a sly bit of humor. For me personally, now as a writer, it is the ultimate icing on the cake. As a Christian writer, we insert lessons, and values; creating each character and each book as carefully as a chef prepares a meal. Inserting humor can be a delicious slice of pie to that same chef.I encourage you to experiment with adding spontaneous humor.Happy writing!
Lynn Hobbs is the author of the Running Forward Series: Sin, Secrets, and Salvation , River Town , and Hidden Creek , and won 1st place Religious Fiction in 2013, 2014 and 2015 by Texas Association of Authors.
Lillie, A Motherless Child won 1st place Biography 2016, TAA.
Her books are available on Amazon . She is currently writing a new Christian Fiction series. Meanwhile, visit Lynn on Facebook , Twitter , Goodreads, and her website .
[image error] This entry was posted in Advice , Authors and writing , Friends of ACFW , writingand tagged Advice , Friends of ACFW , writing . Bookmark the permalink . ← Satan Hates Your Writing (A Defense Strategy) 2 Responses to Inserting Spontaneous Humor [image error] Carol Ashby says: December 7, 2016 at 10:45 am This is great advice. How easy it is to follow probably depends on your own sense of humor. When I was growing up, my whole family delighted in the well-told joke and the sudden turn of phrase that could lighten even a serious topic. We raised our kids the same way, filling our house with chuckles and laughter.
If there’s an underlying joy in a character, it will bubble up spontaneously throughout the work. I love those kinds of characters, and I write them myself. Good-natured teasing and kind-hearted repartee are part of my debut novel, Forgiven, that just released, and there’s a character in my WIP who can’t resist using a snippet of humor to relieve tension even in a deadly serious situation.Maybe the best way to train ourselves to write spontaneous humor is to use it often to brighten the days of our real-life friends. [image error] Lynn Hobbs says: December 7, 2016 at 3:04 pm I agree! We all enjoy a light unexpected chuckle in the midst of our daily routine, and if you are reading a book and experience this… I find it awesome! A welcomed surprise!
Inserting Spontaneous HumorPosted on December 7, 2016 by ACFWBy Lynn Hobbs
Have you ever read a Christian fiction book; either romance, suspense, or historical, and were amused by an unexpected sense of humor from one of the characters? I find it outstanding.If you were to ask me what the hardest part of writing is that I have encountered, I’d have to reply inserting spontaneous humor. I have practiced, re-wrote, edited, and am still learning this style of humor.
As a Christian writer it can be a challenge to insert humor using a non-humorous character. Dry humor is a treasure, but if you are aiming for believable humor it should appear spontaneous.It creates a genuine character others can relate to.It shows character growth between characters.It can endear a character to readers who in turn expect the unexpected from that character, and experience a more enjoyable story.In “Hidden Creek”, the third book in my Running Forward Series, I inserted humor in the most unexpected moment for one character, and it helped readers relate to that certain character. Ben and Izabella are one of the couples in the book. Ben is a rascal, and Izabella doesn’t believe they are legally married, but by adding humor to a tense situation; he became a lovable rascal.Example:“…but I want to talk to them.”“…and I want to go back to Texas. We will not wait hours for the couple to return. Adious, sayonara, auf wiedersehen, shalom, au revoir, goodbye…”Izabella put the car in reverse, and frowned.You’re not funny…and you can’t play down the issue…As a reader, having read the previous pages, Ben does display a side to his character not shown before. His attempt at humor makes the reader see him as not a silly character, but one who can slip out of a tense situation.As a Christian writer, we all continue to learn our craft daily. I do admire a writer who can insert spontaneous humor with …in all appearance…complete ease. At times, it can be a challenge, but I personally love it!In the book I am writing now, “Eyes of a Neighbor”, book one of the American Neighborhood Series, I played with the idea of a harmless UPS truck in a scary situation for one of the characters. Writing the scene was a total joy for me, and it did have an unexpected moment of humor.I can remember, as a teenager, reading the stories by Alfred Hitchcock that began as typical daily events unfold for some average character. Hitchcock had little humor, if any at all. A reader became involved in his suspense, and toward the end of the story, he added a sly bit of humor. For me personally, now as a writer, it is the ultimate icing on the cake. As a Christian writer, we insert lessons, and values; creating each character and each book as carefully as a chef prepares a meal. Inserting humor can be a delicious slice of pie to that same chef.I encourage you to experiment with adding spontaneous humor.Happy writing!
Lynn Hobbs is the author of the Running Forward Series: Sin, Secrets, and Salvation , River Town , and Hidden Creek , and won 1st place Religious Fiction in 2013, 2014 and 2015 by Texas Association of Authors.
Lillie, A Motherless Child won 1st place Biography 2016, TAA.
Her books are available on Amazon . She is currently writing a new Christian Fiction series. Meanwhile, visit Lynn on Facebook , Twitter , Goodreads, and her website .
[image error] This entry was posted in Advice , Authors and writing , Friends of ACFW , writingand tagged Advice , Friends of ACFW , writing . Bookmark the permalink . ← Satan Hates Your Writing (A Defense Strategy) 2 Responses to Inserting Spontaneous Humor [image error] Carol Ashby says: December 7, 2016 at 10:45 am This is great advice. How easy it is to follow probably depends on your own sense of humor. When I was growing up, my whole family delighted in the well-told joke and the sudden turn of phrase that could lighten even a serious topic. We raised our kids the same way, filling our house with chuckles and laughter.
If there’s an underlying joy in a character, it will bubble up spontaneously throughout the work. I love those kinds of characters, and I write them myself. Good-natured teasing and kind-hearted repartee are part of my debut novel, Forgiven, that just released, and there’s a character in my WIP who can’t resist using a snippet of humor to relieve tension even in a deadly serious situation.Maybe the best way to train ourselves to write spontaneous humor is to use it often to brighten the days of our real-life friends. [image error] Lynn Hobbs says: December 7, 2016 at 3:04 pm I agree! We all enjoy a light unexpected chuckle in the midst of our daily routine, and if you are reading a book and experience this… I find it awesome! A welcomed surprise!
October 25, 2016
No Profanity
Thank you, American Christian Fiction Writers for publishing my post, No profanity, on your website blog on Oct. 23, 2016.
http://www.acfw.com/blog/no-profanity/
No ProfanityPosted on October 23, 2016 by ACFWBy Lynn HobbsAbout a month ago, I tried to read a book where every other word from the main character was a curse word. Annoying? Yes. It distracted me from the story…and I really liked the story. More important, I admired the author. Excerpts from the book had been placed on social media for weeks. Momentum mounted. I looked forward to the release of this new novel, and I would give a review.After the first chapter, the main character not only cursed but cursed God and did it often. I put the book down.How can that author justify such dialogue in a book?
How can they be proud of such a book?True, some have told me it is necessary for an accurate description of that particular character–a violent criminal spitting out foul language.I disagree.In my opinion, other descriptions can be used and still have the desired effect without cursing… and especially without cursing God.For example:In the first book of my Christian Fiction, Running Forward series; Sin, Secrets, and Salvation…you are introduced to Susan Penleigh: a Christian wife unequally yoked to a non-Christian husband. He belittles her in public, verbally abuses her, and is controlling with her life. He doesn’t need cursing to stay in character. His actions speak louder than cursing.I want to encourage you as Christian authors to not feel pressured by others who add profanity.Stay true to your beliefs.I do.You will never find profanity in any books I write.Oh, back to that author I had admired before the latest book was released.
