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Guest Post from Per Holbo

I’m pleased to welcome Per Holbo to my blog today. I hope you enjoy his blog about rewriting classic fairy stories. Welcome, Per! -S

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Not as easy as you might think

Have you ever read a re-writing? You know, those books where the Author hasn´t invented the story, but just sort of ’stole’ it from history, folklore or mythology? If you have, you may have wondered, what kind of madness the said author was struck by to go about such an endeavor. Come on! Being a writer is about inventing new stories, isn´t it? Man, you must have been so ’writer´s blocked’ your eyebrows are bleeding from banging your head into the wall, if you´re sliding so low as to write something already written.

The writer you may so bluntly be dissing (or rather ’I am dissing’) could very well be me, because this is exactly what I´ve done. My latest book, ”Asgard Saga – Odin the Creator,” is the first part of a series of stories from Norse Mythology and thus belongs in the ill perceived category of ’stolen goods being tampered with.’

I didn´t do it to get around inventing a new story, but I must admit, that I thought it to be like a walk in the park. After all, I didn´t have to worry about the plot, the characters or even trying to get the whole story to be internally consistent. Boy, was I wrong!

The thought of re-writing these stories came to me as I was watching an episode of Star Gate SG-1. The Star Gate series´ are among my favorite TV-shows and I love the idea of bringing myths into a Science Fiction story. And I did enjoy watching this episode. However, one thing really annoyed me: they kept using the term ’The Asgards’ about that advanced race, who had been friends with ’The Ancients’ and for every time they used that term, my eyes twitched. Why? Well, because Asgard is the place, where the Aseir gods live, so ’The Asgards’ is like calling people living in the states ’The USAs’ or using the term ’Englands’ about the English. So, I decided to bring the Norse Mythology to life for an English speaking audience.

And I really believed it to be easy. All I had to do was read the stories and write a narrative in English. How hard could it be? Well, as it turned out, very hard indeed! I faced several challenges:

Challenge #1: Flat character description

See, in most mythology and folklore, the characters are flat, meaning that they are described in a very simple way. Mainly by not describing them at all, but only telling about their actions. Like: ’Thor threw his hammer and all enemies were vanquished.’ No reason to go into Thor´s thoughts and considerations. Just going right for the action packed pee wee and you´re done…

But this doesn´t work in this day and age. To make the story come to life, you need to blow some spirit into your characters and make them come to life. Dead characters equals a dead story, lively characters is a basic requirement to have a lively story.

Challenge #2: Complexity

The second challenge was that Norse Mythology is much more complicated than I remembered. The creational myth alone is like an Italian instruction manual translated to German and from German to English. So many details mixed together in the strangest ways. And as I wasn´t sure, where the entire story would lead in the end, I had quite a few gray cells in my brain sent on over time to decide which of these details were too important to leave out and which ones could be described in a more simple manner and which of them were so important, that I needed to elaborate them, so it would make sense to the general public.

Challenge #3: Cultural differences

This challenge is perhaps the most difficult to work with. First of all, there are differences between contemporary Danish culture and the culture of the Viking nation. This means that some of the issues in the Norse Myths are either hidden or just eludes our understanding, although they are mentioned in the way that the characters react to certain events in the stories. Let me give you an example. In the ’Speech of the tall one’ supposedly attributed Odin, the speaker folds out wise words for living well. In one of the paragraphs, Odin says this:

Taciturn and sedate

should the prince’s child

and battle ready be known;

cheerful, happy

every man should go

to the day he dies

It wasn´t till I presented this to Ed Drury, who has been a tremendous help to me revising and editing the book, that I realized the potential misunderstanding of the last sentence. ’To’ could be understood as ’until’ but hits is probably not the correct understanding of the phrase. Much rather ’to’ should be understood as ’towards’ and this is not apparent, not even in the original Old Nordic text. But with a basic understanding of Viking culture, it´s clear as crystal that the latter understanding is the correct one.

How did I meet these challenges?

The obvious next step in this guest is to answer the above question, which is rather simple. But as always, the simplest of questions calls for complicated answers and this is by no means an exception.

