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My Five Stages of Revisions

I’m going to start by saying I like revising. It’s one of my favorite steps in writing a novel, as you’ll see from my first stage.  It’s a good thing too, because the last few months I’ve been working solely on revisions, alternating what story I’m working on. My revisions have been based on comments from my editor, my agent, or beta readers, and with each novel I’ve gone through similar stages of liking and disliking the story. I start out positive:
Excitement: This is when I’m waiting to hear back from my editor, agent, a beta reader, or critique partners, because I know once I have feedback I’ll be able to dive back into my novel with a fresh set of eyes. I’m excited to hear what worked and what didn’t work, and I know I’ll have some type of direction that will allow me to tighten the plot and improve the story.
Dread: This happens after I receive my editorial notes or feedback. I read through the comments before I begin revising. There’s usually something that I don’t agree with. Not so much about the main plot, but about the rules to my world. I write paranormal, so there is always a good amount of world building that is needed. Supernatural characters have supernatural abilities, and in their world anything can happen. Before anyone reads my full story, I’ve spent a lot of time developing the characters, what they can and can’t do, how they look, and how they interact with the humans around them. My first thought is a change to what I have written is going to have an overwhelming domino effect on the rest of the novel. It’s at this point I usually walk away from my laptop.
Denial: Which I first recognize as frustration and it happens while I’m away from my computer. It’s when I tell myself there is nothing wrong with the scene as it is written. I already answered the questions, or what happened makes perfect sense and it has to happen the way it’s written. The problem isn’t what I wrote; it’s that the person who read the story just didn’t get it.
Acceptance: Thankfully it doesn’t take me too long to reach this point. I go back and re-read the comment and then the scene to gain an understanding of what didn’t work. Once I have a grasp on that I start to think of ways to change it so the scene does work. Often times the solution is as easy as rewording what’s there or adding missing details. Other times I find I withheld information that needed to be included early on in the book. I come up with a plan of attack, so-to-say.
Relief: I happily enter Stage 5, sleeves rolled up and fingers eagerly pecking away at the keyboard. I like this stage and once I reach it, it’s hard to pull me away from my laptop until the changes are done.
I don’t know about you, but I tend to go through my Five Stages of Revisions multiple times while revising a novel. I really don’t mind, though, because the end result is always a story that I’m proud of and that I can’t wait to share with readers.
What are your Five Stages of Revisions?

Press pause: An IWSG Post

Welcome to my addition of this month's IWSG post. If you're not familiar with this meme,  click here to hop over to Alex Cavanaugh's blog to find out more. I'd like to thank Alex for hosting this wonderful meme. 




Before I get to my post, have you seen Embrace's the new cover? I think my publisher didn't an amazing job on it and I just can't help wanting to show it off. 

Okay, back to IWSG. July is the mid-year mark. Time to press pause and see how I'm doing on the one goal I set for myself back in January: in 2013 I vow to use my insecurities to help me work harder. 
I've been doing pretty good with that. When insecurities set in, I found ways to make them work to my advantage. They say practice makes perfect, and while I won't go as far as to say the key note speech I gave in April was perfect, by practicing it out loud beforehand I did manage to get through it without stumbling. I've bounced ideas of my critique partners, family and friends to help me tackle revisions on my different works-in-progress. And since marketing can be daunting I teamed up with other authors and we're working together to promote each other's books.
Okay, so I did okay the first half of the year, but this is a new month and the beginning of a whole new half. Hold Tight, book two in my Embrace Series, will be released on August 20th and, well, I'm hoping readers like it. I'm hoping readers find it. So how do I take those insecurities and turn them around. I should give the book to my mom. She'll read it and say she loves it. My dad might even read it. Oh, and then I could give it to my sister. Of course, she's swamped with school. Hmm.... 
I'll have to use the next several weeks to plan some fun events and promotion, instead. That will help readers find my book. As far as readers liking it, I'm going to have to trust that with my editor's keen eye for detail and deep understanding of my characters that I've told the best story I can. Oh, and I'll stock up on chocolate. 
Just having an action plan makes me feel a little better. Although, I might need a lot of chocolate, and wine. 



And I've created a street team--a group of readers who help spread the word about my upcoming release. If you're interested in finding out more, click here.



On a side note, I do love spreading the word about good books. If you're an author and your book is family friendly (as a YA author I try to keep the content on my blog PG13) I'd love to spotlight your book. If you're interested, shoot me an email at cheriecolyerwriter (at) gmail (dot) com.

Join Team Madison!

