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July 19, 2013
Cover Scoop (Reblogged)
Today I wrote a post for The Lucky 13s blog about my cover and part of the design process. I wanted to share the insider's view with all my readers here too, so I hope you don't mind if I reblog it!
Of all the things a debut author can be nervous about during the path to publication, I have to say that my cover was one of the biggest for me. I thought about it all the time. Would I love it? Would I hate it? Would it make sense to my book? I was so worried about it that when I finally got the e-mail from my editor with the cover, it took me almost two hours to open!
But luckily, I LOVED it. Although, it wasn’t what I was expecting at all.
Here's my cover story...
About six months before I saw my cover, I received a document full of questions that would help the art department with the creation of my cover:
CHARACTERS: Please give a description (hair color, eye color, height, age, sex, and race) of your two main characters. If your characters are not human, please be as descriptive as possible. Feel free to attach images for reference.
NAME: Kate FranklinSEX: FemaleAGE: 15HEIGHT: 5’4WEIGHT: 125HAIR COLOR: Brown hair (long enough to pull into a ponytail)EYE COLOR: BrownRACE: WhiteATTITUDE: She’s going through some tough times for a lot of the story…she misses her mom and feels alone during most of the story because her Dad can’t/won’t connect with her and her brother has enlisted into the Army (which scares her). She wants to find a connection to people, but has a hard time doing that because she doesn’t want to compromise herself. SIMILAR TO: Ellen Page, Willa Holland, Molly Ephraim, Ashley RickardsCLOTHING: Current with the trends, but not too trendy…jeans (maybe skinny jeans), ballet flats. She also wears a navy blue uniform skirt with white blouse.OUTSTANDING FEATURES: She’s pretty average looking; I don’t think she has a feature that stands out. She’s pretty, but not beautiful.
NAME: Jack BlaneSEX: MaleAGE: 16HEIGHT: 6’0WEIGHT: Tall and thinHAIR COLOR: BlondEYE COLOR: Blue/GreenRACE: WhiteATTITUDE: A bit cocky because he’s a star athlete and feels he gets privileges, but he’s also a good guy…he respects Kate and her father (the coach)SIMILAR TO: Chord Overstreet, Chad Michael MurrayCLOTHING: I picture him in typical preppy type clothes (Hollister, American Eagle), I reference him wearing jeans with Converse sneakers, hoodies. At school he would wear navy blue or khaki dress pants, white dress shirt and tie as part of his uniform. His basketball uniform is maroon and canary yellow.OUTSTANDING FEATURES: His eyes…they are a greenish-blue…kind of like looking at earth from space
BUILDINGS, LANDSCAPES, OBJECTS, AND ITEMS IMPORTANT TO THE STORY:*Swimming pool at night (Kate swims laps in the dark, her mom also swam at night when she got sick)*Basketball court (the main character does not play, her dad coaches and she watches her boyfriend play)*Beacon Prep School (old brick school)
COLORS:*Maroon and canary yellow (the basketball team’s colors)*Kate wears a navy blue uniform skirt if at school
ISSUES:*The main character fights off a sex assault by a player on the basketball team and wants to speak up about it, but her dad silences her (he’s the coach of the time), she must decide whether to say something or not.*The main character has lost her mom and feels like her dad has shut himself down and won’t talk to her and her brother. She feels like she’s alone with no one to talk to.*The main character is pulled into the world of privilege and perks given to the basketball players at her school. The players are basically treated like gods and can do no wrong (they get away with everything).
SCENES: *Swimming pool at night (Kate swims laps in the dark, her mom also swam at night when she got sick)*Basketball court (the main character does not play, her dad coaches and she watches her boyfriend play)
ADDITIONAL INFORMATION:When I envision the cover I see either a silhouette of Kate swimming in a swimming pool at night (perhaps from above, so the whole cover is the pool and her silhouette is on the bottom) or Kate floating on her back in a pool at night maybe with her hair spread out around her. Again, I see the whole cover the pool and a small part the main character of Kate. I think this would evoke the idea of solitude or feeling alone, especially at night.
The other image that comes to mind is an empty basketball court and either Kate sitting alone in her school uniform on the edge of a bleacher or lying on the floor of the court (again, the whole court is most of the cover). This would also evoke that idea/mode of being alone or solitude. She doesn’t play basketball, but she’s surrounded by it.
Something similar to the cover for Carrie Arcos' Out of Reach...

After submitting all of this information to my art department, this is the cover that they came up with:

Not exactly like the cover that I suggest, huh!?!
If you look at my cover compared to the information I gave my art department, you would probably think it’s way off from what I was suggesting. But the thing is, I think they got it before I did. Throughout my comments, I kept referencing words like “solitude,” “alone,” and “scared.” That’s exactly what the cover expresses. I also love how the colors are those of the school and that the canary is in a basketball court. The background looks like a school lunch bag and the vivid blue of the tear suggests hope. I couldn’t have asked for a better cover, and I love the way the artist translated the emotions from the book.
What do you think? Would you pick it up off the shelf? Click here to read more about Canary on my website.
Published on July 19, 2013 08:45
July 13, 2013
Celebrate CANARY's Launch!
CANARY is flying into the world soon, and I'd LOVE for you to help me celebrate!
I'm having two launch parties...a physical one and virtual one.
The physical one is July 31 at 6:30 at Fairview Park Public Library. There will be cupcakes, prizes, and book to purchase and get signed (or you can bring your own copy if you've already bought one).
I can't tell you how excited I am to have my launch at the library. The Fairview library is my childhood library. I begged my mom to take me almost every day (and when I was old enough I rode my bike), the librarians all knew my name, I did all their programs, and even worked there as a paige when I was in high school!
Here's the Facebook Invite about the event:
https://www.facebook.com/events/136360959903797/
The virtual launch will be online and include prizes, books secrets, and virtual cupcakes! You can sign up for the virtual launch here:
https://www.facebook.com/events/216327438521538/
I hope you can join me for one (or both of the events)! I'm so excited for CANARY to finally go out into the world!
Published on July 13, 2013 07:45
July 11, 2013
Sprout Head
On the first day at the Kenyon Review writer's workshop, one of our teachers presented each of us with a tiny head. He told us to hold on to them while he gave his talk and try to figure out what they were.
It turns out that they are seed bombs. People throw these all over urban cities and flowers sprout from them. The idea is to add beauty to places that may otherwise just be run-down. What a great idea!
He told us they were a metaphor for the week to come and all the ideas that would sprout from our heads. I planted my "seed face" when I came home, so we'll see if great thoughts continue to grow from it!