The challenges mentioned are intertwined and though I cannot answer for one of them without answering for the other two, I will try to provide you with an answer for one challenge at a time. I know, you won´t have any problem understanding my answers, if I didn´t do it this way, but I need to have structure, so there you go… let´s begin:

Behind door #1: Meeting the challenge of flat character description

If you are one of those kinds of authors who like to keep updated on good writing techniques (and of course you are, otherwise you wouldn´t have read this far) you may have stumbled upon this simple rule: show it, don´t tell it.

What this rule means is rather simple: instead of telling your reader that your character is, say rude, you might want to provide your reader with an example of your character´s rudeness. In my short story “The mysterious disappearance of McGrath” I did just that. Instead of describing McGrath as rude, I told the following story:

“ He had moved out of town a couple of years ago, because his landlord had raised his rent $10. “Ten bucks more!” he had yelled when the landlord presented him with the news, “Every single month I have to give you ten more? Are you insane? You think money grows on trees? ´Cause if they do, you better go get me some of them trees!” He slammed the door shut with such a bang that all the neighbors stuck their heads out to see what was going on.

His landlord stood there by the door for a few seconds building up his nerve, which granted McGrath just enough time to get himself seated in his well used armchair before he heard the reluctant tapping on solid wood. He almost thrust the chair through the wall in anger.

“What!”

“Hmmf…” the frightened man said loosening his tie and gasped, “I…well…it got stuck.” McGrath didn’t re-enter his home, but instead almost flew past his landlord while complaining loudly about all the vultures the world was populated with. ”

The same technique I used in “Asgard Saga,” but this was a challenge in itself. I wanted to keep a balance between telling the story in a lively and modern way, but still keeping the story true to the original myths. In any other kind of story I would just have invented a scene or two to describe my characters´ personalities, but in this case, I decided that to keep true to the myths, I needed to be sure that the scenes in the book were either from the myths themselves or at least could´ve happened as I described them. To do this, only one option was useful: I had to dig down in the myths to get a more accurate description of the characters´ personalities. After doing that, I knew, which of the scenes I had to invent as a ‘might-have-happened-this-way” and which ones I could just tell the way they were already available in the myths.

In Odin’s case, this proved rather difficult, because Odin is not very thoroughly described in the myths (though Odin is the main Aseir, he wasn´t worshipped much by the common Viking. Thor had a more popular appeal, while Odin was more of a ‘posh’ figure to be worshipped by Chieftains and other ‘top of the pop’ people)

The solution was to make Odin the mysterious laid-back kind of type. He doesn´t make much of himself in “Asgard Saga” but is instead the silent leader, who only takes the stand, when it´s expected of him. And when he does, he does in such a manner, that there is no doubt of his leadership.

Behind door #2: Narrowing down complexity

As I started writing, I was taken by surprise at the complexity in the Norse Mythology. Being a Dane and having a Norse heritage, I have been told these myths at school and I really thought I knew more than enough about the mythology to just write the stories. But the complexity of the whole thing overwhelmed me. Especially the creational myth was a bugger. I remembered from my classes at school (and the extensive personal reading when I was a nerdy kid with ugly glasses) that the creational myth told of the world being created, when Odin and his brothers killed the primal Yetten, Ymir, and used his dead body to create everything, but what I´d missed was the prequel to that story. Embrace yourself for complication: take a deep, deep breath with your mouth… Yes, that´s it… Then breathe out through your nose… Good, you´re doing just fine… Ready? Then read on:

It all began with the cold freeze from Niflheim meeting the heat from Muspelheim in the empty space of Ginnungagab making blocks of ice that started melting and from the dripping water, Ymir emerged. Audhumla, the primal cow, also came from these ice blocks and from its udder, Ymir could eat. When he fell asleep after dinner, his feet had a son with each other and from his armpits two other offspring emerged. Then Bure sort of leaped out of him and he had a son called Borr (with no female present, mind you!) and from then on it really started being complicated! (yes, that´s what I wrote: if you think it was complicated before this… ? phew…)