I did give a review.It remained on Amazon for half a day, and later disappeared.I described how difficult it was for me to get past all the vulgar language. I’d lay the book down, and later read another page–only to be shocked at the character cursing God again. I had to stop reading it. I gave an account of how I did enjoy the part of the story I could read.No, I was not being a prude.I gave an honest review.The author received over thirty reviews on release day. Other readers gave the book five star reviews and went in depth congratulating the author…even going as far to state they couldn’t wait for more…possibly a series.Secular readers and authors do not notice what stands out like a sore thumb to Christian readers and authors.How sad.We, as Christian authors must continue writing with values, morals and integrity.Who knows…someday, someone could pick up a Christian novel and learn a new way to live, or believe, or receive hope where they have none?We are God’s vessels, and I give Him the glory for my writing.I always pray for direction before I begin writing.I pray for others as well.Maybe, by being an example and by having our writing as a tool, a secular author may decide profanity doesn’t sound right in their book after all.
Lynn Hobbs is the author of the Running Forward Series: Sin, Secrets, and Salvation, River Town, and Hidden Creek, and won 1st place Religious Fiction in 2013, 2014 and 2015 by Texas Association of Authors.
Lillie, A Motherless Child won 1st place Biography 2016, TAA.
Her books are available on Amazon. She is currently writing a new Christian Fiction series. Meanwhile, visit Lynn on Facebook, Twitter, Goodreads, and her website.
This entry was posted in Advice, Authors and writing, Dialogue, Friends of ACFW and tagged Advice, authors, Friends of ACFW. Bookmark the permalink.← Plastic FlowersOctober! →
4 Responses to No Profanity
Lou Ann Keiser says:October 24, 2016 at 6:13 amI agree 100% with you. It is never necessary to include profanity. One can simply describe the scene and say, “He swore” and the reader gets the idea the character is bad. If a writer describes violence, abuse, or whatever, it’s not necessary to furnish the accompanying language. I do not appreciate any book with swearing throughout. I will, however tolerate one or two curse words–though I note their presence in any review. I think Christian authors have a duty to their readers to keep their books clean. Your post is excellent!
Lynn Hobbs says:October 24, 2016 at 10:03 amThank you, Lou Ann Keiser! I appreciate you taking time to express your views and agree with me on this important issue. Yes, I too think it is a Christian authors duty to the readers to keep their books clean. Thanks again, and I’m glad you enjoyed my post.
Patricia Bradley says:October 24, 2016 at 8:07 pmTo me, cursing is lazy writing. It takes a lot more effort to show grit than to curse.Lynn Hobbs says:October 24, 2016 at 9:37 pmThank you, Patricia Bradley for your comment. I agree…cursing is lazy writing. It does take a lot more effort to show grit than to curse…and creates a story we want to continue reading.Leave a Reply Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *Comment Name * Email * Website
http://www.acfw.com/blog/no-profanity/
No ProfanityPosted on October 23, 2016 by ACFWBy Lynn HobbsAbout a month ago, I tried to read a book where every other word from the main character was a curse word. Annoying? Yes. It distracted me from the story…and I really liked the story. More important, I admired the author. Excerpts from the book had been placed on social media for weeks. Momentum mounted. I looked forward to the release of this new novel, and I would give a review.After the first chapter, the main character not only cursed but cursed God and did it often. I put the book down.How can that author justify such dialogue in a book?
How can they be proud of such a book?True, some have told me it is necessary for an accurate description of that particular character–a violent criminal spitting out foul language.I disagree.In my opinion, other descriptions can be used and still have the desired effect without cursing… and especially without cursing God.For example:In the first book of my Christian Fiction, Running Forward series; Sin, Secrets, and Salvation…you are introduced to Susan Penleigh: a Christian wife unequally yoked to a non-Christian husband. He belittles her in public, verbally abuses her, and is controlling with her life. He doesn’t need cursing to stay in character. His actions speak louder than cursing.I want to encourage you as Christian authors to not feel pressured by others who add profanity.Stay true to your beliefs.I do.You will never find profanity in any books I write.Oh, back to that author I had admired before the latest book was released.I did give a review.It remained on Amazon for half a day, and later disappeared.I described how difficult it was for me to get past all the vulgar language. I’d lay the book down, and later read another page–only to be shocked at the character cursing God again. I had to stop reading it. I gave an account of how I did enjoy the part of the story I could read.No, I was not being a prude.I gave an honest review.The author received over thirty reviews on release day. Other readers gave the book five star reviews and went in depth congratulating the author…even going as far to state they couldn’t wait for more…possibly a series.Secular readers and authors do not notice what stands out like a sore thumb to Christian readers and authors.How sad.We, as Christian authors must continue writing with values, morals and integrity.Who knows…someday, someone could pick up a Christian novel and learn a new way to live, or believe, or receive hope where they have none?We are God’s vessels, and I give Him the glory for my writing.I always pray for direction before I begin writing.I pray for others as well.Maybe, by being an example and by having our writing as a tool, a secular author may decide profanity doesn’t sound right in their book after all.
Lynn Hobbs is the author of the Running Forward Series: Sin, Secrets, and Salvation, River Town, and Hidden Creek, and won 1st place Religious Fiction in 2013, 2014 and 2015 by Texas Association of Authors.Lillie, A Motherless Child won 1st place Biography 2016, TAA.
Her books are available on Amazon. She is currently writing a new Christian Fiction series. Meanwhile, visit Lynn on Facebook, Twitter, Goodreads, and her website.
This entry was posted in Advice, Authors and writing, Dialogue, Friends of ACFW and tagged Advice, authors, Friends of ACFW. Bookmark the permalink.← Plastic FlowersOctober! →4 Responses to No Profanity
Lou Ann Keiser says:October 24, 2016 at 6:13 amI agree 100% with you. It is never necessary to include profanity. One can simply describe the scene and say, “He swore” and the reader gets the idea the character is bad. If a writer describes violence, abuse, or whatever, it’s not necessary to furnish the accompanying language. I do not appreciate any book with swearing throughout. I will, however tolerate one or two curse words–though I note their presence in any review. I think Christian authors have a duty to their readers to keep their books clean. Your post is excellent!Lynn Hobbs says:October 24, 2016 at 10:03 amThank you, Lou Ann Keiser! I appreciate you taking time to express your views and agree with me on this important issue. Yes, I too think it is a Christian authors duty to the readers to keep their books clean. Thanks again, and I’m glad you enjoyed my post.Patricia Bradley says:October 24, 2016 at 8:07 pmTo me, cursing is lazy writing. It takes a lot more effort to show grit than to curse.Lynn Hobbs says:October 24, 2016 at 9:37 pmThank you, Patricia Bradley for your comment. I agree…cursing is lazy writing. It does take a lot more effort to show grit than to curse…and creates a story we want to continue reading.Leave a Reply Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *Comment Name * Email * Website
June 22, 2016
ACFW Posts Lynn Hobbs Submission, "A Brief Writing Experiment"on National Blog 6/22/2016
Thank you, American Christian Fiction Writers, for accepting and posting my submission to your blog on 6/22/2016.
A Brief Writing ExperimentPosted on June 22, 2016 by ACFWBy Lynn HobbsLearning new writing methods can be rewarding. I noticed several men writing a tighter style, and it did get my attention.
They mentioned more white space on a page drew readers from a younger generation.
What were they doing?
What happened?
Not any back story. Later in the book it could be introduced, but only a small part.
I have great respect for all three male writers. Each is well known, and I listen to their words of wisdom through blogs, newsletters, and writing conferences.
