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September 8, 2014
William Control - Hate Culture - A Review
To all who are reading this,
After a mention in my August Favourites, I decided it was high time to review more music, and there was no better way to kick off than with the first William Control album ever released - Hate Culture.
William Control is the alter ego of Aiden frontman and vocalist, Wil Francis. I followed Aiden from their early days, first being introduced to them when I read a Kerrang! article about their second studio album, Nightmare Anatomy. In 2008, Wil stepped away from Aiden, and began to make music which was darker, edgier and more sexual than anything that Aiden had ever done. With a passion for the city of London, in the United Kingdom, Hate Culture is a concept album and follows the tale of a man named William Control, as he experiences his last day on Earth before committing suicide. A charismatic, non nonsense, Gothic artist, William Control takes us on a journey like no other.
The following tracks make up Hate Culture:
1. Prologue
2. Beautiful Loser
3. Strangers
4. Hate Culture
5. Tranquilize
6. Razor's Edge
7. We Are Already Here
8. Cemetery
9. Don't Cry For Me
10. Damned
11. The Whipping Haus
12. London Town
The first and only single from the album is 'Beautiful Loser'. It is a lyrically dark song, with a synthetic, almost pop, rock undertone. Kicking off the album in true style, it showcases his vocal style and sets the premise of the concept, especially with lyrics such as, 'This is my last night on Earth, My fucking hell'. He states that he is falling deeper into the despair, and that he 'will never love again', as he begins his 'suicide mission to die'. The video released with the single is equally dark, with almost hypnotic touches - it as if we have taken drugs as the camera loses focus and regains with a practised ease to make the viewer uncomfortable. Holding a different ideal of beauty we see a variety of women in all shapes and sizes, and William himself does not seem to care about the implications smoking will have on his health. When has he ever cared though? You can check out the song here.
As a lifelong fan of Aiden, the William Control material is edgier, raw, and definitely more adult. In the Prologue, which consists of an almost retelling of the opening lines of the Johnny Depp film, The Libertine (2004), William proves who he is, not only as a person, but as an artist. It is seemingly symbolic that the lines were taken from a film about an Earl who drank and debauched his way into the history books. And the unforgettable line, "I am William Control, and I do not want you to like me..." He clearly is unafraid of people's opinions, and sets us for for honesty. Check out the quote here.
I love the album - it's something I can listen to again and again. Whilst my absolute firm favourite on the album is 'Strangers' with its erotic and powerful haunting lyrics, ('We fall, We fall in love, With strangers in the night'), there are some many songs that stand out, with William's different vocal styles. Having just missed out on his most recent UK tour, dubbed 'The Punishment Tour', where he was supported by Bad Pollyanna and AshestoAngels, I will wait. I've seen him once before, and it was a life changing experience. I can wait a little longer.
You can find the album in all good record stores, iTunes and Amazon, as well as other notable music retailers. Prices may vary.
Yours, with eternal ink,
Zoe
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Currently reading: Under Zenith by Shannen Crane Camp

William Control is the alter ego of Aiden frontman and vocalist, Wil Francis. I followed Aiden from their early days, first being introduced to them when I read a Kerrang! article about their second studio album, Nightmare Anatomy. In 2008, Wil stepped away from Aiden, and began to make music which was darker, edgier and more sexual than anything that Aiden had ever done. With a passion for the city of London, in the United Kingdom, Hate Culture is a concept album and follows the tale of a man named William Control, as he experiences his last day on Earth before committing suicide. A charismatic, non nonsense, Gothic artist, William Control takes us on a journey like no other.
The following tracks make up Hate Culture:

1. Prologue
2. Beautiful Loser
3. Strangers
4. Hate Culture
5. Tranquilize
6. Razor's Edge
7. We Are Already Here
8. Cemetery
9. Don't Cry For Me
10. Damned
11. The Whipping Haus
12. London Town
The first and only single from the album is 'Beautiful Loser'. It is a lyrically dark song, with a synthetic, almost pop, rock undertone. Kicking off the album in true style, it showcases his vocal style and sets the premise of the concept, especially with lyrics such as, 'This is my last night on Earth, My fucking hell'. He states that he is falling deeper into the despair, and that he 'will never love again', as he begins his 'suicide mission to die'. The video released with the single is equally dark, with almost hypnotic touches - it as if we have taken drugs as the camera loses focus and regains with a practised ease to make the viewer uncomfortable. Holding a different ideal of beauty we see a variety of women in all shapes and sizes, and William himself does not seem to care about the implications smoking will have on his health. When has he ever cared though? You can check out the song here.
As a lifelong fan of Aiden, the William Control material is edgier, raw, and definitely more adult. In the Prologue, which consists of an almost retelling of the opening lines of the Johnny Depp film, The Libertine (2004), William proves who he is, not only as a person, but as an artist. It is seemingly symbolic that the lines were taken from a film about an Earl who drank and debauched his way into the history books. And the unforgettable line, "I am William Control, and I do not want you to like me..." He clearly is unafraid of people's opinions, and sets us for for honesty. Check out the quote here.