Published on July 11, 2013 07:44
July 10, 2013
Kenyon in Picture
I think each summer I go to the Kenyon Review's writer workshops, it gets harder and harder to leave. This was my first summer attending their program specifically designed for teachers, and I loved every minute of it. I came home with some great ideas for my own classroom and filled a whole legal pad with new writing that I did. I'm already looking forward to going back again next summer!
Here are some pictures from my week at Kenyon...

I'm waiting for everyone else in our classroom with my best friend coffee!


This is the room where our reading was held.



He tweeted me his room number, but I couldn't get in to take a picture of the door
(which is probably just as well...that's border-line stalker!).
Published on July 10, 2013 07:39
June 30, 2013
Oh Kenyon College, How I Love Thee
If you've followed my blog from the start, you know that one of my favorite places in the world to be is Kenyon College, where I participate in the Kenyon Review Writers Workshop.
I'm back for my fourth summer and this year I'm in a workshop specifically designed for teachers (who love to write!). I've only been here for a day so far, but I'm loving that I'm back on campus. There's just something magical about writing on this school (hmmm....maybe it's the fact that this is where John Green went to college!).
This year I'm staying in brand new town houses that students haven't even lived in yet (so glad I'm not in the dorms!), and I got a good laugh over the fact that I brought the same comforter I used over a decade ago in my college dorm!

I'm hoping to get a lot of good writing done in the dorm room!
You can read about my past adventures at Kenyon here, here, here, and (this is the post where John Green tweets me back!).
And if you want to see more of the beautiful campus, the movie Liberal Arts was filmed here (while I was at the conference two years ago!).
Published on June 30, 2013 13:13
June 28, 2013
June 2013
Oh, how I've neglected this poor blog! I'm so sorry for those of you who follow me and check for posts. I'm making it a goal this July to get back to blogging more often (uhm...I used to post every single day!).
How is your summer going?
Mine has been really busy because I'm preparing for this thing called my book launch!!! It's almost here, and I'm so excited you will all finally get to read CANARY!
That's not the only thing I've been up to, though. Here's my summer so far in pictures...











Published on June 28, 2013 13:01
June 14, 2013
CANARY book trailer
Icey Books has helped me to reveal my book trailer for CANARY today, and I'm so excited to share it with you!
Make sure to go to their site, so you can read about how the concept for the video came about and enter to win an annotated ARC of CANARY (which means it's full of my scribblings, comments, and doodles!). Hot diggity dog!
Published on June 14, 2013 06:00
June 13, 2013
CANARY Got Kirkused
Kirkus Reviews posted their review of CANARY on Friday. I've always felt like this was one of the major rites of passage to writing your first book...getting "Kirkused."
While you have to have a subscription to read what they wrote, my marketing department gave me a sneak peek. I was pretty happy with my review (especially since I've read some pretty harsh reviews from them).
You'll be able to read it when it's made public two weeks before CANARY's release, but in the meantime, here's what they made visible on the site to everyone...
The first line of the review:
In an engrossing, carefully unfolding drama, sophomore Kate Franklin adjusts to a new school, a powerful set of friends and a family that is falling apart.
The summary quote:
"Overall, a sophisticated, evocative portrait of a teen girl finding her place among peers and family. (Fiction. 14-18)"

Published on June 13, 2013 07:06
June 5, 2013
CANARY Trailer Reveal
Have you ever seen a book trailer? They're one of my favorite ways to hook a reader to a book. I start my school year by showing some of my favorites and it never fails that many of my students will pick a book from one of the trailers I showed them.
Well, guess what??? CANARY has a trailer now! It's awesome and emotional and I love it to pieces!
I can't wait to share it with you!
I thought it would be fun to get a bunch of people involved in the reveal (which will be Friday, June 14th). You can share the trailer on your blog, Twitter, Facebook page, or any other social media that you can think of.
As a thank you, I'll randomly pick one person who signed up and shared my trailer and give you one of the very last ARCs that I have (I only have three left!).
If you want to be a part of the reveal, please fill out the form below, and I'll send you all the details (including a sneak peek of the trailer on Thursday, June 13th). Loading...
Well, guess what??? CANARY has a trailer now! It's awesome and emotional and I love it to pieces!
I can't wait to share it with you!
I thought it would be fun to get a bunch of people involved in the reveal (which will be Friday, June 14th). You can share the trailer on your blog, Twitter, Facebook page, or any other social media that you can think of.
As a thank you, I'll randomly pick one person who signed up and shared my trailer and give you one of the very last ARCs that I have (I only have three left!).
If you want to be a part of the reveal, please fill out the form below, and I'll send you all the details (including a sneak peek of the trailer on Thursday, June 13th). Loading...
Published on June 05, 2013 15:19
May 24, 2013
John Green - Paper Towns
I love this print with a quite from John Green's Paper Towns (I wish could buy it!):

I found it here!
Published on May 24, 2013 20:10