They happen to be men. So far, I have not noticed any female writers adopting this new style.I was taught to delete extra words or unnecessary words. Who, what, where, when, and why should be near the beginning. The five senses should be used as often as possible. Don’t use many exclamation marks. Show your story, don’t tell it, and always continue to learn the writing craft. We learn from each other. That being said, I kept an open mind, and considered the new tighter writing style.In their observation of the younger generation, it was pointed out that text messaging and tweeting were the norm. This generation of new readers and aspiring writers are not familiar with long flowing stories. They don’t have time for long stories. Their writing cuts through the chase and gets to the point.Do we want them as potential readers to our genre?
Defiantly.
Can we accommodate them without losing our own style of writing?
Our voice?
I believe we can.Yes, I do text and tweet messages. I tried incorporating texting and tweeting into my style of writing, and it felt awkward. What a challenge! I decided to experiment and rewrite the first chapter of my new book using some of this method.
My first chapter went from eighteen pages to a total of twelve pages. I tightened more and deleted a lot. Final page count for my first chapter: six pages.
Did I lose any important information?
No.
I spaced it out.
I didn’t give away details.
I saved them for later.
I wrote short sentences like I’m doing now.
Brief.
Short and sweet.
One on top of the other.
It built suspense.
It created pages readers turned fast.My paragraphs were what I refer to as normal. In between some of the paragraphs I’d branch out and sprinkle in a few short sentences.
More white space was created on the page as well as momentum. I have to admit I enjoyed locating the perfect spot to insert a few short sentences. Of course, I had already written the chapter, so it was more of an editing experience than a writing one for me.Dialogue took on a whole new snappy approach.
Example:
Steve pivoted. “You leaving?”
“Why?”
“I thought…”
Stepping forward, Kate frowned. “Don’t assume.”I usually don’t use a lot of tags but it worked for this example.
That’s the whole point.
Try something new.
It may work.
Happy writing!
Lynn Hobbs is the author of the Running Forward Series; a powerful faith and family saga.Book #1: Sin, Secrets, and Salvation, awarded 1st place, Religious Fiction, 2013, Texas Association of Authors.
Book #2: River Town, 1st place, Religious Fiction, 2014, TAA.
Book #3: Hidden Creek, 1st place, Religious Fiction 2015, TAA.
Lillie, A Motherless Child, 1st place Biography 2016, TAA.
You can find Lynn on her website at http://www.LynnHobbsAuthor.com,Facebook and Twitter.
This entry was posted in Advice, Authors and writing, Friends of ACFW, writingand tagged Advice, Friends of ACFW, writing. Bookmark the permalink.
June 13, 2016
Lynn Hobbs on Author Spotlight
Thank you, Barb Schlichting, for featuring me on the author spotlight of your blog, Barb's Books, on 6/11/2016!
Lynn Hobbs6/11/2016
My goal in writing Christian Fiction is to give readers a clear understanding of a Christian viewpoint by the actions of my main character.
Before I begin writing, I always pray for direction. I have a scripture in mind that fits the situation or moral of the story.
Sin, Secrets, and Salvation is book one. My character, Susan Penleigh, is a married Christian woman unequally yoked to a non-Christian husband. She experiences a shaky marriage that involves her entire family, and faces modern family issues throughout the 3 book series. Emotion and suspense are strong and can be related to by both men and woman. I once had a man in a wheel chair tell me he could relate to the verbal abuse Susan encountered as he himself experienced the same situation. One woman announced in church that Sin, Secrets, and Salvation was the best book showing the relationship between a mother and a daughter that she’d ever read. Susan’s journey is inspiring.
River Town is book two. I moved Susan to Texas during the worse drought in Texas history with terrifying wildfires that actually did happen in 2011. I had to evacuate as the fires came without two miles of my home. Although this is a book of fiction, I did research and interviewed many local residents for details to include in the book. Descriptions experienced by my characters concerning the fires were from real people who also witnessed it firsthand. In keeping with my goal, I also gave Susan a new job at a high school to interact with students and become a mentor. She had much to challenge her faith.
Hidden Creek is book three. I continue the characters, but place Susan with others making bad and good choices that show the consequences of their actions. In this book you learn who follows God’s will in their life, and I have written a major surprise in this book that…so far…not one reader has seen coming. Susan’s world comes alive in this book with lessons learned and exciting twists and turns. Hidden Creek concludes the Running Forward Series.
The Texas Association of Authors awarded my books first place honors in Religious Fiction in 2013, 2014, and 2015 for my books, “Sin, Secrets, and Salvation, “River Town”, and “Hidden Creek”―respectively. I give God the glory for my writing!
I felt led to write a biography next. Again, I prayed. “Lillie, A Motherless Child’ is the true life story of my mother. Born in Texas during the Great Depression Era, she was raised with sixteen siblings. Lillie’s own mother died when she was only seven years old. Wanting to stay true to her voice, I wrote it in first person. It reads as if she is telling you what happened. Play time as a child was entirely different back then. At eight years old, she raised a younger brother and sister at home―unsupervised, and often had kitchen fires while she cooked. She shares what they experienced as individuals, and as a German family through all of their childhood and married adult life. Six of her brothers were in the war at the same time. She was bullied daily at school because of her German name. She finally quit school one day. Her father made her go back and finish. He told her the bullies didn’t want to see her succeed, and she needed a good education for her future.
Her life is a miracle in itself. You witness a different way of life through her eyes. Complete with treasured pictures, and handed-down family recipes; “Lillie, A Motherless Child” is in large print. It is an inspiring book to read for men, women, and teens.
Again, I give God the glory. “Lillie, A Motherless Child” won first place in Biography in 2016 by the Texas Association of Authors.
I am currently writing a new Christian Fiction Series. Book one should be available before the end of 2016.
All books are on Amazon.com for purchase. I enjoy hearing from my readers. I am on facebook on timeline, and at my author page, https://www.facebook.com/Lynn-Hobbs-A..., twitter @LynnHobbsAuthor, LinkedIn, and Goodreads.com. To contact me, visit my website atwww.LynnHobbsAuthor.com If you liked my books, I would appreciate a review on them at Amazon.com
April 4, 2016
Modern Issues or Cookie Cutter...
Thank you, American Christian Fiction Writers for publishing my post to your websites blog today, April 4, 2016; titled " Modern Issues or Cookie Cutter..."
Modern Issues or Cookie Cutter…Posted on April 4, 2016 by ACFWBy Lynn Hobbs
Recently, I attended a ladies luncheon from several churches in my area. One woman had an out of state friend visiting her, and we welcomed her to the group. Upon learning I was the author of a Christian fiction series she had read, she discussed the ending of the last book in the series.She loved the series, but did not like the ending. She wanted the ending to be “happily ever after” for the main character.I smiled and explained that life isn’t always like that. I write about modern issues facing my characters, and seldom is a problem solved like a neat and tidy bow wrapped around a Christmas present. Often, people face options and choices must be made.In my writing, people are responsible for their actions.She explained she enjoyed pleasant, predictable stories with happy endings.I thanked her for the constructive criticism and realized she preferred cookie cutter books. That is fine. No author can please every reader.Personally, I would be bored trying to read a cookie cutter book. It would be like feeding bland baby food to an adult chef. I write and read Christian novels. Anything Christian: fiction, romance, mysteries, suspense, inspirational, historical, etc.; can draw me into the story and hold my attention. Not if it’s the following format, though:1. Girl meets boy, or vice versa.