You can find the album in all good record stores, iTunes and Amazon, as well as other notable music retailers. Prices may vary.
Yours, with eternal ink,
Zoe
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Currently reading: Under Zenith by Shannen Crane Camp
Published on September 08, 2014 15:56
August 31, 2014
August Favourites
To all who are reading this,
After seeing multiple bloggers and YouTubers posting their monthly favourites, I thought to myself, "Hey, why don't I give it a go?" The aim of these videos and blogs that are posted is to showcase favourite things from that particular month, often inciting others to buy them. Quite often it's beauty products, but if you know me that well, then you will know I'm not that kind of person!
So my posts are going to be quite varied, but I will aim for 5 things a month - which should be pretty easy for me. She says with a hopeful expression... I am hoping that if people enjoy this, I'm going to keep this going - and for those wondering, yes, reviews and book news will still be coming to the blog! It's finding the time to post whilst still writing different projects!
So without further ado, let's get this show on the road!
1. Geisha Wig's - Red Sparkle
This is a gorgeous wig, it really is! I was sent this wig as an apology gift from the company after an issue with the original order. I deliberated and finally chose this so I could see myself as a red head. After finalising the new order, it arrived fast and in good condition. It is perfect for cosplay. I am aiming to have a Hipster Ariel from Disney's The Little Mermaid with this.
The wig can be styled such as curled and straightened, as long as the tools used do not exceed 180 degrees. It came pre-curled, which was great. I love curls, but I can't do it right. This wig can be adjusted to fit your head, but I found that I didn't need to. It also comes with a simple wig cap, to keep your own pesky hair from interfering. Now I'm only 5ft1, so the curls fall down to the small of my back! They measure 80cms, according to the specifications. The curls are a little heavy for general day-to-day wear, but for a convention this will be great.
Visit: www.geishawigs.bigcartel.com for more information. Normally priced at £22.00.
2. Marvel's Guardians of the Galaxy
As you can see from my tickets, I went to see on 6th August. It was a late showing and the tickets at the cinema these days can be pricey - £7.20 for an adult after 6pm! Unfortunately, due to my vision, I have trouble viewing 3D, so we opted for the 2D version. I was highly excited for this film, having been following the news about it since the casting was called.
It is a fun Marvel film, and it's what we have come to expect from them and the studios. Yet I wasn't prepared for my sides to ache from laughter - who knew Vin Diesel could be so wonderful as a talking tree? "I AM GROOT." Oh yes, you are. I love Rocket as well - they're a match made in heaven. I do want to write a proper review of it soon, so I can't say too much. With a power driven plot, excellent cast, and a simply awesome soundtrack, I am very excited that there will be another Guardians film coming out!
And yes, that is me with pink shellac nails...
3. William Control's Babylon Tour
William Control has to be my favourite artist - ever. I have followed William since his days with Aiden, and it's sad to see them coming to an end. However, his darker, more sexual, more violent side of William Control is something I cannot resist. Powerful lyrics and haunting melodies, and the occasional female orgasming in the background, he is a treat for the ears and eyes. I've seen him live in Sheffield a few years back and met him on numerous occasions, but this DVD compromises some of his new material and the old in a burlesque, horror show of rock, goth and alternative fashion. And yes, I am aware how ironic that is when my DVD is pictured on my Hello Kitty quilt. There would only be 500 hard copies available, so I had to snap one up straight away.
With seventeen tracks on the DVD and five guest appearances, including Ash Costello of New Years Day and Andy Biersack of Black Veil Brides, it is one hell of a show. Filmed at Bar Sinister on his last American tour, the DVD was shipped just mere days after William started the UK's Punishment Tour, which I was unable to go to. The DVD arrived in good condition and works a treat on my player. I also have a digital copy in case anything happens, and a signed photograph from the man himself. Now I have his other DVD too, and one day I will back to back review them, and his music, but for now let's just say that, "I'm only human sometimes."
For more information visit www.williamcontrol.com. Pre-order price $30.00 - included: DVD, digital copy and signed photograph.
4. Geisha Wig's - Birds of Paradise
This is so cute and bright! This wig was my original order, which had been delayed with shipping from oversees. I had not expected this to arrive after speaking with the owner of Geisha Wigs, and put my cosplay plan's on hold. This wig will be for my Princess UniKitty - Business Costume from The Lego Movie. I was presently surprised when I arrived home from work, saw the purple wrapped parcel and found this. I wore it straight away.
There is a reason it is called Bird's of Paradise - it compromises of red, yellow, green and blue shades, and is perfect for Lolita fashion and cosplay. The web does not make any mention of styling with this wig, but I wouldn't need to. It comes in curls which can be hung over your shoulder in a cutesy way - I will have to figure out how to get my cat ears and unicorn horn in safely! This wig can be adjusted to fit your head as per Red Sparkle, and this was already hooked onto a smaller adjustment, so it needed changing. Once this was done though, it fitted lovely. It also comes with a simple wig cap, to keep your own pesky hair from interfering. The length of the wig is 60cms, according to the specifications. Light, colourful and not too long, it's a great addition to my cosplay wig collection!
Visit: www.geishawigs.bigcartel.com for more information. Normally priced at £20.00.
5. Sunnydale High School Shirt
I adore Buffy the Vampire Slayer. Spike was my childhood crush, and the show is perhaps the reason why I have always been attracted to vampires, and bad boy characters in fiction. Joss Wheedon is a fantastic writer, and he makes the characters so believable, as they go though so many changes. Willow is a perfect example, and she's one of my favourite characters anyway! Always has been, always will be. Now, I've been rewatching the show, and one night I was browsing Amazon, when I found this shirt.
It is almost a replica of the one worn in the gym classes by Buffy and company in numerous episodes ranging from the first to third season. The Sunnydale High School colours are traditionally burgundy and yellow, so I could show my fictional school spirit and still be loyal to the fandom. In a sense, I could cosplay a Sunnydale High School student! I bought a size L (Large) as I like room in my shirts, and this was a men's fit anyway. It arrived two days after I placed the order, which greatly surprised me. It fits great - enough room to move, looks great with either leggings or jeans, and completes the fangirl in me!
Visit www.amazon.co.uk for more information. Normally priced at £10.99.
Yours, with eternal ink,
Zoe
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Currently reading: Divergent by Veronica Roth
After seeing multiple bloggers and YouTubers posting their monthly favourites, I thought to myself, "Hey, why don't I give it a go?" The aim of these videos and blogs that are posted is to showcase favourite things from that particular month, often inciting others to buy them. Quite often it's beauty products, but if you know me that well, then you will know I'm not that kind of person!
So my posts are going to be quite varied, but I will aim for 5 things a month - which should be pretty easy for me. She says with a hopeful expression... I am hoping that if people enjoy this, I'm going to keep this going - and for those wondering, yes, reviews and book news will still be coming to the blog! It's finding the time to post whilst still writing different projects!
So without further ado, let's get this show on the road!

This is a gorgeous wig, it really is! I was sent this wig as an apology gift from the company after an issue with the original order. I deliberated and finally chose this so I could see myself as a red head. After finalising the new order, it arrived fast and in good condition. It is perfect for cosplay. I am aiming to have a Hipster Ariel from Disney's The Little Mermaid with this.
The wig can be styled such as curled and straightened, as long as the tools used do not exceed 180 degrees. It came pre-curled, which was great. I love curls, but I can't do it right. This wig can be adjusted to fit your head, but I found that I didn't need to. It also comes with a simple wig cap, to keep your own pesky hair from interfering. Now I'm only 5ft1, so the curls fall down to the small of my back! They measure 80cms, according to the specifications. The curls are a little heavy for general day-to-day wear, but for a convention this will be great.
Visit: www.geishawigs.bigcartel.com for more information. Normally priced at £22.00.
2. Marvel's Guardians of the Galaxy

It is a fun Marvel film, and it's what we have come to expect from them and the studios. Yet I wasn't prepared for my sides to ache from laughter - who knew Vin Diesel could be so wonderful as a talking tree? "I AM GROOT." Oh yes, you are. I love Rocket as well - they're a match made in heaven. I do want to write a proper review of it soon, so I can't say too much. With a power driven plot, excellent cast, and a simply awesome soundtrack, I am very excited that there will be another Guardians film coming out!
And yes, that is me with pink shellac nails...
3. William Control's Babylon Tour

With seventeen tracks on the DVD and five guest appearances, including Ash Costello of New Years Day and Andy Biersack of Black Veil Brides, it is one hell of a show. Filmed at Bar Sinister on his last American tour, the DVD was shipped just mere days after William started the UK's Punishment Tour, which I was unable to go to. The DVD arrived in good condition and works a treat on my player. I also have a digital copy in case anything happens, and a signed photograph from the man himself. Now I have his other DVD too, and one day I will back to back review them, and his music, but for now let's just say that, "I'm only human sometimes."
For more information visit www.williamcontrol.com. Pre-order price $30.00 - included: DVD, digital copy and signed photograph.
4. Geisha Wig's - Birds of Paradise

