David Jones's Blog, page 1238

Honestly, your poetry has neither essence nor good rhythm. It feels like you've tried so hard to make it full of meaning and life that there is nothing but words left. Your style is interesting but there is no sense of what you are.

Honestly, I feel like crying. I’ll change everything.

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From my second novel, The Travelling Circus of Lacrimosa - Out...

From my second novel, The Travelling Circus of Lacrimosa - Out Now!!

Just reading your poem and admiring it's honest simplicity. In my work, I am always striving to cut out everything that is unessential. Feel free to check out my page and poetry sometime. I think you might like it.

Thanks for reading :) I try and do that in some of my poems - sometimes I really do feel like its good to tear through everything and go straight to the purity of the poem, the essence of the idea. I’ll check yours out too :)

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From my first novel, Lilith’s Tears - Out Now!!

From my first novel, Lilith’s Tears - Out Now!!

transylvanianmisanthropy:By ~ Jonathan ~

transylvanianmisanthropy:

By ~ Jonathan ~

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