2. Boy doesn’t like girl, or vice versa.
3. Conflict grows.
4. Conflict is resolved.
5. Boy and girl live happily ever after.A fantasy or science fiction would not work for me, either, but do have a huge audience of readers.As an author, I recommend staying with your genre and your voice– your style of writing. Give 100% of yourself in your writing and have your reader feel the emotion of your character.Are you making a moral example of a character? Are you presenting a learning experience your reader could relate to?Can you blend a scripture into a situation that flows with your story?For me, writing with modern issues is a great opportunity to introduce Christian values to the non-Christian reader. I pray for direction and the story moves forward with purpose.Have you ever been inspired by someone? Ever work with someone who survived a crisis? Could those situations possibly work in your characters life to relate to your readers? Yes, it could, but only if it has a believable resolution. Fiction has to be believable. Christian fiction is my calling, and I love sharing experiences of others that are encouraging. I want my readers uplifted by the actions and reasoning of my Christian characters towards life with both Christians and non-Christians.A story can be written as soothing therapy to a stressed reader.What do you want to convey?When do you want to present key facts to the reader?Are you writing to women, men, or both?Can your targeted audience relate to your story?Enjoy the options, and happy writing!
Modern Issues or Cookie Cutter…Posted on April 4, 2016 by ACFWBy Lynn Hobbs
Recently, I attended a ladies luncheon from several churches in my area. One woman had an out of state friend visiting her, and we welcomed her to the group. Upon learning I was the author of a Christian fiction series she had read, she discussed the ending of the last book in the series.She loved the series, but did not like the ending. She wanted the ending to be “happily ever after” for the main character.I smiled and explained that life isn’t always like that. I write about modern issues facing my characters, and seldom is a problem solved like a neat and tidy bow wrapped around a Christmas present. Often, people face options and choices must be made.In my writing, people are responsible for their actions.She explained she enjoyed pleasant, predictable stories with happy endings.I thanked her for the constructive criticism and realized she preferred cookie cutter books. That is fine. No author can please every reader.Personally, I would be bored trying to read a cookie cutter book. It would be like feeding bland baby food to an adult chef. I write and read Christian novels. Anything Christian: fiction, romance, mysteries, suspense, inspirational, historical, etc.; can draw me into the story and hold my attention. Not if it’s the following format, though:1. Girl meets boy, or vice versa.
2. Boy doesn’t like girl, or vice versa.
3. Conflict grows.
4. Conflict is resolved.
5. Boy and girl live happily ever after.A fantasy or science fiction would not work for me, either, but do have a huge audience of readers.As an author, I recommend staying with your genre and your voice– your style of writing. Give 100% of yourself in your writing and have your reader feel the emotion of your character.Are you making a moral example of a character? Are you presenting a learning experience your reader could relate to?Can you blend a scripture into a situation that flows with your story?For me, writing with modern issues is a great opportunity to introduce Christian values to the non-Christian reader. I pray for direction and the story moves forward with purpose.Have you ever been inspired by someone? Ever work with someone who survived a crisis? Could those situations possibly work in your characters life to relate to your readers? Yes, it could, but only if it has a believable resolution. Fiction has to be believable. Christian fiction is my calling, and I love sharing experiences of others that are encouraging. I want my readers uplifted by the actions and reasoning of my Christian characters towards life with both Christians and non-Christians.A story can be written as soothing therapy to a stressed reader.What do you want to convey?When do you want to present key facts to the reader?Are you writing to women, men, or both?Can your targeted audience relate to your story?Enjoy the options, and happy writing!
February 29, 2016
"Lillie, A Motherless Child" wins First Place in Biography 2016 by the Texas Association of Authors!
What a blessing! "Lillie, A Motherless Child" won First Place in Biography 2016 by the Texas Association of Authors!
This book took me two years to write. It is the true story of the life of my mother. I will always treasure the moments and stories Mom shared as I wrote about her life. Born in the depression era with 16 siblings, her own mother passed away when Mom was 7 years old. It truly is the journey of a motherless child to an inspiring woman of faith. This award is a special blessing to me, and I don't know who is happier; me, Mom, my sister Rhonda, my new publisher: son Jeff Brannon, or the rest of my family! It is available for purchase on Amazon.com and TexasAuthors.com
If you have enjoyed reading the book, I'd appreciate you leaving a review about it at Amazon.com
Here is the link. Thank you! :)
http://www.amazon.com/Lillie-Motherless-Child-Lynn-Hobbs-ebook/dp/B0164NQSS4/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1456804266&sr=8-1&keywords=Lillie%2C+A+Motherless+Child%2C+Lynn+Hobbs
This book took me two years to write. It is the true story of the life of my mother. I will always treasure the moments and stories Mom shared as I wrote about her life. Born in the depression era with 16 siblings, her own mother passed away when Mom was 7 years old. It truly is the journey of a motherless child to an inspiring woman of faith. This award is a special blessing to me, and I don't know who is happier; me, Mom, my sister Rhonda, my new publisher: son Jeff Brannon, or the rest of my family! It is available for purchase on Amazon.com and TexasAuthors.com
If you have enjoyed reading the book, I'd appreciate you leaving a review about it at Amazon.com
Here is the link. Thank you! :)
http://www.amazon.com/Lillie-Motherless-Child-Lynn-Hobbs-ebook/dp/B0164NQSS4/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1456804266&sr=8-1&keywords=Lillie%2C+A+Motherless+Child%2C+Lynn+Hobbs
February 2, 2016
Writing A New Novel? Pray About It!
Thank you, American Christian Fiction Writers, for accepting and publishing my post today; Feb. 2, 2016, on your website!
Top of FormBottom of FormTop of FormBottom of FormWriting a New Novel? Pray About It!Posted on February 2, 2016 by ACFWBy Lynn Hobbs
An idea flashes through your mind in the middle of the night, and you’re convinced it’s THE answer to your next novel.Maybe not.You decide which chapter to insert the idea …when to let readers be aware of that tidbit of information…Days pass as you change scenes and replace characters with that idea playing out in your mind.No. Nothing works. It didn’t feel right.More days pass.The flashed idea continues being a puzzle.It has a place in your novel, and you have a strong gut feeling about it.You know you are right.Wait a minute. It’s not falling in place.Something is wrong here…Then you realize…You don’t want your will for the book…you want God’s will for the book.The above situation can happen if you write without praying first. Those who know me are aware that I always pray for direction before I write. My new series has begun with a scripture that will follow through all three books. I am excited as words flow, situations develop that have meaning, and yes, I will give God the glory…not myself.Have you ever considered someone might be saved by reading your book? As a Christian writer in today’s anything goes world; we have an opportunity to display morals in our books.I also enjoy changing the protagonist from a male to a female…or vice versa.Change location.This takes you out of your comfort zone…new locations demand research to make it believable.Time well spent? Absolutely.I was taught to write what I personally know, and what I witnessed by others I knew…
About the person who was mistreated and overcame obstacles. About the person in jail. About the person who graduated with young children as a single parent. I could go on and on.Years ago, I participated in a prison ministry where as a group, we traveled to a women’s prison in Gatesville, Texas. Praying one on one for each woman was powerful.Some of the inmates wrote letters to us but could never write directly to us. Their letters went through the church, and later sent to our homes.No, we couldn’t ask why the women were in prison, but we felt their need was met that day through what we did in God’s name.That day, we actually were the vessel He used to help others.The same principle can apply to our writing. We can be His vessel for many.While some readers aren’t incarcerated, they may feel imprisoned by the life they are living. Our book cover may catch their eye at a library, or it may be left on a table at a doctor’s office. We have no idea where or when it will be read by someone who needs to be reading it at that exact moment in their life.That’s why writing a book without praying first would not work for me.Prayer first is awesome!