There is a reason it is called Bird's of Paradise - it compromises of red, yellow, green and blue shades, and is perfect for Lolita fashion and cosplay. The web does not make any mention of styling with this wig, but I wouldn't need to. It comes in curls which can be hung over your shoulder in a cutesy way - I will have to figure out how to get my cat ears and unicorn horn in safely! This wig can be adjusted to fit your head as per Red Sparkle, and this was already hooked onto a smaller adjustment, so it needed changing. Once this was done though, it fitted lovely. It also comes with a simple wig cap, to keep your own pesky hair from interfering. The length of the wig is 60cms, according to the specifications. Light, colourful and not too long, it's a great addition to my cosplay wig collection!
Visit: www.geishawigs.bigcartel.com for more information. Normally priced at £20.00.
5. Sunnydale High School Shirt

It is almost a replica of the one worn in the gym classes by Buffy and company in numerous episodes ranging from the first to third season. The Sunnydale High School colours are traditionally burgundy and yellow, so I could show my fictional school spirit and still be loyal to the fandom. In a sense, I could cosplay a Sunnydale High School student! I bought a size L (Large) as I like room in my shirts, and this was a men's fit anyway. It arrived two days after I placed the order, which greatly surprised me. It fits great - enough room to move, looks great with either leggings or jeans, and completes the fangirl in me!
Visit www.amazon.co.uk for more information. Normally priced at £10.99.
Yours, with eternal ink,
Zoe
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Currently reading: Divergent by Veronica Roth
Published on August 31, 2014 14:12
August 23, 2014
Bloody Sexy Anthology
To all who are reading this,
Today is a blog to celebrate the latest Hot Ink anthology release - Bloody Sexy: The Dark Side of Desire. A collection of stories that meld paranormal and erotica in a delicious mix. For those who like spice amongst their vanilla, want to feel wonderful body ripples as the shivers of horror run along your spine. These are those sorts of stories.
My short story, 'Hungry Like the Wolf' is featured in it too, and whilst it isn't my first anthology piece of fiction which has been collated and edited by Carmilla Voiez, (see Broken Mirrors, Fractured Minds ), it was something I knew I just had to be a part of. This sort of fiction was what made me want to be a writer in the first place.
The anthology is going to delight readers around the globe, I know it will. Whilst I cannot confirm any release links yet, you'll be sure to find it on Amazon. If you are a fan of Hot Ink Press on Facebook, you can guarantee that will there will multiple posts about the book, and you will be able to buy it as soon as it's out.
What is the Bloody Sexy anthology though? That's what I hear you ask. Well...
An anthology of erotic horror, for those who enjoy a little fear with their fun.
Featuring:- Back Draft by XXX ZOMBIEBOY XXX- Restless Spirits by M. Birds- Sex Magic by Carmilla Voiez- Fight of Flight by Glen W. Hunter- Predator and Prey by Nina Stevens- The Last Dance by Lily Eyre- The Queen of Hearts by Charlotte Ondac- In The Dark by Nina Stevens- Like Mushrooms by XXX ZOMBIEBOY XXX- Cup Cake Cat by Dagmar Travner- Beneath the Moon by Carmilla Voiez- Hungry Like the Wolf by Zoe Adams- Brining Me Alive by Angel Edenburn- Hamilton Tales by Victor George Matak- Hitched by Mike Casto- For the Lust by Deborah Noel- Whispers by Nina Stevens- For a Yueji's Smile by Sergio Palumbo- The Fallen Ones by Nicola Jayne Taylor- Bird Feed by M Jet- Zofia's Secret by Catrina Horsfield- Blood Drenched Eyes by Pamela Osmond- Tonight by Angel Edenburn- Golden Moments by James Park
Writers of horror and erotica have come together for your eyes only. Take a trip to the shadows beyond the rainbow where well find vampires, and demons, and murders, oh my! Coming to get you on 29th of August.
Yours, with eternal ink,
Zoe
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Currently reading: Sugar Coated by Shannen Crane Camp
Today is a blog to celebrate the latest Hot Ink anthology release - Bloody Sexy: The Dark Side of Desire. A collection of stories that meld paranormal and erotica in a delicious mix. For those who like spice amongst their vanilla, want to feel wonderful body ripples as the shivers of horror run along your spine. These are those sorts of stories.
My short story, 'Hungry Like the Wolf' is featured in it too, and whilst it isn't my first anthology piece of fiction which has been collated and edited by Carmilla Voiez, (see Broken Mirrors, Fractured Minds ), it was something I knew I just had to be a part of. This sort of fiction was what made me want to be a writer in the first place.
The anthology is going to delight readers around the globe, I know it will. Whilst I cannot confirm any release links yet, you'll be sure to find it on Amazon. If you are a fan of Hot Ink Press on Facebook, you can guarantee that will there will multiple posts about the book, and you will be able to buy it as soon as it's out.
What is the Bloody Sexy anthology though? That's what I hear you ask. Well...

Featuring:- Back Draft by XXX ZOMBIEBOY XXX- Restless Spirits by M. Birds- Sex Magic by Carmilla Voiez- Fight of Flight by Glen W. Hunter- Predator and Prey by Nina Stevens- The Last Dance by Lily Eyre- The Queen of Hearts by Charlotte Ondac- In The Dark by Nina Stevens- Like Mushrooms by XXX ZOMBIEBOY XXX- Cup Cake Cat by Dagmar Travner- Beneath the Moon by Carmilla Voiez- Hungry Like the Wolf by Zoe Adams- Brining Me Alive by Angel Edenburn- Hamilton Tales by Victor George Matak- Hitched by Mike Casto- For the Lust by Deborah Noel- Whispers by Nina Stevens- For a Yueji's Smile by Sergio Palumbo- The Fallen Ones by Nicola Jayne Taylor- Bird Feed by M Jet- Zofia's Secret by Catrina Horsfield- Blood Drenched Eyes by Pamela Osmond- Tonight by Angel Edenburn- Golden Moments by James Park
Writers of horror and erotica have come together for your eyes only. Take a trip to the shadows beyond the rainbow where well find vampires, and demons, and murders, oh my! Coming to get you on 29th of August.
Yours, with eternal ink,
Zoe
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Currently reading: Sugar Coated by Shannen Crane Camp
Published on August 23, 2014 08:29
August 1, 2014
Finding the Muse - Cover Reveal!
To all who are reading this,
Not only is this the first blog of August, but we are also on the official blog cover launch for Finding the Muse, which is my third erotic short for Hot Ink Press. I'm so excited about this book, and wrote it in December in between waitress shifts at a local Greek restaurant. We're keeping the event open after the cover launch for the big, "Oh my God, we're live on Amazon" moment, but fret not, I'll post here on it's release on the 8th August this month. Next week guys!
So, here's the moment we've all been waiting for. I present to you my cover, created by the talented Rue Volley!
Blurb:
Veronica 'Ronnie' Hancock is a mystery novelist. Going under a male pseudonym, she spends her days alone, writing her books and advertising them on social media. When she gets a friend request from her old English tutor, James Brooklyn, Veronica is startled, curious and aroused, all at the same time.
During a date at his art exhibit, Veronica is captivated by a powerful painting. Little does she know who it really is, and the motives for James getting back in touch with her.
Books. Art. Creativity knows no bounds.
Coming to a Kindle near you on August 8th.
Please feel free to comment on this post, I'd love to hear your thoughts!
Yours, with eternal ink,
Zoe
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Currently reading: Darkness Betrayed by Christine Hughes
Not only is this the first blog of August, but we are also on the official blog cover launch for Finding the Muse, which is my third erotic short for Hot Ink Press. I'm so excited about this book, and wrote it in December in between waitress shifts at a local Greek restaurant. We're keeping the event open after the cover launch for the big, "Oh my God, we're live on Amazon" moment, but fret not, I'll post here on it's release on the 8th August this month. Next week guys!
So, here's the moment we've all been waiting for. I present to you my cover, created by the talented Rue Volley!