I'm starting a street team and would be honored to have you as a member. Team Madison is a group of readers who are excited about the Embrace Series and want to spread the word about the books.
Members will be added to a Team Madison distribution list where I’ll occasionally ask you to help spread the word about my books via social media: Twitter, Facebook, Tumbler, Pinterest, on your blog, liking comments. The choice is yours. Honest reviews on Amazon, Barnes & Noble, and/or Goodreads aren't necessary, but would be greatly appreciated. And I promise not to spam you!  
I’m very grateful to my readers. You are the reason I write, and Team Madison will be among the first to know about upcoming events. Sign up for any event you’d like to participate in or simply help create a buzz about them on the social media of your choosing.
As a thank you for your support, I’ll be sending active members a swag package featuring the gorgeous cover art from Embrace and Hold Tight, plus Madison and her friends’ awesome hemp bracelet. Anyone national and international may join the team, but due to the cost of postage the swag packet will only be mailed to domestic members.
If you have any questions about Team Madison, please contact me at cheriecolyerwriter (at) gmail (dot) com.

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It's a two for one Cover Reveal: EMBRACE and HOLD TIGHT

I’m absolutely thrilled to be able to share the covers for my young adult romance/thriller Embrace series. I think they’re stunning and I hope you like them too!


As many of you know, in preparation for the release of HOLD TIGHT, book two in the series, EMBRACE received a new look. I hope you like it!
I’d like to thank Omnific Publishing and the designers for doing an amazing job on the covers. A huge thanks goes out to A Tale of Many Reviews for organizing the cover reveal and to all the wonderful bloggers who are participated. I’m touched by everyone’s support!
Want to catch up with Madison and her friends before the release of Hold Tight?  You can purchase EMBRACE for only $2.99: Nook or Kindle. 
Add HOLD TIGHT to your TBR list on GoodReads by clicking here.

To celebrate Embrace's new cover and the upcoming release of Hold Tight
Omnific Publishing is giving away a copy of Embrace. Fill out the form below to enter.

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Interview with Sarah Barthel, author of Mackenzie's Cross

I'm thrilled to have Sarah Barthel, author of Mackenzie's Cross, with me today. Sarah is not only an amazing author, she's a great friend and critique partner and I'm very excited about her debut novel.
Mackenzie's Crossby Sarah Barthel

Synopsis:~SWEET HISTORICAL ROMANCE~Mackenzie’s life has always been one of duty. However, in a land where even the Brotherhood of the Knights are becoming power hungry mongers, how can a young kitchen maid maintain her morals when tempted with all she’s never had? In the end, the truth is even more complicated than Mackenzie had ever imagined. Medieval Historical Fiction, Sweet, Christian, & Inspirational Romance




Isn't the cover beautiful! 

Please help me welcome Sarah to my blog.
Cherie: Tell us about your novel, Mackenzie’s Cross, in your own words.Sarah: Mackenzie’s Cross came about because I kept reading historical novels in which a male character was threatened with a huge change in social station.  I wanted to explore what would happen were a female to find her life turned upside down by something other than marriage.  When I started I didn’t realize it was going to be a murder mystery, but as I wrote the Duke died and the plot shifted. 
Cherie: I enjoy stories that whisked me to another time, and I love that you have a strong female character who has to help solve such a terrible crime. Can you tell us a little about your writing process like? Sarah: Typically, I start with an idea and form it into a really basic plot.  Then, after writing the first draft (which is usually terrible), I start working on characters and molding the rough edges of the story.  I’m a big outliner and find that with each draft I add more chapters and more details.  I know some writers which operate the opposite, but for me, each time I visit my story there is something more to tell.
Cherie: Oh, I agree! I'm always adding to my W.I.P. too. Where did you get the idea for this novel?Sarah: For Mackenzie’s Cross, it started with that initial question, how would a female in the middle ages handle a change in her station.  As I developed Mackenzie’s character, the idea continued to develop.  A lot of the characters you meet were brought in through questions I had in research.  For example, Lady Elizabeth was formed because of a side note I read that psoriasis sufferers were often condemned as Lepers because of the similarities in the rashes. 
Cherie: That is interesting, and it's a bit scary how easily it was to be condemn back then. What was your most difficult chapter to write?Sarah: There is a scene after the Duke dies in which Lady Evelyn comes to speak with Mackenzie.  Because it is so heavy on dialogue it was difficult to make it read authentically.
Cherie: Can you share with us something about Mackenzie that we don’t learn about them from reading the book?Sarah: She is really athletic. I imagine she hikes, runs and could probably give Patrick a run for his money horseback riding.
Cherie: I like her already, and love knowing more about her. So tell us, what are you working on now?Sarah: Currently I’m working on a novel set in 1875 Illinois where a girl pretends to be insane to avoid marriage to her fiancé, whom she knows to be a murderer.  While in the asylum she befriends Mary Todd Lincoln and discovers what is really important in life.Cherie: That sounds intriguing. I can't wait to learn more about it. Now that we know about your book and you as a writer, I have some fun questions for you. Try to answer in five words or less:
Favorite color? Blue
Secret crush? (It can be anyone real or fictional.)  Mr. Darcy from Pride and Prejudice and Gilbert from Anne of Green Gables.
Do you believe in love at first sight? Definitely
Have you ever experienced that head-over-heels, tingly, have-to-get-to-know-someone feeling yourself? Yes, with my husband.
Who are you drawn to the good guy or the bad guy? Drawn to the good guy except in Les Mis.
What’s the first thing you notice about a guy? His eyes. 
Favorite movie or television show? Wizard of Oz and Mrs. Arris Goes to Paris.
Guilty pleasures that get you through the writing/revising process? I put on Les Mis soundtrack and drink ice water.
Favorite place to write? Panera.
Are there any types of books you don’t read? I don’t tend to read science fiction—I try, but usually don’t finish them.
It has been a pleasure to have Sarah here today. You can get Mackenie's Cross today! What are you waiting for? 
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Change is coming: News, First peek at HOLD TIGHT, and a Giveaway