Luckily this is one of my greatest strengths: to present the important from the complex. So the only passable way was to narrow down. What was important to the story? What was unimportant? What was important, but not detail calling? In other words: What was need-to-have and what was nice-to-have? The first was ‘in’ and the latter ‘out.’ Hopefully my readers think I did a good job with this…

Behind door #3: Connecting cultures

Among these three challenges, this is by far the most difficult to overcome. First of all, because most cultural truth is implicit in such a way that we don´t notice it ourselves. For instance, belching after a meal is widely considered as being rude, but in some countries, like China, it´s a message saying ‘I really enjoy this meal’ and thus is considered a compliment to the chef. In the case of “Asgard Saga” there are at least two potential conflicts: one is between Scandinavian and American/English cultures and the other is between the Viking age and modern day. How to discover potential misunderstandings is almost impossible, unless you have at least an above average understand of both cultures involved. In the case of “Asgard Saga” I have such a level of understanding on both Scandinavian vs. English cultures and Viking age vs. modern day cultures, but when it comes to American culture, there is an extra layer of challenge, as American culture in itself is a merged culture of various different old European cultures fused in the melting pot of American history. The only way to meet this challenge is to ask Americans, how they perceive the formulations, I´ve used. So this was exactly what I did. I shamelessly asked Americans about their perception of the words and phrases I used in the book. Using connections on Twitter, Facebook and Google+ and using my American friends in real life as well as a Canadian or two I made an effort to get an insight to this challenge and to edit. Did I succeed? Well, I certainly hope so, but only time, sales and review will tell.

And now I´ve come to the very end of this already way too long post. If you´ve made it this far, congratulations! If you can find any leftover energy after this rather exhausting read, please feel free to comment underneath. I´ll be looking forward to answer questions or elaborate (though I very much doubt you would wish for elaboration after this reading marathon…)

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An Interview with Catherine O’Brien!

This was so much fun to do. Book Faery Reviews is hosting an interview with Catherine O’Brien, the detective in A Grand Murder. Stop by and find out what Catherine has to say for herself.

Click HERE to Join the fun at Book Faery Reviews!

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An Interview with Catherine O'Brien!

This was so much fun to do. Book Faery Reviews is hosting an interview with Catherine O'Brien, the detective in A Grand Murder. Stop by and find out what Catherine has to say for herself.

Click HERE to Join the fun at Book Faery Reviews!

Filed under: books, writing Tagged: A Grand Murder, Book Faery Reviews, Catherine O'Brien, Interview

How to Get the Most From an Online Grammar Checker

If you have ever used a word processing software before, you have probably used a spell checker, and you have probably been disappointed. Spell checkers have a limited list of words, which can make your spell checker unreliable. Spell checkers also don't check for incorrect grammar, but there are plenty of grammar checkers available online to help you make sure that your articles and projects make grammatical sense.

Since there are so many different grammar checkers available online, you may not know which ones to use or which ones are the most reliable. If you pick the wrong grammar checker, you could be putting the competency and correctness of your work in unreliable hands, and you could end up submitting work that is still full of mistakes.

If you want to enlist the help of a grammar checker, you need to make sure that it works well and provides you with great results. Below are a few tips to help you get the most out of your online grammar checker.

1. Test them out.

Before deciding which grammar checker to use, test out a few options. Write a sentence that you know is wrong, and have each grammar checker correct it. If it doesn't catch your blatant mistakes, it does not have the accuracy you need to rely on. After you have tested out a few options, you will know which ones worked better than others, and you will have a better understanding of which ones you can trust.

2. Read reviews.

Customer reviews can be found online. Make sure to check and see what others are saying about the software. If an online grammar checker has awful reviews, you will know to stay away from using it. If it has great reviews, it will be one of the better grammar checkers available, and you will know that you can trust it with your work.

3. Listen to its suggestions.

A great grammar checker will give you an explanation as to why something is wrong. When it offers you a suggestion as to why it is flagging something as wrong, actually pay attention to why. This way, you can learn from your mistakes and refrain from making them again in the future.