Blurb:
Veronica 'Ronnie' Hancock is a mystery novelist. Going under a male pseudonym, she spends her days alone, writing her books and advertising them on social media. When she gets a friend request from her old English tutor, James Brooklyn, Veronica is startled, curious and aroused, all at the same time.
During a date at his art exhibit, Veronica is captivated by a powerful painting. Little does she know who it really is, and the motives for James getting back in touch with her.
Books. Art. Creativity knows no bounds.
Coming to a Kindle near you on August 8th.
Please feel free to comment on this post, I'd love to hear your thoughts!
Yours, with eternal ink,
Zoe
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Currently reading: Darkness Betrayed by Christine Hughes
Published on August 01, 2014 10:12
July 25, 2014
American Horror Story: Asylum - A Review
To all who are reading this,
This evening I present the second part of the American Horror Story review. Episodes that question whether you have a stable and clear mind, and if you have faith, albeit Christian or some other religion, whether you can continue believing in it or not.
AHS: Asylum (2012) is the second series of the horror franchise, drawing this time on the theme of sanity.
Many actors from the first season (Murder House) which I reviewed here, came back as they had such an enjoyable experience and gained so much from working on the show. The reoccurring actors are Jessica Lange, Evan Peters, Sarah Paulson, Frances Conroy, Lily Rabe, Dylan McDermott and Zachary Quinto.
It brought in the audience once more and when others encouraged others to join them in viewing, the viewer numbers were even higher for the thirteen episodes.
I received the first and second series in a collectors edition from my partner for Christmas 2013.
Taking place in 2012, we meet newly-weds Leo (Adam Levine) and Teresa (Jenna Dewan-Tatum) as they explore haunted sites on their honeymoon, making love in each location. As they enter a new building, they and the audience explore Briarcliff Manor Sanitarium. Once a tuberculosis ward, it was turned into a mental institution, run by the Church, and became home of serial killer, "Bloody Face".
We leave the present, and spend most of the series in varying degrees of the past - namely 1964, and the stories that the characters hold the key to.
In 1964, Kit Walker (Evan Peters) a gas station worker experiences unexplained noises, bright white lights and the disappearance of his black wife, Alama (Britne Oldford). Arrested for Alma's murder, and the murder of several other skinned women, Kit is hauled into Briarcliff, pending judgement on his sanity to stand trial. He tells his story of extra-terrestrials, and finds himself among the inmates, including nymphomanic Shelley (Chloe Sevigny) and accused murderess, Grace (Lizzie Brochere).
As Kit enters the asylum, we meet Sister Jude (Jessica Lange), the authoritarian and sadistic administrator. She disbelieves Kit's tale, constantly telling the inmates about having faith. Sister Jude is struggling with demons of her own: lusting for Monsignor Timothy Howard (Joseph Fiennes) and carrying the guilt that she was perhaps responsible for a drink driving accident, and performing as a nightclub act.
Sister Jude pushes for treatments of her patients, even though she distrusts physician and scientist Dr. Arthur Arden (James Cromwell), and often makes up nicknames for the patients. She also bullies Sister Mary-Eunice (Lily Rabe), who suffers from demon possession.
One of these characters that gets a nickname is Lana Winters (Sarah Paulson). "Miss Lana-Banana" is a gutsy journalist, intent on exposing Briarcliff and what goes on behind its walls. She is unjustly institutionalised for being gay, and seeks help to either be cured or get out of the asylum from therapist, Dr Oliver Thresden (Zachary Quinto).
Slowly the characters story lines entwine and create a build up of medical angst and a faith off.
The episodes of the series are:
- Welcome to Briarcliff
- Tricks and Treats
- Nor'easter
- I Am Anne Frank (Part 1)
- I Am Anne Frank (Part 2)
- The Origins of Monstrosity
- Dark Cousin
- Unholy Night
- The Coat Hanger
- The Name Game
- Spilt Milk
- Continuum
- Madness Ends
Differing from Murder House, the story constantly pushes on as we see the characters, learn more about them, but all the while, new patients are introduced and sometimes never seen again. "Anne Frank" doesn't count, as she is a pushing point for other characters.
An example of never seen again characters would be in 'The Origins of Monstrosity', where a child patient is left at Briarcliff, despite being told there were no facilities for children. The child is evil it is plain to see. There is a claim that a "bearded man with a brown jacket" killed her friend, and when she is later set into the world once more, she gives the same lie when her family are found dead.
The underlying theme of sanity comes into play with Lange's character as she experiences humiliation that she has inflicted upon others and begins to see the Angel of Death (Frances Conroy) and becomes lucid in seemingly old age. It is a shocking truth that the conditions that are shown in 1964 did in fact happen - we can try and brush it under the rug, but in some places of the world, people suffer the same persecution and mental health facilities. People do kill - some may be convicted, others walking free. Some with disabilities are bullied and accused as they are easy targets. Some people have otherworldly experiences. It is incredibly accurate and hits home for many viewers.
The series can be pretty slow moving, and I had reached 'Unholy Nights' before feeling a little listless. Maybe it was because it was Christmas themed, I don't know. I changed series for a while, watching something else, then I went back to Asylum and binge watched until I felt satisfied with the tale. 'The Name Game' was a pleasant surprise!
It is difficult to chose a favourite episode as they inter-lap, but my favourite character interactions are Paulson's and Quinto's. They work so well together, and pull off great moments. It's what we expect from a doctor, patient relationship, and goes deeper still. As usual, Quinto throws his all into the scenes. He suits the character extremely well, and is the perfect addition to the cast. I was quite disappointed that he wouldn't return for the third season. Paulson is a believable character, a heroine, if you like, in her determination to uncover the truth about Briarcliff and the goings on that happen within its walls.
I'm trying so hard not to spoil the series for you, readers. I will leave you to watch it and make up your own mind. As twisted as the show is, if you are concerned for your mental health, then be warned. It does give you the feeling that things aren't what they should be.
AHS: Coven is the third series and once I have the DVD and have seen all of that, I'll be giving it a review! So watch out, and if you see very very very bright lights, hear strange unnatural noises and things start breaking the laws of gravity around you, then it's just extra-terrestrials. Say hi to Alma for me.
Yours, with eternal ink,
Zoe
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Currently reading: The Red Sun Rises: Fire and Ash by Victoria Kinniard
This evening I present the second part of the American Horror Story review. Episodes that question whether you have a stable and clear mind, and if you have faith, albeit Christian or some other religion, whether you can continue believing in it or not.
AHS: Asylum (2012) is the second series of the horror franchise, drawing this time on the theme of sanity.
Many actors from the first season (Murder House) which I reviewed here, came back as they had such an enjoyable experience and gained so much from working on the show. The reoccurring actors are Jessica Lange, Evan Peters, Sarah Paulson, Frances Conroy, Lily Rabe, Dylan McDermott and Zachary Quinto.
It brought in the audience once more and when others encouraged others to join them in viewing, the viewer numbers were even higher for the thirteen episodes.
I received the first and second series in a collectors edition from my partner for Christmas 2013.