Lynn Hobbs is the author of the Running Forward Series; a powerful faith and family saga.
Book #1: Sin, Secrets, and Salvation, awarded 1st place, Religious Fiction, 2013, Texas Association of Authors.
Book #2: River Town, 1st place, Religious Fiction, 2014, TAA.
Book #3: Hidden Creek, 1st place, Religious Fiction 2015, TAA. Lillie, A Motherless Child (Christian biography).
You can find Lynn on her website at http://www.LynnHobbsAuthor.com andFacebook [image error] This entry was posted in Advice, Authors and writing, Friends of ACFW, Prayer,writing and tagged Advice, authors, Friends of ACFW, Prayer, writing. Bookmark the permalink.
← ACFW New Releases: February 2016
Top of FormBottom of FormTop of FormBottom of FormWriting a New Novel? Pray About It!Posted on February 2, 2016 by ACFWBy Lynn Hobbs
An idea flashes through your mind in the middle of the night, and you’re convinced it’s THE answer to your next novel.Maybe not.You decide which chapter to insert the idea …when to let readers be aware of that tidbit of information…Days pass as you change scenes and replace characters with that idea playing out in your mind.No. Nothing works. It didn’t feel right.More days pass.The flashed idea continues being a puzzle.It has a place in your novel, and you have a strong gut feeling about it.You know you are right.Wait a minute. It’s not falling in place.Something is wrong here…Then you realize…You don’t want your will for the book…you want God’s will for the book.The above situation can happen if you write without praying first. Those who know me are aware that I always pray for direction before I write. My new series has begun with a scripture that will follow through all three books. I am excited as words flow, situations develop that have meaning, and yes, I will give God the glory…not myself.Have you ever considered someone might be saved by reading your book? As a Christian writer in today’s anything goes world; we have an opportunity to display morals in our books.I also enjoy changing the protagonist from a male to a female…or vice versa.Change location.This takes you out of your comfort zone…new locations demand research to make it believable.Time well spent? Absolutely.I was taught to write what I personally know, and what I witnessed by others I knew…
About the person who was mistreated and overcame obstacles. About the person in jail. About the person who graduated with young children as a single parent. I could go on and on.Years ago, I participated in a prison ministry where as a group, we traveled to a women’s prison in Gatesville, Texas. Praying one on one for each woman was powerful.Some of the inmates wrote letters to us but could never write directly to us. Their letters went through the church, and later sent to our homes.No, we couldn’t ask why the women were in prison, but we felt their need was met that day through what we did in God’s name.That day, we actually were the vessel He used to help others.The same principle can apply to our writing. We can be His vessel for many.While some readers aren’t incarcerated, they may feel imprisoned by the life they are living. Our book cover may catch their eye at a library, or it may be left on a table at a doctor’s office. We have no idea where or when it will be read by someone who needs to be reading it at that exact moment in their life.That’s why writing a book without praying first would not work for me.Prayer first is awesome!
Lynn Hobbs is the author of the Running Forward Series; a powerful faith and family saga.
Book #1: Sin, Secrets, and Salvation, awarded 1st place, Religious Fiction, 2013, Texas Association of Authors.
Book #2: River Town, 1st place, Religious Fiction, 2014, TAA.
Book #3: Hidden Creek, 1st place, Religious Fiction 2015, TAA. Lillie, A Motherless Child (Christian biography).
You can find Lynn on her website at http://www.LynnHobbsAuthor.com andFacebook [image error] This entry was posted in Advice, Authors and writing, Friends of ACFW, Prayer,writing and tagged Advice, authors, Friends of ACFW, Prayer, writing. Bookmark the permalink.
← ACFW New Releases: February 2016
January 10, 2016
Hidden Creek Excerpt Featured by Venture Galleries
Thank you, Venture Galleries for featuring an excerpt of "Hidden Creek" on your website today!Readers, enjoy the sample read!
Sunday Sampler: Hidden Creek by Lynn HobbsJANUARY 10, 2016In our mission to connect readers, writers, and books, Venture Galleries has launched a series featuring writing samples from some of the best authors in the marketplace today. Sunday’s Sampler is an excerpt from Hidden Creek, book three of three in the Running Forward Series, a powerful faith and family saga by Lynn Hobbs. Hidden Creek won first place in Religious Fiction for 2015 by The Texas Association of Authors.
As one reviewer said: Hidden Creek is a modern, fast-paced story, full of the events that have to be faced and overcome in daily life. Showing the strength of friendship, and what can be achieved with a loving relationship. Set in familiar surroundings of Northeast Texas, Hidden Creek is a really good read, and part of an enjoyable series.
The Story
Two women, two men, fight the wages of sin. Who heals? Who follows God’s will?
Four journeys, four friends; turn the page, let the story begin…
Suspense builds as new faces emerge. Unexpected surprises, exciting twists and turns, and lessons
learned make Susan’s world come alive.
Through many struggles, does Susan’s faith prevail? Will this family ever bond together?
The Sampler Lynn Hobbs
“Answer, Logan.” Adrenaline shot through Ben’s veins, and he focused on the telephone. Sweat
popped out on his forehead, and he grumbled into the receiver. “Come on, come on.”
His brother answered while Ben was mid-air in hanging up the telephone. The vigorous tapping
of his foot ceased, energy left him, and his body involuntarily swayed.
“Logan? It’s me, Ben. I need help. I cannot make myself look at her.” He flopped in a chair and
gripped the armrest.
“Who is she? She is my wife. Do you recall meeting Izabella when you were in the hospital? She
came with Susan. I married her…last night. Only, she won’t wake up today. What? We did party last
night. No, I don’t need any more trouble. Don’t tell me to watch my temper. Yes, I’ll try harder to
wake her.” He slammed the motel phone down.
Ben seethed. He forced himself to abandon the mounting fear gnawing at his insides, and studied
Izabella’s condition. He leaned forward in his chair and felt the weight of his bloated stomach against
the top of his legs. Incapable of compassion, Ben stared at her with curiosity. One arm hung off the
edge of the bed, and her mouth was slightly open.
“Izabella. Izabella? Well, la-di-da, you are not so reserved now.” He jumped up and tiptoed to the
bed. “Izabella, can you hear me? I don’t believe you are dying.”
I will wake you…where’s the ice machine?
He wandered out in the hall bringing the ice bucket assigned to their room. Ben located the
familiar metal machine around the corner and laughed a low, guttural sound. He promptly lifted the
lid and filled the bucket. Within mere seconds, he fled the area and entered the motel room with the
ice intact.
“Izabella?” He snickered and dumped the bucket of cold, ice cubes on her face.
She sputtered and gasped, rising from the bed with a scowl.
“Ben how dare you,” Izabella yelled.
“Trust me. It was an act of mercy.”
“Mercy? Your definition of mercy is not the same as mine.”
“I was worried about you, Izabella. You slept and slept. Here, let me help you.” He wrapped his
arms around her waist and gently lifted. She slowly got up and stood without his assistance.
“What time is it? I feel worn out and groggy.” She hobbled across the carpet and retrieved her
watch on the nightstand. “Five o’clock? I slept all day?”
“Yes, and I had to consider drastic measures, Izabella. Let’s put this incident behind us.”
“You sound so kindhearted about drenching me with ice cubes.” She gave him a playful shove.