I’ve been hinting to a big change, and I can finally share the news.
Embrace is getting a fresh look with a brand new cover, and I’m geeked for the reveal later this month. I’ve gotten a sneak peek at the new design and I’m beyond thrilled. It’s stunning and mysterious and I love it.
Don’t get me wrong, I like the original cover (on the left). I thought the image of the girl looking at something just out of view reflected the mystery of what Madison Riley discovers in Embrace.

I wrote Embrace to be a standalone novel, so the publisher and I weren’t thinking about a second book or its cover when Embrace’s was designed. But when readers kept asking if there’d be a sequel my creative wheels started to turn and I began work on another book.
I had so much fun being back with Madison and the gang. The stakes are higher this time. In Hold TightMadison unknowingly invites two dangerous yet enticing beings into her life, what she needs now is to figure out which one she can trust and how to get rid of the other before either destroys her and everyone she loves. 
I was delighted when Omnific Publishing picked it up. Then it came time to design the cover and finding the perfect image for book two that fix the story and matched Embrace’s was difficult. So my wonderful marketing associate and I got to talking about other options. The result was a whole new look for book one.
It’s been exciting to see the preliminary designs. A Tale of Many Reviews is hosting the cover reveal for both books on June 26th. I can’t wait to share them with you! Until then I have a first peek at Hold Tight coupled with an excerpt from Embrace plus a chance to win a $10 gift card.

EMBRACE excerpt
 “I’m beginning to realize I’d do whatever it took to keep someone I care about safe—expose what I am, harness my anger, let my darker side take over. That’s one promise I know I can make without regret.”[…]I was about to protest when he then asked, “What about you? Just what are your feelings toward me?” I must have hesitated because he laughed, light and warm, yet there was a bitter edge to it. “I just told you I’d embrace the dark to protect you, and you still can’t open up to me?”
HOLD TIGHT excerpt – exclusive first peek!
A soft swish hum had me glancing around the kitchen again. A cool breeze stirred the curtains and rippled the water in the bowl. I hurried and closed the window, but then a quiet buzz traveled around the kitchen like an angry fly. For a moment, I could have sworn I smelled fresh-cut orchids, but when I inhaled, the air chilled my lungs, causing me to cough. No matter which direction I looked, no one was there.

“Finish it,” a disembodied voice whispered eagerly.
Read EMBRACE today -- Only $2.99 on Kindle or Nook!Amazon  |  Barnes & Noble
I'm so excited about Embrace's new cover and the upcoming release of book two. To celebrate, I'm giving away a $10 gift card. I hope you'll help me spread the word about this giveaway. Good luck!

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Be sure to stop back by for the cover reveal. Follow me on Twitterand/or Facebookso you don’t miss any of the exciting events, giveaways, and upcoming news. 