4. Use all of its tools.

Some grammar checkers come with other tools. Along with checking for grammar, they may also check for spelling errors and even recognize when something is plagiarized. Make sure to check out all of the possible tools and services available, and actually use them. This can be the difference that changes your work from good to great.

Instead of being stuck using a limited spell checker, use an online grammar checker to proofread your work. It will give you better feedback and catch more mistakes, and it will usually provide you with more information and better results. Though a grammar checker will do more for you than a spell checker, it is still important that you read through your work too. Sometimes even the best grammar checkers cannot trump the detail of the human eye.

Mark Weatherford is a high school teacher and published author who often uses grammar checkers and recommends them to all his associates. In his spare time he likes to work with his students and help them edit and finalize their college application essays.

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Important Update on the Second Catherine O'Brien Book!

So, when I wrote A Grand Murder I didn't anticipate how many readers would want to know what happened to Catherine when she went on vacation!  I have a confession to make, the second book actually takes place much later, which has been a huge disappointment to people who have emailed me about the book.

So, the publishers and I have agreed to delay the release of book 2 Murder is A Family Affair. Instead, I am working furiously to complete a novella about what happens when Catherine hits the road with Gavin for their up north adventures (I was taking my time on book three. now I'm in rush mode again).  We will release the novella in eBook only, and it will be available for FREE.  It's my gift to everyone who shouted for it — loudly.

I'm sorry, I didn't understand how curious you readers would be about Catherine and her hubby! I appreciate all the feedback you sent to me on the topic, and let me say, MESSAGE RECEIVED!

I feel so blessed that you all cared enough to be such a pain about it. I'm just kidding. I love that you guys were so insistent. It makes me giddy. You guys rock!

THANK YOU!!!

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A Very Special Stop on the Blog Tour!

Today's stop on the blog hop is very special to me because What the Cat Read agreed to review the Audio book version of A Grand Murder. In addition, What the Cat Read, agreed to let me write a guest post explaining why I lobbied so hard for an audio release for A Grand Murder.

Drop by and visit What the Cat Read!

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Another Hop Stop!

I am so happy to be hosted by Me and Reading today. Stop by  to read Inga's review and get entered to win a copy of A Grand Murder.

BIG thanks to Inga at Me and Reading for being part of the A Grand Murder tour!

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Just Keep Hopping! Just Keep Hopping!

Today's stop on the hop is at The Reader's Suite!

I am so grateful to The Reader's Suite for allowing me to be part of their blog today with a review and a GIVEAWAY! So if you haven't purchased a copy of A Grand Murder yet you have a chance to score one for the best price ever – FREE! So hop on over to The Reader's Suite and find out how to enter to win.

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Suffering from Genre Incest?

So many books have had a profound impact on readers.  These books become instant classic because of the ability to connect with their reader but for writers so many books that will never be mentioned on any best seller or favorite's books of all time lists are the ones that left a lasting impression.

For me I remember the first time I read a book with an ambiguous ending.  The author hadn't wrapped up the story line in a neat little happy ending; instead, he'd left the outcome to the reader's imagination.

My initial reaction was you can't do that.  Which eventually morphed into, "You can do that?"

I thought about those characters for a long time after reading that book.  I speculated on their fate and I had others read the book so we could discuss the ending.

These kinds of books are learning moments for writers.  I adore reading a book with one of these moments.

Even a poorly written book can give a writer a learning moment.  I remember one such book that irritated me so badly I wanted to throw it across the room.  Shortly after I identified on of the things I considered irritating in my own work.  I eliminated it immediately.  I'm so grateful to the author of the bad book for shining light on my own problem.

Traditional thinking says read everything you can in your genre but most of my revelations have come when I read outside my genre.  Genre incest is one of the reasons genres get stale for so many readers (IMHO).  Like a painter with only one color, there is nothing new or innovative.  If you are a one genre reader, I would ask you to broaden your pallet and see what you can discover.

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Hopping Over to Practical Frugality!

So cool that Practical Frugality agreed to review A Grand Murder for the blog hop. If you get a chance to drop by Practical Frugality and visit with us awhile please do!

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