“I’ll get cleaned up, and we can leave.”
“Fair enough. It won’t take long to get us checked out at the office.”
He drifted out of the room and she grabbed her make-up bag. A hot shower eased the stiff
muscles in her back. Energy returned, and she emerged resembling herself again.
Ben popped in the room and glanced at her. “Well, good to have you back,” He embraced his wife
and held her at arm’s length. “Rather hasty improvement, my dear.”
Izabella shook her head. “Before I took my shower, I looked in the mirror and didn’t know the
haggard woman I saw, either.”
“I am notorious for staying up too late. I must have kept you from getting enough sleep last night.
I apologize.”
“Ben, I don’t remember last night.”
“We got married last night.” He whirled her around and burst out laughing. “No need to get
anxious. The pastor will record our marriage at the courthouse, and the certificate will be mailed to
your house, I mean, our house.”
“My house…my house guest…I forgot about Susan. She must be sick with worry. Where is my
phone?”
Ben spotted the cell phone near the television and pitched it high into the air. Her arm shot up, and
she caught the phone. “Great catch; I’ll go get us something to eat.” Ben sailed out the door.
Izabella clicked on Susan’s name and hit speaker phone as it rang.
“Hello?”
“Susan, it’s me.”
“Oh, I’m so relieved to hear your voice. Izabella, are you okay? What is going on?”
“It’s so romantic. Ben and I ran off and got married…”
Susan yelled. “Izabella, you don’t know anything about Ben. I can’t believe you rushed into
marriage with him.”
“Oh, Susan, don’t get so alarmed. I love him.”
“No. you don’t. You are attracted to him. It is a physical attraction. That is all. What happened
when the attraction dulls? You don’t know if you have anything in common with each other, or share
the same values, faith, or want the same future together…nothing. No foundation whatsoever.”
“Whatsoever? Sounds serious to me.” Izabella giggled. “I am in love.”
“Okay, so tell me about the wedding. What was it like? Where did this happen?”
Izabella laughed. “We got married last night, and I slept all day. Actually, I don’t remember.”
“You don’t remember?” Susan blurted.
“Calm down. I know you are concerned.”
“Where are you, Izabella?”
“…Hugo, Oklahoma in a motel. Ben went after food for us.”
“Do me a favor, this is important. Before you leave Hugo, please go back and check out the
places you were supposed to be last night. See if any people remember you. Will you do that for me?”
“Well, yes, and it’s a great idea. I mean, I am a grown woman and I have a right to find out. If
everything isn’t on the up and up, Ben will have some explaining to do. Does that make you feel
better?”
“Yes, and if you need me, don’t hesitate to call…day or night.”
“I will if it is ever necessary.”
“When are you two returning?”
“I don’t know.”
“Please be careful, Izabella.”
“Susan, I assure you, there is no reason to worry. We’ll talk later, bye,”
“I hope you are right. Bye.”
Izabella located her purse and placed her cell phone in the side pocket. She glanced at her left
hand and gasped.
No wedding ring…apparently I forgot more than I realized…
Sunday Sampler: Hidden Creek by Lynn HobbsJANUARY 10, 2016In our mission to connect readers, writers, and books, Venture Galleries has launched a series featuring writing samples from some of the best authors in the marketplace today. Sunday’s Sampler is an excerpt from Hidden Creek, book three of three in the Running Forward Series, a powerful faith and family saga by Lynn Hobbs. Hidden Creek won first place in Religious Fiction for 2015 by The Texas Association of Authors.
As one reviewer said: Hidden Creek is a modern, fast-paced story, full of the events that have to be faced and overcome in daily life. Showing the strength of friendship, and what can be achieved with a loving relationship. Set in familiar surroundings of Northeast Texas, Hidden Creek is a really good read, and part of an enjoyable series.
The Story
Two women, two men, fight the wages of sin. Who heals? Who follows God’s will?
Four journeys, four friends; turn the page, let the story begin…
Suspense builds as new faces emerge. Unexpected surprises, exciting twists and turns, and lessons
learned make Susan’s world come alive.
Through many struggles, does Susan’s faith prevail? Will this family ever bond together?
The Sampler Lynn Hobbs
“Answer, Logan.” Adrenaline shot through Ben’s veins, and he focused on the telephone. Sweat
popped out on his forehead, and he grumbled into the receiver. “Come on, come on.”
His brother answered while Ben was mid-air in hanging up the telephone. The vigorous tapping
of his foot ceased, energy left him, and his body involuntarily swayed.
“Logan? It’s me, Ben. I need help. I cannot make myself look at her.” He flopped in a chair and
gripped the armrest.
“Who is she? She is my wife. Do you recall meeting Izabella when you were in the hospital? She
came with Susan. I married her…last night. Only, she won’t wake up today. What? We did party last
night. No, I don’t need any more trouble. Don’t tell me to watch my temper. Yes, I’ll try harder to
wake her.” He slammed the motel phone down.
Ben seethed. He forced himself to abandon the mounting fear gnawing at his insides, and studied
Izabella’s condition. He leaned forward in his chair and felt the weight of his bloated stomach against
the top of his legs. Incapable of compassion, Ben stared at her with curiosity. One arm hung off the
edge of the bed, and her mouth was slightly open.
“Izabella. Izabella? Well, la-di-da, you are not so reserved now.” He jumped up and tiptoed to the
bed. “Izabella, can you hear me? I don’t believe you are dying.”
I will wake you…where’s the ice machine?
He wandered out in the hall bringing the ice bucket assigned to their room. Ben located the
familiar metal machine around the corner and laughed a low, guttural sound. He promptly lifted the
lid and filled the bucket. Within mere seconds, he fled the area and entered the motel room with the
ice intact.
“Izabella?” He snickered and dumped the bucket of cold, ice cubes on her face.
She sputtered and gasped, rising from the bed with a scowl.
“Ben how dare you,” Izabella yelled.
“Trust me. It was an act of mercy.”
“Mercy? Your definition of mercy is not the same as mine.”
“I was worried about you, Izabella. You slept and slept. Here, let me help you.” He wrapped his
arms around her waist and gently lifted. She slowly got up and stood without his assistance.
“What time is it? I feel worn out and groggy.” She hobbled across the carpet and retrieved her
watch on the nightstand. “Five o’clock? I slept all day?”
“Yes, and I had to consider drastic measures, Izabella. Let’s put this incident behind us.”
“You sound so kindhearted about drenching me with ice cubes.” She gave him a playful shove.
“I’ll get cleaned up, and we can leave.”
“Fair enough. It won’t take long to get us checked out at the office.”
He drifted out of the room and she grabbed her make-up bag. A hot shower eased the stiff
muscles in her back. Energy returned, and she emerged resembling herself again.
Ben popped in the room and glanced at her. “Well, good to have you back,” He embraced his wife
and held her at arm’s length. “Rather hasty improvement, my dear.”
Izabella shook her head. “Before I took my shower, I looked in the mirror and didn’t know the
haggard woman I saw, either.”
“I am notorious for staying up too late. I must have kept you from getting enough sleep last night.
I apologize.”
“Ben, I don’t remember last night.”
“We got married last night.” He whirled her around and burst out laughing. “No need to get
anxious. The pastor will record our marriage at the courthouse, and the certificate will be mailed to
your house, I mean, our house.”
“My house…my house guest…I forgot about Susan. She must be sick with worry. Where is my
phone?”
Ben spotted the cell phone near the television and pitched it high into the air. Her arm shot up, and
she caught the phone. “Great catch; I’ll go get us something to eat.” Ben sailed out the door.