The Ups and Downs of Revising and Other News

I'd like to thank Alex Cavanaugh for hosting this meme. If you'd like to learn more about it, click here.
The second round of edits on my upcoming novel caused my confidence to yo-yo all over the place. I went from this is good to oh my God this sucks to okay maybe it’s not so bad. The roller coaster of emotion is part of writing, I know that. When a scene is working, I love my story. Change a word here, add a sentence there—easy peasy. But when a scene isn’t quite right doubt sets in. I don’t remember feeling this way when I worked on Embrace, but I probably did. Thanks to my editor’s keen eye for details and suggestions on ways to turn a scene that wasn’t quite hitting its mark into one that flowed nicely, I finished revisions feeling good about the book again. Anyone else feel this way when you revise?

On other news, the Omnilicious Twitter Party last Friday was a huge success and tons of fun. We even trended in the US and a few other countries. Congrats to all the winners of the fun prize packs! And thanks to everyone who popped in and helped to make it a great event!
The cover reveal for HOLD TIGHT will be host by AToMR on June 26th. I’d love for you to join the fun! If you’d like to participate click here and fill out the brief sign-up form.

And last but not least, I have exciting news coming regrading EMBRACE and its cover. More on that next week.

On My Blog: Trina Sotira author of IN HER SKIN

I'm pleased to have Trina Sotira, author of IN HER SKIN here with me today. Trina's not only an amazing author, she's a wonderful friend and critique partner. I had the pleasure of reading parts of this story as Trina wrote it and seeing both this novel and Tirzah grow into their own skin.



In Her Skin
By Trina Sotira

Synopsis:
Tirzah would do anything to cover up her girl body: duct taping her chest, dressing like a guy at the skate park, even changing her name. But two things are holding her back from transitioning into an all-male body: her best friend Heidi and a full-ride soccer scholarship. And when Heidi's family disapproves of Tirzah's transition into Troy, Heidi disappears. 

College instructor and former television journalist Trina Sotira challenges religious, gender, and social boundaries in this fast-paced adventure filled with love, friendship, and self-discovery.



Please help me welcome Trina! 
Cherie: Tell us about your novel, In Her Skin, in your own words. Trina: In Her Skin faced a tough time in the publishing marketplace after mainstream publishers told my former agent the book would see lower sales because it wouldn’t appeal to a broad audience. The prediction is offensive to our young society. Their response can be interpreted as we (young adults and those identifying as forever-young-adults) don’t want to read books about transgendered teens or Muslims. We have few books in the teen market about different cultures—and not enough about LGBT characters. In Her Skin is a coming-of-age story about an everyday teen who happens to be trapped in the wrong skin.  The main character just so happens to be in love with her Muslim best friend. Love is pretty mainstream, isn’t it?  
Cherie: It definitely is! What is your writing process like?  Trina: I cheat on the rest of my life to write, and the reward is pure pleasure. Often times, I write on notepads or in my phone, transferring notes later. I write in my head first; then I finish the story on my laptop.
Cherie: You can always tell when a writer lives in a house by the number of notepads lying around! Where did you get the idea for your novel?Trina: My friend struggled in the wrong skin through junior high and high school. The pain I witnessed and joy I saw once she transitioned to a male had to be captured in writing. Some people still do not understand the struggles transgendered teens and children face daily. This book offers glimpses of the pain as boundaries are pushed.
Cherie: Sounds like a lot of this book comes from the heart. What was your favorite (or most difficult) chapter to write?Trina: After my former agent wanted me to cut Heidi out of the book early on, I suffered through revising the chapter when Troy doesn’t go to Heidi’s house. Originally, he went. Originally, he was not that strong.
Cherie: Can you share with us something about Troy that we don’t learn about him from reading the book?Trina: Deep inside, Troy would still give up everything to be with Heidi.
Cherie: Love can do that to a person. What are you working on now? Trina: I’m finishing an urban middle-grade novel and writing an essay for a women’s anthology on life shifts. I’m always working on new projects for my college students.

 Cherie: Sounds like you're quite busy! Now that we know about your book and you as a writer, I have some fun questions for you. Try to answer in five words or less: 
Who are you drawn to the good guy or the bad guy?   I like the super-intelligent, awkward underdog.
Guilty pleasures that get you through the writing/revising process?  Tubs of chocolate frosting and toothpaste to cover post-binge pimples.
Favorite place to write? Next to my dog Gracey Sprinkles.
Who is your mentor or hero?  Dr. Sean Shesgreen, my pair of wings from NIU. Heroes: Dr. Martin Luther King, Jane Addams, Kate Chopin, and Aphra Behn.
Are there any types of books you don’t read?  I avoid genres that rhyme with loft-corn.

Thanks for being here with me today, Trina!