We leave the present, and spend most of the series in varying degrees of the past - namely 1964, and the stories that the characters hold the key to.
In 1964, Kit Walker (Evan Peters) a gas station worker experiences unexplained noises, bright white lights and the disappearance of his black wife, Alama (Britne Oldford). Arrested for Alma's murder, and the murder of several other skinned women, Kit is hauled into Briarcliff, pending judgement on his sanity to stand trial. He tells his story of extra-terrestrials, and finds himself among the inmates, including nymphomanic Shelley (Chloe Sevigny) and accused murderess, Grace (Lizzie Brochere).
As Kit enters the asylum, we meet Sister Jude (Jessica Lange), the authoritarian and sadistic administrator. She disbelieves Kit's tale, constantly telling the inmates about having faith. Sister Jude is struggling with demons of her own: lusting for Monsignor Timothy Howard (Joseph Fiennes) and carrying the guilt that she was perhaps responsible for a drink driving accident, and performing as a nightclub act.
Sister Jude pushes for treatments of her patients, even though she distrusts physician and scientist Dr. Arthur Arden (James Cromwell), and often makes up nicknames for the patients. She also bullies Sister Mary-Eunice (Lily Rabe), who suffers from demon possession.
One of these characters that gets a nickname is Lana Winters (Sarah Paulson). "Miss Lana-Banana" is a gutsy journalist, intent on exposing Briarcliff and what goes on behind its walls. She is unjustly institutionalised for being gay, and seeks help to either be cured or get out of the asylum from therapist, Dr Oliver Thresden (Zachary Quinto).
Slowly the characters story lines entwine and create a build up of medical angst and a faith off.
The episodes of the series are:
- Welcome to Briarcliff
- Tricks and Treats
- Nor'easter
- I Am Anne Frank (Part 1)
- I Am Anne Frank (Part 2)
- The Origins of Monstrosity
- Dark Cousin
- Unholy Night
- The Coat Hanger
- The Name Game
- Spilt Milk
- Continuum
- Madness Ends
Differing from Murder House, the story constantly pushes on as we see the characters, learn more about them, but all the while, new patients are introduced and sometimes never seen again. "Anne Frank" doesn't count, as she is a pushing point for other characters.
An example of never seen again characters would be in 'The Origins of Monstrosity', where a child patient is left at Briarcliff, despite being told there were no facilities for children. The child is evil it is plain to see. There is a claim that a "bearded man with a brown jacket" killed her friend, and when she is later set into the world once more, she gives the same lie when her family are found dead.
The underlying theme of sanity comes into play with Lange's character as she experiences humiliation that she has inflicted upon others and begins to see the Angel of Death (Frances Conroy) and becomes lucid in seemingly old age. It is a shocking truth that the conditions that are shown in 1964 did in fact happen - we can try and brush it under the rug, but in some places of the world, people suffer the same persecution and mental health facilities. People do kill - some may be convicted, others walking free. Some with disabilities are bullied and accused as they are easy targets. Some people have otherworldly experiences. It is incredibly accurate and hits home for many viewers.
The series can be pretty slow moving, and I had reached 'Unholy Nights' before feeling a little listless. Maybe it was because it was Christmas themed, I don't know. I changed series for a while, watching something else, then I went back to Asylum and binge watched until I felt satisfied with the tale. 'The Name Game' was a pleasant surprise!
It is difficult to chose a favourite episode as they inter-lap, but my favourite character interactions are Paulson's and Quinto's. They work so well together, and pull off great moments. It's what we expect from a doctor, patient relationship, and goes deeper still. As usual, Quinto throws his all into the scenes. He suits the character extremely well, and is the perfect addition to the cast. I was quite disappointed that he wouldn't return for the third season. Paulson is a believable character, a heroine, if you like, in her determination to uncover the truth about Briarcliff and the goings on that happen within its walls.
I'm trying so hard not to spoil the series for you, readers. I will leave you to watch it and make up your own mind. As twisted as the show is, if you are concerned for your mental health, then be warned. It does give you the feeling that things aren't what they should be.
AHS: Coven is the third series and once I have the DVD and have seen all of that, I'll be giving it a review! So watch out, and if you see very very very bright lights, hear strange unnatural noises and things start breaking the laws of gravity around you, then it's just extra-terrestrials. Say hi to Alma for me.
Yours, with eternal ink,
Zoe
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Currently reading: The Red Sun Rises: Fire and Ash by Victoria Kinniard
Published on July 25, 2014 14:04
Dark Light 4 Anthology
To all who are reading this,
Today is a blog to celebrate the latest Crushing Hearts and Black Butterfly anthology release - Dark Light 4. A collection of stories about things that go bump in the night. These stories are ready to send shivers down your spine and have you reaching for medicine to help you sleep at night. My short story, 'A Salem Witch' is featured in it too, and whilst it isn't my first Crushing Hearts and Black Butterfly submission, it was the third time lucky being featured in the best selling Dark Light series.
'I Believe in Mary Worth', a retelling of the Bloody Mary urban legend was featured in Dark Light 2, whilst 'Fallen Angel', a tribute to my love of music was featured in Dark Light 3.
This anthology is already proving popular and has ranked in categories since it's release on 16th July. You can find it on Amazon - click this SMARTURL and you will be taken to your designated Amazon site for purchase.
What is the Dark Light 4 anthology though? That's what I hear you ask. Well...
If you're looking for stories of "happily ever after", continue onwards. Warm and fuzzy tales of love won't lie within these pages. These dark accounts incur greed, anger, hostility, murder, revenge, and creatures that go bump in the night. Be forewarned - there will be blood, and you may need to check under your bed before going to sleep. Darkness awaits.
Feauturng:
-The Maybe Man by K.C. Finn
- Sasha Brook by Shebat Legion
- Deep Below by J.R. Roper
- Sinner by Barbie Shannon
- Mind Fuck by Nina Stevens
- When The Music Dies by Penelope Anne Bartotto
- The Asylum by Shannon Eckrich
- Perdition by Mariana Thorn
- An Eve to Foget by Leah D.W.
- A Night with the Outside Inn by Partrick Tumblety
- Broken Photo by S.J. Davis
- A Salem Witch by Zoe Adams
- Always Beneath by Paul Flewitt
- Staum the Source by Andrea Staum
- Nothing to Fear by Jackie McMahon
- The Beginning by Sabina Bundgaard
- Fall from Grace by Nina Stevens
- Second Chances by Khelsey Jackson
- Professional Courtesy by Debbie Christina
- End in Fire by M Jet
- Fairy Hunter by Deborah Dalton
- Operation Werewolf by B. David Spicer
- What Must be Done by Reven Archer Black
- The Architect by F.A. Carillo
- Southern Cross by Shelly Schulz
- A Sip of Water by Palumbo Sergio
- The Wicked End by Monique Diplock
Will you need someone to hold your hand whilst you read this tales? Will you take up the cushion and hide behind your Kindle? Will you survive another round of edited tales by Sarah Jayne Carr?
Time will tell.
Yours, with eternal ink,
Zoe
---
Currently reading: The Red Sun Rises: Fire and Ash by Victoria Kinniard
Today is a blog to celebrate the latest Crushing Hearts and Black Butterfly anthology release - Dark Light 4. A collection of stories about things that go bump in the night. These stories are ready to send shivers down your spine and have you reaching for medicine to help you sleep at night. My short story, 'A Salem Witch' is featured in it too, and whilst it isn't my first Crushing Hearts and Black Butterfly submission, it was the third time lucky being featured in the best selling Dark Light series.
'I Believe in Mary Worth', a retelling of the Bloody Mary urban legend was featured in Dark Light 2, whilst 'Fallen Angel', a tribute to my love of music was featured in Dark Light 3.
This anthology is already proving popular and has ranked in categories since it's release on 16th July. You can find it on Amazon - click this SMARTURL and you will be taken to your designated Amazon site for purchase.
What is the Dark Light 4 anthology though? That's what I hear you ask. Well...