Izabella clicked on Susan’s name and hit speaker phone as it rang.
“Hello?”
“Susan, it’s me.”
“Oh, I’m so relieved to hear your voice. Izabella, are you okay? What is going on?”
“It’s so romantic. Ben and I ran off and got married…”
Susan yelled. “Izabella, you don’t know anything about Ben. I can’t believe you rushed into
marriage with him.”
“Oh, Susan, don’t get so alarmed. I love him.”
“No. you don’t. You are attracted to him. It is a physical attraction. That is all. What happened
when the attraction dulls? You don’t know if you have anything in common with each other, or share
the same values, faith, or want the same future together…nothing. No foundation whatsoever.”
“Whatsoever? Sounds serious to me.” Izabella giggled. “I am in love.”
“Okay, so tell me about the wedding. What was it like? Where did this happen?”
Izabella laughed. “We got married last night, and I slept all day. Actually, I don’t remember.”
“You don’t remember?” Susan blurted.
“Calm down. I know you are concerned.”
“Where are you, Izabella?”
“…Hugo, Oklahoma in a motel. Ben went after food for us.”
“Do me a favor, this is important. Before you leave Hugo, please go back and check out the
places you were supposed to be last night. See if any people remember you. Will you do that for me?”
“Well, yes, and it’s a great idea. I mean, I am a grown woman and I have a right to find out. If
everything isn’t on the up and up, Ben will have some explaining to do. Does that make you feel
better?”
“Yes, and if you need me, don’t hesitate to call…day or night.”
“I will if it is ever necessary.”
“When are you two returning?”
“I don’t know.”
“Please be careful, Izabella.”
“Susan, I assure you, there is no reason to worry. We’ll talk later, bye,”
“I hope you are right. Bye.”
Izabella located her purse and placed her cell phone in the side pocket. She glanced at her left
hand and gasped.
No wedding ring…apparently I forgot more than I realized…
December 27, 2015
"River Town" Featured on Venture Galleries website
Thank you, Venture Galleries for today's feature,"River Town" on your website! Readers enjoy the sampler!
Top of Form
Bottom of FormVENTURE GALLERIES BLOG FOR READERS AND WRITERS
Sunday Sampler: River Town by Lynn HobbsDECEMBER 27, 2015
In our mission to connect readers, writers, and books, Venture Galleries has launched a new series featuring writing samples from some of the best authors in the marketplace today. Sunday Sampler is an excerpt from River Town, a powerful faith and family saga from Lynn Hobbs.As one reviewer said: This book depicts small town life – from the seedier side. Yet, it has a thread of faith running through it that kept the story from unraveling. It will open your eyes to what teachers face in our public high schools and the reasons things are deteriorating inside the walls.The StoryIn this inspiring, suspenseful, action-packed novel Susan Penleigh relocates to Texas in 2011 during the worst drought in history with terrifying wildfires, a new job at a high school, and many people to challenge her faith.From troubled teenagers to an arrogant boss, scripture helps a woman’s journey through modern family issues. A compelling page turner that will enthrall teens, men, and women.
Book two of the Running Forward Series "River Town".The Sampler
“I smelled a strange order in the air a few times before the explosion. It was like a burst of chemicals appeared in the air and lingered. It didn’t go away quickly, and nearly gagged me. I ran inside the house to breathe.”“Anyone else notice it?”“I don’t know…most of my neighbors were at work. Later, I observed two men across the river walking through the woods. When they saw me both men halfway hid themselves behind trees. Strange.”“I’ll put it in my report, anything else?”“No. They acted suspicious, really weird with the odd smell, too.”Deputy Acker wrote Rick’s name, address and phone number. Another vehicle neared the barricade. He and Rick glanced at the slow approach of the car.“It’s Susan. She’s a neighbor, I can vouch for her,” Rick stammered at the deputy, and they walked to Susan’s Chevy Equinox.She idled her engine and lowered the window.“Hey girl, I didn’t mean to scare you when I called this morning. The neighborhood fires are out now.”“Listen, I appreciate you warning me. Thanks Rick.”“You can go on back to work, Susan, things are fine.”“It’s a long story, but I won’t be going back to work. Is it safe to stay at home?”“Well, yes, for the time being, but what’s going on?” He frowned.“Later. We will talk later, okay.”“Okay.”“Ma’am, it is safe now, but we may have to evacuate at any time.” Deputy Acker hastened to mention.“Thank you, officer. Ten o’clock news on the radio announced wildfires have just sprung up again in Gregg, Panola, Marion, Harrison, and Cass County. They are scattered all over. It’s frightening.”“Yes, ma’am. A judge declared this an emergency and officially activated the Emergency Operations Center. We now have state and federal assistance available. The U.S. Fish and Wildlife Service is providing personnel along with planes and helicopters equipped to scoop water from Cherokee Lake. Maude Cobb Convention and Activity Center in Longview is bustling with firefighters coming and going. Get photo albums, deeds, insurance papers, anything valuable or irreplaceable, and lock them in your car. We never know when a fire might break out again, and it’s best to be prepared. A unit from the River Town Fire Department will be stationed here tonight in case hot spots grow out of control. We’ll be patrolling, also. Drive around the side of the barricade, and you can return home.” He tipped his hat at her.She nodded at both men, put her car in gear, and carefully drove around the barricade.“I’m heading home myself. It’s too hot to be outside.” Rick returned to the truck and followed Susan for over a mile.She pulled into her driveway, and Rick kept driving to his own house while he gazed in amazement at the nearby fire damage. Tall burnt trees stood like black silhouettes in a Halloween picture, bleak and ghostly. Many homes were surrounded by black charred lawns that crept too close to their exterior walls. Thank God for all firefighters. The deputy flashed through his mind. And thank God for all law enforcement personnel.
Rick arrived home and parked the vehicle. He opened the truck door and stepped onto the concrete driveway. Lingering smoke remained in the air, similar to extremely low lying clouds. Not a breeze blew, and Rick marveled at the blanket of smoke only a few feet off the ground. A deep cough progressed quickly until he went in the house, where the cough lessened. Inside, everything reeked of the strong smoke smell. Rick shook his head at this discovery. Thank God I still have a house. Wonder what the back yard looks like? A brisk walk through the house, and he opened the back door. Deep in thought, he stared straight ahead when a slight movement against the outside wall caught his attention. Rick quickly turned his head towards the sound.“Daddy.”Rick blinked at his daughter in disbelief. Soot covered her arms, and her hair was in disarray.“Tessa.” Shocked, he stood still.“Oh, Daddy,” she gushed, and embraced him in an instant hug.“How did you get here?”“My boyfriend got me out, and…and…I didn’t know it, but he …he is best friends with that dirty ole’ man, Cotton.”“You don’t need to be involved with thugs. You need to go back to the drug treatment center.”“I’m scared, Daddy.”Rick melted as fast as a piece of chocolate in the heat of summer. And she knows it. He held her close and slowly patted the top of her head while years of pain returned in full force. He fought back tears while his heart ached.“Baby girl, I can’t help you. You have to want to help yourself.”Tessa sobbed and held onto her father.“I have to ask you something, Tessa, listen to me. Were you across the river from me a few days ago?”The crying abruptly stopped, and a meek answer is heard by Rick.“Yes, Daddy.”“What were you doing there?”“It was a meth lab. It exploded.”“You know you have to go back to the center.”Tessa glared at him. “Like this? You want to drop me off at the center like this?” She spread her filthy arms wide apart.“Go wash up, and we are going to talk to a new friend of mine. Then, see about getting you some clothes at Walmart.”Tessa cleaned quickly, and Rick drove her to talk to Deputy Acker, still parked up the road. The boyfriend’s description was given and all other pertinent information. Clothes were bought, fast food was eaten, and arrangements were made for Tessa to return the next day to the drug treatment center a hundred miles away.Both exhausted, Father and daughter settled in for the night. About four o’clock in the morning, Rick awoke to glass shattering from the double windows in the living room.Tessa’s boyfriend broke into the home and demanded Tessa leave with him.Numb with sleep, Rick managed to call 911, and hold a shotgun on the intruder. Deputies arrived and escorted the shouting drug addict out in handcuffs.Rick drove a sullen Tessa back to the center after breakfast. He silently prayed for her and thought about the break-ins of his house and truck. He tried even harder to forgive what a drug addict will do for drugs.Rick couldn’t look at her. She sat rigid and angry. He blinked his watery eyes several times and sighed deeply. What is she, twenty-three years old now?