Purchase In Her Skin today:Amazon | Barnes & Noble | Goodreads
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Twitter Party Scavenger Hunt

Several of the authors from Omnific Publishing with be on Twitter this Friday, May 31st, at 7pm EST, chatting about writing, our books, romance, and giving away copies of our books. There's a lot of great reads to be won. If you're on Twitter, look for hashtag #Omnilicious!
How it works: Follow the links to the Authors blogs and collect the numbered letters for the secret word. As soon as you’ve worked out the word, enter the word and your twitter handle into the form below. Entries are open from the day before the party and close at the end of the party when winners will be announced. My letter:

The rest of the hops:
Carol Oates
Debra Anastasia
Patricia Leever
Amber Belldene
Sarah Glover
Autumn Markus
Lisa Sanchez
Hannah Downing
Jennifer Lane
Jennifer DeLucy
Nicki Elson
Kate Evangelista
Justine Dell
The following e-Book Packs are up for grabs:
Young Adult Pack Reaping Me Softly by Kate EvangelistaEmber by Carol OatesShades of Atlantis by Carol OatesEmbrace by Cherie Colyer
New Adult Pack Streamline by Jennifer LanePoughkeepsie by Debra AnastasiaThree Daves by Nicki ElsonEve of Samhain by Lisa Sanchez
Contemporary Adult Pack All-American Girl by Justine DellRecaptured Dreams by Justine DellCocktails & Dreams by Autumn MarkusPieces of Us by Hannah DowningCat O’ Nine Tails by Patricia LeeverWith Good Behavior by Jennifer Lane
Paranormal Adult Pack Divine Temptation by Nicki ElsonBlood Vine by Amber BelldeneCrushed Seraphim by Debra AnastasiaSeers of Light by Jennifer DeLucyDivinity by Patricia LeeverGrave Refrain: A Ghost/Love Story by Sarah M. Glover


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Get Healthy Blog Hop

Welcome to the Get Healthy Blog Hop! 




First, let me thank the hosts of this hop, Alex J. Cavanaugh, Stephen Tremp, L. Diane Wolfe, Michael Di Gesu, for teaming up and putting together this hop! 

The Objective of this hop is to share with everyone something you've done that affected your health in a positive way. I'm going to share 5 easy tips anyone can do to keep from overeating and packing on unwanted pounds.

1. Eat on a lunch plate instead of a dinner plate. Dinner plates are bigger, and therefore easier to load up with too much of a good thing.

2. Wait 10-15 minutes before going back for seconds. Sometimes it takes our stomachs a little time to tell our brains we're full.

3. Before you super-size your meal, make a fist. Now remember that your stomach is the size of your fist and ask yourself if you really need a super-sized portion.

4. Avoid empty calories, especially at night. Sugary drinks, alcohol, and junk food may help satisfy quick cravings, but those empty calories add up. If you drink or eat before bed, then you aren't burning off those calories. Can't give up the treats? Try cutting back or switching to low calorie beverages and healthy snacks after 6pm.

5.  Get your family involved in eating right. It's much easy to make healthy choices when you aren't doing it alone.

Before I go, I'd like to share with you a recipe for what my husband and I like to call Carnival Stuffed Peppers because they are not only healthy but colorful, too.


Carnival Stuffed Peppers:Ingredients:  1 lb. ground turkey  1 Tbs olive oil (or coconut oil)   1 tsp Spikes seasoning   1 Tbs oregano  1 Tbs basil  1 Tbs minced onion  ½ tsp crushed red pepper (optional)  1 cup fresh spinach (rinsed)
  3 bell peppers (I like to use 1-green, 1-red, and 1-yellow)  Season salt
  1 cup cooked brown rice
Cooking Directions:
-  Cook brown rice according to directions (start this first since brown rice takes longer to cook)
-  Cut bell peppers in half and then slice off ¼-inch from each pepper-  Dice the ¼-inch slices of bell pepper and set aside-  Place halves in a casserole dish and sprinkle with season salt-  Set aside
-  Brownie meat with small amount of olive oil, Spikes seasoning, salt, oregano, basil, minced onion, and crushed red pepper-  Add in the diced bell pepper-  Mix in cooked brown rice-  Stir in spinach and cook until spinach starts to become soft-  Pour mixture over bell pepper halves. 
Bake covered for 30 minutes on 400. And enjoy!

If you're near Twitter this Friday, 7pm EDT, look for hashtag #Omnilicious. You'll find several authors from Omnific chatting about all sorts of things and giving away books.


Be sure to follow the links below for more tips on being healthy!