If you're looking for stories of "happily ever after", continue onwards. Warm and fuzzy tales of love won't lie within these pages. These dark accounts incur greed, anger, hostility, murder, revenge, and creatures that go bump in the night. Be forewarned - there will be blood, and you may need to check under your bed before going to sleep. Darkness awaits.
Feauturng:
-The Maybe Man by K.C. Finn
- Sasha Brook by Shebat Legion
- Deep Below by J.R. Roper
- Sinner by Barbie Shannon
- Mind Fuck by Nina Stevens
- When The Music Dies by Penelope Anne Bartotto
- The Asylum by Shannon Eckrich
- Perdition by Mariana Thorn
- An Eve to Foget by Leah D.W.
- A Night with the Outside Inn by Partrick Tumblety
- Broken Photo by S.J. Davis
- A Salem Witch by Zoe Adams
- Always Beneath by Paul Flewitt
- Staum the Source by Andrea Staum
- Nothing to Fear by Jackie McMahon
- The Beginning by Sabina Bundgaard
- Fall from Grace by Nina Stevens
- Second Chances by Khelsey Jackson
- Professional Courtesy by Debbie Christina
- End in Fire by M Jet
- Fairy Hunter by Deborah Dalton
- Operation Werewolf by B. David Spicer
- What Must be Done by Reven Archer Black
- The Architect by F.A. Carillo
- Southern Cross by Shelly Schulz
- A Sip of Water by Palumbo Sergio
- The Wicked End by Monique Diplock
Will you need someone to hold your hand whilst you read this tales? Will you take up the cushion and hide behind your Kindle? Will you survive another round of edited tales by Sarah Jayne Carr?
Time will tell.
Yours, with eternal ink,
Zoe
---
Currently reading: The Red Sun Rises: Fire and Ash by Victoria Kinniard
Published on July 25, 2014 10:27
June 24, 2014
Writing Challenge - Day 24
To all who are reading this,
We are less than seven days away from finishing this madcap journey of fiction, but it won't deter me! Last night, I wrote TWO posts, and then a chapter of my latest WIP, which will be the second book in a YA trilogy!
More of that later - on with the fiction!
Yours, with eternal ink,
Zoe
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JUNE PROMPTS YOU TO... WRITING CHALLENGEDAY 24. - TOURIST

The old train station had become a tourist trap. For hundreds of people, all year around, they would be escorted on tours, shown the battered engine sheds, walked alongside the rusted tracks, and have their photographs taken next to the engines in various states of disrepair. Their smiles would be plastered on - happy memories to show family and friends back home. None of them saw the old conductor beside them.
David Rates had been a first-rate conductor in his time. Over the years, he earned the title of 'Employee of the Month' several times over. He had shining eyes, an honest smile, a cheerful disposition. He had been working on the railway since he was a boy of ten, and by the time he was forty-nine, he had gained the trust of workers and loyal customers alike.
David Rates had a dark side that nobody knew about. When things went missing from the luggage racks, passengers belongings and even the staff rooms, he was never suspected. Nobody would have thought that the smartly dressed man would have done anything of the sort.
A week or so later, newspaper articles would show the victim of theft, but theft wasn't what the reporters focused upon. Murder was the hot topic. There would be no consistency though, apart from they had all been passengers who had left and returned on the Rickland Express.
David Rates had been clumsy. He had been caught, and he had also made the decision to take his old life. They had found his body hanging in the Rickland Express engine shed.
The stories say that David Rates haunts the station, looking after it as it fell into disrepair. As much as he loved killing, he loved his trains more so.
COPYRIGHT - ZOE ADAMS (2014)
Currently reading: A Feast For Crows by George R. R. Martin
We are less than seven days away from finishing this madcap journey of fiction, but it won't deter me! Last night, I wrote TWO posts, and then a chapter of my latest WIP, which will be the second book in a YA trilogy!
More of that later - on with the fiction!
Yours, with eternal ink,
Zoe
---
JUNE PROMPTS YOU TO... WRITING CHALLENGEDAY 24. - TOURIST