Top of Form
Bottom of FormVENTURE GALLERIES BLOG FOR READERS AND WRITERS
Sunday Sampler: River Town by Lynn HobbsDECEMBER 27, 2015
In our mission to connect readers, writers, and books, Venture Galleries has launched a new series featuring writing samples from some of the best authors in the marketplace today. Sunday Sampler is an excerpt from River Town, a powerful faith and family saga from Lynn Hobbs.As one reviewer said: This book depicts small town life – from the seedier side. Yet, it has a thread of faith running through it that kept the story from unraveling. It will open your eyes to what teachers face in our public high schools and the reasons things are deteriorating inside the walls.The StoryIn this inspiring, suspenseful, action-packed novel Susan Penleigh relocates to Texas in 2011 during the worst drought in history with terrifying wildfires, a new job at a high school, and many people to challenge her faith.From troubled teenagers to an arrogant boss, scripture helps a woman’s journey through modern family issues. A compelling page turner that will enthrall teens, men, and women.
Book two of the Running Forward Series "River Town".The Sampler
“I smelled a strange order in the air a few times before the explosion. It was like a burst of chemicals appeared in the air and lingered. It didn’t go away quickly, and nearly gagged me. I ran inside the house to breathe.”“Anyone else notice it?”“I don’t know…most of my neighbors were at work. Later, I observed two men across the river walking through the woods. When they saw me both men halfway hid themselves behind trees. Strange.”“I’ll put it in my report, anything else?”“No. They acted suspicious, really weird with the odd smell, too.”Deputy Acker wrote Rick’s name, address and phone number. Another vehicle neared the barricade. He and Rick glanced at the slow approach of the car.“It’s Susan. She’s a neighbor, I can vouch for her,” Rick stammered at the deputy, and they walked to Susan’s Chevy Equinox.She idled her engine and lowered the window.“Hey girl, I didn’t mean to scare you when I called this morning. The neighborhood fires are out now.”“Listen, I appreciate you warning me. Thanks Rick.”“You can go on back to work, Susan, things are fine.”“It’s a long story, but I won’t be going back to work. Is it safe to stay at home?”“Well, yes, for the time being, but what’s going on?” He frowned.“Later. We will talk later, okay.”“Okay.”“Ma’am, it is safe now, but we may have to evacuate at any time.” Deputy Acker hastened to mention.“Thank you, officer. Ten o’clock news on the radio announced wildfires have just sprung up again in Gregg, Panola, Marion, Harrison, and Cass County. They are scattered all over. It’s frightening.”“Yes, ma’am. A judge declared this an emergency and officially activated the Emergency Operations Center. We now have state and federal assistance available. The U.S. Fish and Wildlife Service is providing personnel along with planes and helicopters equipped to scoop water from Cherokee Lake. Maude Cobb Convention and Activity Center in Longview is bustling with firefighters coming and going. Get photo albums, deeds, insurance papers, anything valuable or irreplaceable, and lock them in your car. We never know when a fire might break out again, and it’s best to be prepared. A unit from the River Town Fire Department will be stationed here tonight in case hot spots grow out of control. We’ll be patrolling, also. Drive around the side of the barricade, and you can return home.” He tipped his hat at her.She nodded at both men, put her car in gear, and carefully drove around the barricade.“I’m heading home myself. It’s too hot to be outside.” Rick returned to the truck and followed Susan for over a mile.She pulled into her driveway, and Rick kept driving to his own house while he gazed in amazement at the nearby fire damage. Tall burnt trees stood like black silhouettes in a Halloween picture, bleak and ghostly. Many homes were surrounded by black charred lawns that crept too close to their exterior walls. Thank God for all firefighters. The deputy flashed through his mind. And thank God for all law enforcement personnel.
Rick arrived home and parked the vehicle. He opened the truck door and stepped onto the concrete driveway. Lingering smoke remained in the air, similar to extremely low lying clouds. Not a breeze blew, and Rick marveled at the blanket of smoke only a few feet off the ground. A deep cough progressed quickly until he went in the house, where the cough lessened. Inside, everything reeked of the strong smoke smell. Rick shook his head at this discovery. Thank God I still have a house. Wonder what the back yard looks like? A brisk walk through the house, and he opened the back door. Deep in thought, he stared straight ahead when a slight movement against the outside wall caught his attention. Rick quickly turned his head towards the sound.“Daddy.”Rick blinked at his daughter in disbelief. Soot covered her arms, and her hair was in disarray.“Tessa.” Shocked, he stood still.“Oh, Daddy,” she gushed, and embraced him in an instant hug.“How did you get here?”“My boyfriend got me out, and…and…I didn’t know it, but he …he is best friends with that dirty ole’ man, Cotton.”“You don’t need to be involved with thugs. You need to go back to the drug treatment center.”“I’m scared, Daddy.”Rick melted as fast as a piece of chocolate in the heat of summer. And she knows it. He held her close and slowly patted the top of her head while years of pain returned in full force. He fought back tears while his heart ached.“Baby girl, I can’t help you. You have to want to help yourself.”Tessa sobbed and held onto her father.“I have to ask you something, Tessa, listen to me. Were you across the river from me a few days ago?”The crying abruptly stopped, and a meek answer is heard by Rick.“Yes, Daddy.”“What were you doing there?”“It was a meth lab. It exploded.”“You know you have to go back to the center.”Tessa glared at him. “Like this? You want to drop me off at the center like this?” She spread her filthy arms wide apart.“Go wash up, and we are going to talk to a new friend of mine. Then, see about getting you some clothes at Walmart.”Tessa cleaned quickly, and Rick drove her to talk to Deputy Acker, still parked up the road. The boyfriend’s description was given and all other pertinent information. Clothes were bought, fast food was eaten, and arrangements were made for Tessa to return the next day to the drug treatment center a hundred miles away.Both exhausted, Father and daughter settled in for the night. About four o’clock in the morning, Rick awoke to glass shattering from the double windows in the living room.Tessa’s boyfriend broke into the home and demanded Tessa leave with him.Numb with sleep, Rick managed to call 911, and hold a shotgun on the intruder. Deputies arrived and escorted the shouting drug addict out in handcuffs.Rick drove a sullen Tessa back to the center after breakfast. He silently prayed for her and thought about the break-ins of his house and truck. He tried even harder to forgive what a drug addict will do for drugs.Rick couldn’t look at her. She sat rigid and angry. He blinked his watery eyes several times and sighed deeply. What is she, twenty-three years old now?
