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Anarchist Underground deleted scene - Chapter 9 Bryn's POV
DELETED SCENE!
When I first wrote Anarchist Underground, I intended to write the entire story from dual POVs, featuring chapters from both Aela and Bryn’s perspectives. However, as I progressed I realised that Aela’s voice alone made for a much more compelling story. I felt that Bryn’s perspective didn’t leave enough to the imagination. Seeing him only through Aela's eyes made for a much better mystery.
Unfortunately for me (but maybe fortunately for you), I realised this only after I’d already written a LOT of content from Bryn’s perspective. It’s fun, so I’m releasing it now. If you haven’t read Underground in its entirety, I recommend doing that first, as this content contains some spoilers.
This scene takes place just before and during Chapter Nine, as I originally wrote the bath scene from Bryn's perspective. Without further ado, enjoy a first glimpse inside Bryn’s head!
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Bryn counted ten seconds after knocking, then pushed open the door to Bowie’s room. It collided with a string of items strewn across the carpet. Typical. The kid’s room was always a tip. Bryn closed the door behind himself and picked up the spring-loaded dagger contraption lying discarded at his feet, examining it with a frown. Bowie only survived the fight in the Devil’s Tongue tonight because of this thing. Bryn hadn’t protected him.
READ THE FULL SCENE:
https://www.nicolerowles.com/deleted-...
When I first wrote Anarchist Underground, I intended to write the entire story from dual POVs, featuring chapters from both Aela and Bryn’s perspectives. However, as I progressed I realised that Aela’s voice alone made for a much more compelling story. I felt that Bryn’s perspective didn’t leave enough to the imagination. Seeing him only through Aela's eyes made for a much better mystery.
Unfortunately for me (but maybe fortunately for you), I realised this only after I’d already written a LOT of content from Bryn’s perspective. It’s fun, so I’m releasing it now. If you haven’t read Underground in its entirety, I recommend doing that first, as this content contains some spoilers.
This scene takes place just before and during Chapter Nine, as I originally wrote the bath scene from Bryn's perspective. Without further ado, enjoy a first glimpse inside Bryn’s head!
_
Bryn counted ten seconds after knocking, then pushed open the door to Bowie’s room. It collided with a string of items strewn across the carpet. Typical. The kid’s room was always a tip. Bryn closed the door behind himself and picked up the spring-loaded dagger contraption lying discarded at his feet, examining it with a frown. Bowie only survived the fight in the Devil’s Tongue tonight because of this thing. Bryn hadn’t protected him.
READ THE FULL SCENE:
https://www.nicolerowles.com/deleted-...