The old train station had become a tourist trap. For hundreds of people, all year around, they would be escorted on tours, shown the battered engine sheds, walked alongside the rusted tracks, and have their photographs taken next to the engines in various states of disrepair. Their smiles would be plastered on - happy memories to show family and friends back home. None of them saw the old conductor beside them.
David Rates had been a first-rate conductor in his time. Over the years, he earned the title of 'Employee of the Month' several times over. He had shining eyes, an honest smile, a cheerful disposition. He had been working on the railway since he was a boy of ten, and by the time he was forty-nine, he had gained the trust of workers and loyal customers alike.
David Rates had a dark side that nobody knew about. When things went missing from the luggage racks, passengers belongings and even the staff rooms, he was never suspected. Nobody would have thought that the smartly dressed man would have done anything of the sort.
A week or so later, newspaper articles would show the victim of theft, but theft wasn't what the reporters focused upon. Murder was the hot topic. There would be no consistency though, apart from they had all been passengers who had left and returned on the Rickland Express.
David Rates had been clumsy. He had been caught, and he had also made the decision to take his old life. They had found his body hanging in the Rickland Express engine shed.
The stories say that David Rates haunts the station, looking after it as it fell into disrepair. As much as he loved killing, he loved his trains more so.
COPYRIGHT - ZOE ADAMS (2014)
Currently reading: A Feast For Crows by George R. R. Martin
Published on June 24, 2014 14:09
June 23, 2014
The Tales of the Fairy Anthology
To all who are reading this,
Today is a blog to celebrate the latest Crushing Hearts and Black Butterfly anthology release - Tales of the Fairy. A collection of fairy tales, but not as you may know them. The Light and the Dark are here to walk the passages of your mind, to make you question your thoughts. My short story, 'Wings of a Butterfly' s featured in it too, and whilst it isn't my first Crushing Hearts and Black Butterfly anthology submission, it was my first foray into the Fae world, something I had wanted to do for a while.
This anthology is already proving popular and has ranked in categories since it's release on the 21st June. You can find it on Amazon - click this SMARTURL and you will be taken to your designated Amazon site for purchase.
What is the Tales of the Fairy anthology though? That's what I hear you ask. Well...
Step into the realm of the fairies, where darkness and light come together to create a world full of mischief and magic. A place where pixie dust and brownie favors are often counter balanced by the sinister temptations and mad schemes of the darker side. Here, you can chose to walk with the heroes or be carried away by the fairy lover of your dreams. Just be careful not to fall too deeply, you may never come home.
In this collection, ten talented authors have come together to bring you sixteen fantastical stories of the lighter and darker sides of the fae. The product of this collaboration is an incredible journey into a world that will whisk the reader away on gilded wings, but might not let them go.
Featuring:
Day of the Fairy contributors:
- Bellafina by Shannon Eckrich
- Bringer of Light by Cecilia Clark
- A Bird in Hand by Shebat Legion
- Broken by Catherine Stovall
- Mischief and Magic by Mariana Thorn
- Champion of the Forest by Lillie J. Roberts
- FM by Andrea L. Staum
- Fairy Rules by Lexi Ostrow
Night of the Fairy contributors:
- Soul Seeker by Shannon Eckrich
- Finding Us by Cecilia Clark
- Saltwater by Shebat Legion
- We Danced by Catherine Stovall
- Wings of a Butterfly by Zoe Adams
- Don't Let Go by K. R. Wilburn
- Keeper of the First Book by Andrea L. Staum
- Darkness Rules by Lexi Ostrow
Will you be tempted by the light? Will you be tempted by the dark? Time will surely tell, but be careful, for it moves differently in the land of the Fae...
Yours, with eternal ink,
Zoe
---
Currently reading: The Ballerina and the Revolutionary by Milla V
Today is a blog to celebrate the latest Crushing Hearts and Black Butterfly anthology release - Tales of the Fairy. A collection of fairy tales, but not as you may know them. The Light and the Dark are here to walk the passages of your mind, to make you question your thoughts. My short story, 'Wings of a Butterfly' s featured in it too, and whilst it isn't my first Crushing Hearts and Black Butterfly anthology submission, it was my first foray into the Fae world, something I had wanted to do for a while.
This anthology is already proving popular and has ranked in categories since it's release on the 21st June. You can find it on Amazon - click this SMARTURL and you will be taken to your designated Amazon site for purchase.
What is the Tales of the Fairy anthology though? That's what I hear you ask. Well...

In this collection, ten talented authors have come together to bring you sixteen fantastical stories of the lighter and darker sides of the fae. The product of this collaboration is an incredible journey into a world that will whisk the reader away on gilded wings, but might not let them go.
Featuring:
Day of the Fairy contributors:
- Bellafina by Shannon Eckrich
- Bringer of Light by Cecilia Clark
- A Bird in Hand by Shebat Legion
- Broken by Catherine Stovall
- Mischief and Magic by Mariana Thorn
- Champion of the Forest by Lillie J. Roberts
- FM by Andrea L. Staum
- Fairy Rules by Lexi Ostrow
Night of the Fairy contributors:
- Soul Seeker by Shannon Eckrich
- Finding Us by Cecilia Clark
- Saltwater by Shebat Legion
- We Danced by Catherine Stovall
- Wings of a Butterfly by Zoe Adams
- Don't Let Go by K. R. Wilburn
- Keeper of the First Book by Andrea L. Staum
- Darkness Rules by Lexi Ostrow
Will you be tempted by the light? Will you be tempted by the dark? Time will surely tell, but be careful, for it moves differently in the land of the Fae...
Yours, with eternal ink,
Zoe
---
Currently reading: The Ballerina and the Revolutionary by Milla V
Published on June 23, 2014 14:10
The Tales of the Fairy Anthology
To all who are reading this,
Today is a blog to celebrate the latest Crushing Hearts and Black Butterfly anthology release - Tales of the Fairy. A collection of fairy tales, but not as you may know them. The Light and the Dark are here to walk the passages of your mind, to make you question your thoughts. My short story, 'Wings of a Butterfly' s featured in it too, and whilst it isn't my first Crushing Hearts and Black Butterfly anthology submission, it was my first foray into the Fae world, something I had wanted to do for a while.
This anthology is already proving popular and has ranked in categories since it's release on the 21st June. You can find it on Amazon - click this SMARTURL and you will be taken to your designated Amazon site for purchase.
What is the Tales of the Fairy anthology though? That's what I hear you ask. Well...
Step into the realm of the fairies, where darkness and light come together to create a world full of mischief and magic. A place where pixie dust and brownie favors are often counter balanced by the sinister temptations and mad schemes of the darker side. Here, you can chose to walk with the heroes or be carried away by the fairy lover of your dreams. Just be careful not to fall too deeply, you may never come home.
In this collection, ten talented authors have come together to bring you sixteen fantastical stories of the lighter and darker sides of the fae. The product of this collaboration is an incredible journey into a world that will whisk the reader away on gilded wings, but might not let them go.
Featuring:
Day of the Fairy contributors:
- Bellafina by Shannon Eckrich
- Bringer of Light by Cecilia Clark
- A Bird in Hand by Shebat Legion
- Broken by Catherine Stovall
- Mischief and Magic by Mariana Thorn
- Champion of the Forest by Lillie J. Roberts
- FM by Andrea L. Staum
- Fairy Rules by Lexi Ostrow
Night of the Fairy contributors:
- Soul Seeker by Shannon Eckrich
- Finding Us by Cecilia Clark
- Saltwater by Shebat Legion
- We Danced by Catherine Stovall
- Wings of a Butterfly by Zoe Adams
- Don't Let Go by K. R. Wilburn
- Keeper of the First Book by Andrea L. Staum
- Darkness Rules by Lexi Ostrow
Will you be tempted by the light? Will you be tempted by the dark? Time will surely tell, but be careful, for it moves differently in the land of the Fae...
Yours, with eternal ink,
Zoe
---
Currently reading: The Ballerina and the Revolutionary by Milla V
Today is a blog to celebrate the latest Crushing Hearts and Black Butterfly anthology release - Tales of the Fairy. A collection of fairy tales, but not as you may know them. The Light and the Dark are here to walk the passages of your mind, to make you question your thoughts. My short story, 'Wings of a Butterfly' s featured in it too, and whilst it isn't my first Crushing Hearts and Black Butterfly anthology submission, it was my first foray into the Fae world, something I had wanted to do for a while.
This anthology is already proving popular and has ranked in categories since it's release on the 21st June. You can find it on Amazon - click this SMARTURL and you will be taken to your designated Amazon site for purchase.
What is the Tales of the Fairy anthology though? That's what I hear you ask. Well...

In this collection, ten talented authors have come together to bring you sixteen fantastical stories of the lighter and darker sides of the fae. The product of this collaboration is an incredible journey into a world that will whisk the reader away on gilded wings, but might not let them go.
Featuring:
Day of the Fairy contributors:
- Bellafina by Shannon Eckrich
- Bringer of Light by Cecilia Clark
- A Bird in Hand by Shebat Legion
- Broken by Catherine Stovall
- Mischief and Magic by Mariana Thorn
- Champion of the Forest by Lillie J. Roberts
- FM by Andrea L. Staum
- Fairy Rules by Lexi Ostrow
Night of the Fairy contributors:
- Soul Seeker by Shannon Eckrich
- Finding Us by Cecilia Clark
- Saltwater by Shebat Legion
- We Danced by Catherine Stovall
- Wings of a Butterfly by Zoe Adams
- Don't Let Go by K. R. Wilburn
- Keeper of the First Book by Andrea L. Staum
- Darkness Rules by Lexi Ostrow
Will you be tempted by the light? Will you be tempted by the dark? Time will surely tell, but be careful, for it moves differently in the land of the Fae...
Yours, with eternal ink,
Zoe
---
Currently reading: The Ballerina and the Revolutionary by Milla V
Published on June 23, 2014 14:10
Writing Challenge - Day 23
To all who are reading this,
Another Monday is upon us. They are bittersweet, aren't they? It means you have to wake a little earlier than you had the previous day, look smart instead of comfortable in whatever your comfortable clothes are, and drag yourself into the day job. It's been a crazy day indeed, but we're still alive from it!
Here is the twenty-third piece of fiction!
Yours, with eternal ink,
Zoe
---
JUNE PROMPTS YOU TO... WRITING CHALLENGEDAY 23. - HOLLOW

"My condolences." She heard that a lot these past few weeks. Everywhere she went, those words seemed to follow her. Guests at her home, her family and friends, the local supermarket, the florist, the church. Even her beautician had said those words, and she was a bright young thing, with fake tanned skin, and blonde extensions in her hair.
Nancy was sick of those words. Very few of those people actually meant it. Most of them said it out of politeness and tradition. As Nancy stood at the bar, a wine glass in her hand, still more people said it. She ut on a thin smile, nodded her thanks, and returned to her business.
Oscar's funeral was filled with his friends. They crowded around a table, their heads bent low over their pints, murmuring words. Nancy knew in reality they were upset that they were missing their Sunday league football game and a bacon sandwich, and she could see their fingers itching to tap out status updates on their mobile phones and upload them to Facebook.
The younger crowd, the sons and daughters of the mourners, had clustered together. There was no way they were talking about school work, and she watched one of the older boys write something on a coaster and push it to the girl with the black floral headband. She grinned, slipped it in her satchel and mimed, "Call me."
Nancy should be upset, she knew she should be. It was her husband of six years that they had buried today. He had suffered a major heart attack and died before she had even had time to call the paramedics. And it was all her fault.
He never paid her any attention. Not any more. He was more interested in reliving his youth with his sad middle aged friends, and going to the pub. He didn't want to help her with anything, or eat home prepared dinner with her. He didn't want to converse with her. And his lack of interest in sex was another thing altogether.
And then she had found out his lies. She had found out that he had a mistress. She had found out that his footballing trips and business weekends with the boys, and work, had been nothing but sordid little dirty weekends. Marcy - even her name was horrible - was using him, and he just couldn't see it.
So Nancy had called him out on it, shouted a bit, and stood and watched as her husband died before her eyes. When he lay on the living room floor, still and stiff, Nancy had made herself a cup of coffee, had a cigarette, and finally rung for an ambulance, pulling out all the stops to make them believe she was a grieving housewife.
In reality, she was a hollow, horror show of a woman. An egg without a yolk, a chocolate figure with a centre. A woman without feeling.
COPYRIGHT - ZOE ADAMS (2014)
Currently reading: The Ballerina and the Revolutionary by Milla V
Another Monday is upon us. They are bittersweet, aren't they? It means you have to wake a little earlier than you had the previous day, look smart instead of comfortable in whatever your comfortable clothes are, and drag yourself into the day job. It's been a crazy day indeed, but we're still alive from it!
Here is the twenty-third piece of fiction!
Yours, with eternal ink,
Zoe
---
JUNE PROMPTS YOU TO... WRITING CHALLENGEDAY 23. - HOLLOW

"My condolences." She heard that a lot these past few weeks. Everywhere she went, those words seemed to follow her. Guests at her home, her family and friends, the local supermarket, the florist, the church. Even her beautician had said those words, and she was a bright young thing, with fake tanned skin, and blonde extensions in her hair.
Nancy was sick of those words. Very few of those people actually meant it. Most of them said it out of politeness and tradition. As Nancy stood at the bar, a wine glass in her hand, still more people said it. She ut on a thin smile, nodded her thanks, and returned to her business.
Oscar's funeral was filled with his friends. They crowded around a table, their heads bent low over their pints, murmuring words. Nancy knew in reality they were upset that they were missing their Sunday league football game and a bacon sandwich, and she could see their fingers itching to tap out status updates on their mobile phones and upload them to Facebook.
The younger crowd, the sons and daughters of the mourners, had clustered together. There was no way they were talking about school work, and she watched one of the older boys write something on a coaster and push it to the girl with the black floral headband. She grinned, slipped it in her satchel and mimed, "Call me."
Nancy should be upset, she knew she should be. It was her husband of six years that they had buried today. He had suffered a major heart attack and died before she had even had time to call the paramedics. And it was all her fault.
He never paid her any attention. Not any more. He was more interested in reliving his youth with his sad middle aged friends, and going to the pub. He didn't want to help her with anything, or eat home prepared dinner with her. He didn't want to converse with her. And his lack of interest in sex was another thing altogether.
And then she had found out his lies. She had found out that he had a mistress. She had found out that his footballing trips and business weekends with the boys, and work, had been nothing but sordid little dirty weekends. Marcy - even her name was horrible - was using him, and he just couldn't see it.
So Nancy had called him out on it, shouted a bit, and stood and watched as her husband died before her eyes. When he lay on the living room floor, still and stiff, Nancy had made herself a cup of coffee, had a cigarette, and finally rung for an ambulance, pulling out all the stops to make them believe she was a grieving housewife.
In reality, she was a hollow, horror show of a woman. An egg without a yolk, a chocolate figure with a centre. A woman without feeling.
COPYRIGHT - ZOE ADAMS (2014)
Currently reading: The Ballerina and the Revolutionary by Milla V
Published on June 23, 2014 13:42